FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE {index-page-13} - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel_manan

Very nice update.
Can i post your story on my fb page with ur name. If u give ur fb link then i also tag u evry part of your ff. Please reply.


sure dear.. I don't have any problem with that.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kirankusum

Very nice update
It is just amazing
Read all the parts in one go
It was just superb dear
And do accept my buddy request
Do pm me if possible and continue soon
Plz dear


thanku so much
plz send mee rqst..
yup I'm working on next part :)
thanks once again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel98

Nyc... very romantic...
Plz accept my buddy request and do pm me...
Lots of love...
Aarohi...


thanku send mee rqst.. ok dear I'll try
:) thanku so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: HTA111

Omg you have killed it awesome update continue soon how he is going to manage to stay away from her when he just can't



haha :P wo to shyad manik ko bhi ni pta usse ho he ni para :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

Haha! You're story is on a roll!! Loved it!! Continue soon :D



thanku :D
yup.. thodi corrections rehti hai.. then I'll update it!!
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunset17

Plz update d next part...


ok dear :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-25 (a)
Cabir was trying to open car.. every one is busy in there own discussions.. nandani got a chance.. she pulled manik to a corner nd start questioning him..
nandani-manik tum yaha kya kr re ho.. tumko movie dekhne k liye yeahi Ana tha.ana tha to ana.. mere sath wali seat pr he baithna tha.huh
manik- listen nandani
nandani- ohh itna sb co incidence nhi ho sakta.. bolo..bolo
manik-nandani mere baat to suno..
nandani didn't let him speak
nandani- haww kahi tum uske chakkar mai to ni ho
manik- confusingly kiske chakkar mai
nandani- wahi to keah ri hu kiss k chakkar mai :P
manik.. who is understanding what is she trying to say.. now start getting lil angry :P
manik- kya kisske
nandani- Abe gadhe kiss.. (she showed him with her lips)
manik now understood what she actually trying to say..
manik- (angry)dekho nandani
nandani- haww ab dekhu bhi
manik is now totally irritate frustrate with her bakbak..
he put his hands on her mouth,to shut her mouth
manik-kitna bolti ho yr..tum chup..
nandani with eyes told him to remove his hand..
manik- removes his hand luks in opposite direction..
nandani close her eyes nd took a deep breath..
bolo ab
manik- embarrasly I don't knw tum bhi ho yaha ok nd
neither I knw tum waha baithi thi ok nor I'm interested in kissing u..
nandani raise her eyebrow - achha ur nt interested na.. manik,turns,his,back to,her.. nandani pat on,his,shoulder ab mere pass bhi mt ana.. she is irritated by his behaviour..
manik- ha to mai kaunsa mar ra,hu,tumhare pass ane k liye he .. huh
nd there our jasoos tango Charlie.. watching this.. from far.. cabir put his hand on alvira shoulder..
cabir- dekha
alvira- frse
both together- hmmm
nandani notice sum scratches on his hand she is feeling guilty
she want to say sorry,to him but before she cud say
anything cabir call him..
cabir Abbey manik wahi khade khade batien karega kya..chl ab..
manik throw angry glares on him and
they both start walking to there respective cars.. ND notice both cars is
full in one car cabir is sitting on driving seat navya is
sitting beside him and at back dhruv alia nd tanu.. tanu
alia both ar fashion freaks nd discussing abt clothes so
they both ar seating together..
nd in second car veer is sitting on driving seat alvira is
sitting besides him.. mukti on back seat.. no oother
option left so they have to sit together..in same car
veer start driving..
NANDANI gaze is fix on manik arm.. veer is driving so
alvira is feeding him with her own hands.. manik is
embarrassed.. looking at them.. he luk at nandani
whose gaze is still on his hands.. suddenly there
hand touch.. both blush unknowingly.. then remember there last encounter.. they recalled there words.. no touching no kissing.. they awkwardly
removes there hand..from each other..
with in few minutes they reach hotel.. everyone cums out from car.. nd read hotel name plate
nd walks in..
they took there seats.. meanwhile waiter cums nd took there order..they again start talking..

to be continued..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome...plzzz continue soon
nice update
continue soon with next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...want more manan scene...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too cute continue soon really loved nandani the way she is asking him about the kiss and he was so confused
Too good can't wait
Edited by HTA111 - 10 years ago

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