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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-25 (C)
she throw cake on manik face.. but manik bent down.. nd cake hit on cabir head.. cabir face was worth watching.. everyone start laughing lyk maniac.. but dhruv was laughing lyk anything.. cabir didn't waste a second.. he took the remaining parts of cake.. nd throw it on dhruv face.. manik luk up.. nd saw cabir face then dhruv he too burst into laughter.. he thought feww I'm saved.. but nandani was standing behind his back.. holding pastries in her hands.. she pat on his back.. manik turn around.. before he could understand anything his face is covered with pastries.. .. manik just stand there lyk statue for few seconds.. e everyone who was present there in hotel.. including there friends burst into laughter..nandani ran from there.. manik too ran behind her holding.. remain of pastries in his hands.. they were running around there table LYK rat nd cat.. people were laughing seeing them lyk that.. both of there friends throwing food at each other in fun way.. nd enjoying alot.. manik grabs nandani hand.. and pull her too him.. nandani bangs in his chest.. both were lost in each other eyes.. manik one hand is on her back.. nd other hand which is full with cream.. unknowingly start moving to her face.. nd place it on.her syd cheek... nandani unknowingly put her hand on his injured arm.. nd press it..manik- ouchh... both cum back to senses.. nd move away from each other.. both luk in opposite direction..
mean while manager cum.. there
.. nd told al of them to leave from there.. as they ar disturbing others..
they paid there Bill nd leave from there

precap- well that's a surprise :P




(sorry for the chotusa update) :/
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaketi

