MANAN LOVE IN TIME WITH U. Plot page 3

jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1





PREVIEW






was it real
were we real
dream...fantasy was it ...its hurt a lot ...
that why its love na it was pure and sweet
but pain i never ask for...why me why u left me
our love
our time
stupid me ...stupid heart ...who fall for u but
it cant change that our love was true u were with me for a while but it look enternly ...

That the only thought flloat in her mind as she stand staring the sea ends at infinity and aside the city in light.Mumbai the city of dreams and passion it was but then also it felt hollow as he took away the urge to live joy the smile everything as he was the only thing she now pray for
HOw was she before meeting him full of question , ever logic in everything ,facts founds were in mind but the moment as meet him it stop the world stop.
Love the feel make live a thousand time but love make a person strong but why our love make me weak ...why ,...
Meeting him was fairytale and he was a prince a real prince charming and he did make the time worth to live like years but only regret left that
u r not here to see my smile so it vanish
u r not here t sooth my wound so feel no pain
Months days we spent just just once more ...

The entry of car through the gates snapped her out of her thought 'and she saw mukti and her friend getting off the car .she sigh and again look at the sea and the city lights ahead .
Standing in the balcony staring at the infinite distance do nothing good but leave blankness as it said silence is good .blowing her hair the cold breeze just pass away but the coldness in heart remain unaffacted .
She felt someone gaze on her she as much want to ignore it she look towards it but found only two peole walking inside .
So she to walk inside the room .it was a a beautiful room decorated as per her likes but it is all she least care now she kneel down near the table and watch SHINEE scratching the little wood piece .it is the only thing which make her believe he did exist in her life he was real they were real the love was real too ...
How much she ignore she could not escape from his thought
The ever sensible NANDINI VARDHAN fall deely in love with a mirage of guy who doesnt even exist in her time but their is a hope for him being alive not here sonewhere in other time period but if it could he has to live...somwhere if he could that she really want.


  • CHAPTER 1...page1
  • CHAPTER 2...page 2
  • CHAPTER 3...page3
  • Plot page3
  • CHAPTER 4
  • CHAPTER 5
  • CHAPTER 6
  • CHAPTER 7
  • CHAPTER 8
  • CHAPTER 9
  • CHAPTER 10
  • CHAPTER 11
  • CHAPTER 12
  • CHAPTER 13
  • CHAPTER 14
  • CHAPTER 15














Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

16

Views

8.8k

Users

7

Likes

83

Frequent Posters

jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Nandini Vardhan A girl from manglore she was different from the person in present .as after losing the love she has for someone make her isolated and gloomy .No one know about him except her bestfriend but still the guy came in dash and disappear in air t still hold a secret


Abhimanyu Sinha-Recently in Us for rishabh treatment and foreigh exchange programe .KNow about nandini situation
Mukti Vardhan - nandini cousin in mumbai.Not so intersted in her loves her friend a lot ...

Manik Malhotra - lead of Fab5 loves his friend a lot recently out of coma after being involved in an accident months ago
Alya druv cabir same...
Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
aarohi_angel98 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Continue soon... pm me if u can...
jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4

CROSS WORLD LOVERS



''silence huh ...Still Alive or died '' mukti ask her mother taking her aside from her friends
Mukti '' her mother was quite upset from her way of talking specially about nandini
''come on mom its been two days she is here but all she do is stare or stay close in her room thats so unlike her ''
''u miss her '' sapna ask as she know how much she behave un affected or unattached nandini silent do affect her even she also misses the bubbly girl but now all was gloomy no one know what happen ...to the ever smiling girl
''No ways never mom '' mukti exclaimed which brought sapna out of her thought
fine but don't borther her ''sapna said and turn to go '' and ya arrangment is done at the poolside so no loud noise here... let her rest ok '' she said and left to instruct servant for dinner
whats up yaar'' cabir came from behind and ask her '' why so serious''
nothing just happy he is diischard now 'lets go and pepare for his arrival finally he is back'' mukti tangleher hand on cabir shoulder but not before glancing a finall look upstair at the room ...

