Destiny will do its work note on pg 26(pls read)

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Amazing one..
Continue soon...
I like that clif part very much...
I wish tv mein bhi yeh scene ho to get rid of this pandit faisco...

I want that terrace scene of manan in which manik came back from warrior high...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

lovely update...his idea to get her to yell out her fears is fantastic... and so is their growing closeness... one of my fave manan scenes that you might be able 2 include in this is their convo after dhruv accusation... his words and the forehead touch...

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

fab update

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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Karry

@karryd

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

lovely idea of cliff...and nw in manan scene i would like dance scene..as manik have any party for his company nd there manik ask nandini to come with her nd meeting of r murthy nd nandini murthy.

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sm.mintu

@sm.mintu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

awesome update.. im loving it, padhne ka shok ni h fir bhi ise padh k interest aa rha h.. relation achha h, boss nd nandini.. lets c what happens nxt..

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

awesome part
loved it
especially the clif scene was beautiful...some times these kind of ideas can create magic
u penned it so beautifully
waiting to read more
take care
thanks a lot for the pm