Such a cute update

cake fight awww
cont soon


thanku :)
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Excel00703

Hai mein marjava yeh story mast hai continue soon and pm me


hehe.. thanku..
ok dear do send mee buddy rqst
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late reply. Just read the last 5 parts.
Manan meeting in nandini's house.
Then Alvira and Cabir's mission
Then the theatre drama
And finally the cake fight.
It was awesome and loved the updates
And the person coming to India for 3 months. Waiting to know about her
Cont soon
And pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
shooo cute update juat loved it
plzzz chotu se update long kardo I'm dying to read further
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg cute fight so tempting really loved it. Can't wait for surprise continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-26
nandani was sitting with her friends in her car.. they were
talking..with each other but she didn't pay any interest in there..talks..
nandani was lost in her own thoughts.. she was
thinking abt manik.. nd was smiling ..then her face
expressions change into sad one.. she bcm sad.. as she
remember manik was in pain.. all bcz of her... with in few
minutes they reached Home.. all were already present in living
area.. veer tanu alvira join them.. badepapa calls
nandu.. nandu was lost in her own thoughts.. she just
ran upstairs.. everyone notice this..
jai- now days she start behaving so strangely.. one
moment happy next moment she is lost in her own
thoughts
puja-May be she is stressed thats why
Chachi- no,i don't think she is stressed..
namrata- yup.. same here.. I think she is worried abt
sumthing..
alvira was listening to everyone.. but in her mind she
was thinking..
alvira- I knw she is behaving lyk this bcz of manik but
why..
she msged cabir..who just reached home..
cabir check his ph nd replied to her
cabir- HEY Charlie wassup..
alvira- nothing just yuhi.. do tell mee subject ka
behaviour kaisa hai
cabir luk at manik who was happily talking with navya..
cabir- subject is luking super happy..
kyun kya hua..
alvira- nothing.. ok bye
at night nandani again refused to have dinner.. she told
namrata.. she is not feeling hungry.. she is feeling
sleepy.. namrta didnt listen to her.. nd feed her with her
own hands..then wish her good night.. nd leave from
her room.. at NIGHT chacha cums to her room.. nd
check her if she is ok.. nandani pretends she is
sleeping.. nd wait.. for sumtym..she thought everyone is
sleeping.. she took frst aid box.. from living area..
without making any sound she leaves from there..
AT MANIK HOUSE..
manik was sleeping peacefully on syd of his bed.. when
he hear sum movements inside his blanket..he thought
might be a thief.. he open his eyes without making any
noise took.. vase from syd table.. nd remove the
blanket.. he was abt to hit the thief.. but was shocked
after seeing thief face.. it was nandani.. she is in her
night dress.. holding ointment in one hand.. other hand
is on her eyes.. she was looking scared..
manik- tum.. tum yaha kya kr rhi ho
nandani removes her hand from her eyes nd try to
speak..
nandani- wo mai
manik- forget it yaha kya kr rhi ho.. tell mee yaha ayi
kaise..
nandani- made a cute face nd innocently told him
nandani tumhare room ki window say..
manik was hell shocked
manik- what.. pr kyun he angrily asked her..
nandani showed him ointment yeh lgane
manik anger melts.. nd smile curved on his lips..
manik- don't tell mee tum ointment lgane k liye.. al the
way apne ghr say yaha ayi,ho..
nandani- nods her head.. actually I want to say sorry
too..mere wajh say u got hurt..
she luks down on floor..
manik notice this she is feeling guilty..
just to cheer her up he said..
manik- don't feel sorry nandu.. u didn't do it
purposely.. to don't feel bad
nandani- really..
she look at his face
manik- yes.. achha chalo jis kaam k liye ayi ho lets do
it..
nandani- what??
manik- pointed his finger at ointment
nandani- ohh haa.. she happily start applying on his
arm
manik- was lost watching her face..
nandani- done..
manik- cum back to his senses..
manik- waise nandu ghr bta kr to ayi hona..
nandani- happily no
manik shocked what.. don't tell mee u cum al the way
al alone.
nandani- nodes yes
manik- super angry.. ar u mad.. they must be worried
abt u..
nd itni raat ko akele Ana is nt safe..
nandani try to calm him down..
relax manik I'm nt doing this for frst tym.. so chill..
manik - is scared for her.thinking what can be happen if
she got into trouble. nd there she, is giving see I'm so
cool looks..
manik-(angry)- whatever don't do that again ok..
nandani- ok relax..
she thought now I should leave for home..so she
standup from bed.. nd was abt to go.. manik pulled her
back.. she end up sitting in his lap.. her hairs was fling
on manik face,.. both realise there position.. felt
awkward.. she remove her hairs from his face.. nd got
up from his lap.. manik - too get up from bed..
nandani- now what..
manik- what do u think ur going
nandani- obviously ghr..
manik- no.. I won't let u go home alone this tym..
nandani- don't tell mee tum mujhe chodne jaoge.. I'm
nt a small kid.. I can manage..
manik-shut up nandani..
nandani- ur nt going to drop New home.. waise bhi ur
arm is injured u can't drive..
manik- I can
nandani- no u can't.. if u try.. I will never listen to u
ever again..
manik- helplessly - ok fine.. but that doesn't mean I
will let u go alone
ur going to stay here..
nandani- shocked - what
manik- yes - in my room.. bcz I don't want anyone to
see u here.. nd start questioning mee with there stupid
questions.. so ur going to stay in my room..
nandani till the tym understood he is stubborn so she
agreed..
precap- nandani manik sleeping together on same bed :p
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART -27
nandani- ok mr monster..but I'm going to sleep on
bed..
manik- ohh hello thats my bed
nandani- so what mujhe bs bed pr neend ati hai..
manik- ha mujhe to jaise fan k upper baith k neend ati
hai
nandani- I don't knw anything I'm going to sleep on..
bed
manik- no u sleep on couch.. i'm going to sleep here..
nandani- no mai
manik - shut up nandani.. luk at ur height ur small..
chotu si.. u can fit there.. nd I'm taller than u.. I can
sleep here..comfortably..
nandani- whatever I'm nt going to sleep on that couch..
with this she.. sit on one syd of bed..
manik- ok fine mai bhi ni jara.he sat on other syd of
bed..
both together - shout angrily - fyn..
nandani arrange sum cushions between them..
nd luk at manik..
nandani- this is my syd..nd that is ur syd.. don't u dare
try to cum on this syd..
manik- u too don't cum on this syd ok
nandani- ok
manik was already feeling sleepy so he slept with in few
minutes.. nandani too slept covering her face with bed
sheet. clock strikes 3 am..manik opens his eyes.. as he
felt sum weight on his legs.. he luk at his legs.. nandani
one leg is on him.. another one is still on bed.. he
slowly remove her leg from him.. nd again close his
eyes. after 15 minutes he again feel sum w8t on his
chest.. he open his eyes.. this tym nandani arms were
resting on him.. he put his hand on his forehead .. he
again sum how manage to remove her arms from
him..he again close his eyes try to sleep.. he again open
his eyes as he hear sum movements.. he luk at nandani
who was abt to fall from.. bed.. he pulled his hair.. nd
thought ''musibat hai yeh ladki bhi.. din mai jeene ni
deti raat ko sone ni deti.. kaha fass gya mai " he sum
how manage to put her back on bed..
he was abt to sleep.. when again nandani put her leg
on him.. nd her arms on his chest.. nd her head on his
shoulder...
manik- sach mai chudail hai.. he then look at her face
she is sleeping lyk a cute baby.. na chudail nhi pari..
he,smiles.. and try to sleep in that position..
next morning..
nandani woke up early in the morning.. nd saw her legs
on manik.. manik hands on his waist.. her arms around
his shoulders.. she shyly smile luking at manik.. she
tried to move out from bed without disturbing manik
sleep.. but manik put his legs on her thighs.. she
unknowingly kissed him on his cheeks..she softly put
his hands back on him.. nd remove his legs from her..
nd leave for her house without making any noise..
manik- woke up at around 10 am..
nd notice where is she.. kahi use kisine dekh to ni liya..
he move out from his bed.. nd rushed outsyd.. nd saw
everyone is there expect nandani.. he sighed..
navya saw him nd told him to get ready..
he luks here nd there cabir notice his restlessness nd
asked him what happen.. but he said nothing.. nd cum
back to his room.. with long face.. he thought to call
her.. but than another thought cum to his mind that she
might be busy.. so he just msg her.
precap- msg chat :P

stay tunned more fun is on the way
(note- enjoy reading 2 parts nd do cmnts nd give sum nyc suggestions.. ok bye :P)


Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaroge

Dude this is super funny

I so wish if this could happen in the show the great food fight



yeah I wish the same
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Just finished reading all the chps in one day...this ff ia superb

Amzingg concept...loved it
Nandu's new avtar... her attitude,style n her fights with manik haha too good
Manan cute little fights.. n thn their concern n care for each other... manik first meeting was too good...n thn aftr so many argues they becm frnds...but they nvr stop fighting with each other...cabir n alvira two shippers of them...great
During lunch time manan fighting in front of everyone soo madly haha...best part n now nandu throw cake on manik's face...
Eagerly waiting for nxt update
Continue soon
Ur writing skills r too good...u r a superbb writer



thanku so much :D
nd next parts updated enjoy reading :D

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