THey went back to arrangment as it was a big day for them THEIR Soul ,HERO < BEST FRIEND is now fully recover from Coma and finally dischard from the hospital to THEIR liFE and FAB5 Life MANIK MALHOTRA.They decided to celebrate at mukti house as manik was not intersted to go to his witch mom house as they call NYONIKA MALHOTRA
Druv and manik come ut of the car druv park the car while maik look around as his eyes struck to the dazzling scene of a girl somehow look familar lost in deep thoughts standing in balcony but her face was not vsible as her hairs were hiding it she was so lost not n the view but in her thoughts as she stand like a statue on the same spot it was so unique as the moon light was falling clearly on her...
Druv tap him and took him inside the house to meet his friends ...

...
FLASHBACK DREAM
Scene 1
Two peole walking hand in hand in side the jungle as the stairs lay down the way passing the trees
''why are we going so down and deep today huh are u sure about the way ''nandini ask following the guy
umm calm down angel just a little bit more'' he said as they came near a narrow lane hidden fom bushes and torn he romove them and le her ahead while he walk behind and close her eyes
'' why did u close my eyes ...pls tell na '' nandini ask as these was very suprising as when they meet he took her directly here and god kknows what he is uptoo.
patience my lady ...fruit of patience is always sweet '' he wispered in her ear making her shiver . she is damn sure how gentle men he behave he is such a playboy even with his manners
finallly here '' he said and remove his hands and the sight infront left her spellbound as never had she imagine the place to exist .butterflies ,,,,,,all around a fall in front of her as it appear from the middle of hlls water falling and lotus in the water below she could see as she stand on the height . It did crept a smile on her face.as she saw what she wished for...
She turn around and found him on his knees bendng his head and offering a stem of tree '' punish me for living u and also for reading ur personal wishes but i promise to fulfill all as i can ...how much i want to tell u that u mean everything to me doesnt matter the time nor the world but if u believe in my excitence and us i can defeat time to reach u

Really ...i can punish the heir of the kingdom ''Nandini ask him by putting the branch near his chin like a sword..and raising her head as he bow down which make her smile more'''wait a minute...no one know u here except me so what should ii do to make u pay for the torture i gone by missing u

.''anythng u want angle. the little sepration did convey that ur my heartbeat and soul for enternity '' he said .
she was spellbound and shebend down near and cupped his face and said '' u only u i want nothing matter nothing did ever matter '' as she hugged him and he to wrapped his arms around .butterflies hover around them as they sat their . they both smile as it was her wish come true and take picture with the digital camera as nandini explain him to hold it and click the button,...
He sat under the tree skeching the sight to capture the enternal glory of his ''angle''as she play with the butterfles with a flower crown on her head..
She came near him tired so sat near hi and lay a head on his shoulder and admire how perfect he is while a tug of jealeousy lay as she thought of beautiful girls maiden prasing him and flirting in his time ...
''done '' he said and putting the notebook in her bag .''
see it when i am gone ok as it would not disappear like the other gift ''ok he said hugging her side way
''dont go ''nandini said looking at his honey brown eyes
''he kept his one hand on shoulder and other one slding his fingures in hers with her ''' nor do i want to go to the world between the selfish people but have to go for princess niti ''.with a pause '' i cant let her sacrifice wasted she is the reason im here with u .i may not love her but as a friend her death should not be mouthed as shame as it was all political cospirancy which kill her for her peace ,our peace and as a farewll to her ...
i know u were here because of her and i m thankfull but afraid to if u doesnt come back like last time then '' she said with a teary eyes and sat straight right in front of him
''hey angle if love is strong na then time doesnt matter to make u live and admire everything positive way ''like mama says her patting his hands on her head
''mama 's boy but ...Parth'' .she began but he put fingure on her lips
''these mama's boy love u like crazy ok and destiny brought us together then we are meant together so be patience my angelic lady'' he sad putting their head together linging close in the moment ...
Nandini wake up with a jolt and look at the surrounding again to realise that was gone the time moment was gone being together and that was their last meeting ...until she got to know he doesnt exist not here nor their in different world his time...
She stand up and walk to the washroom looking into the mirror t was hard to recognise herself no tears as she promise him not to shed as hurts him seeing her in pain .But the face dull with gloomines
.she wash her face and came out wipping her face wth a white towel ..
Knock ..Knock
Sapna came inside '' u awake nandu come and eat something u look pale'' she said as she check her forhead for temprature
''chachi i wll just come in 10 minutes'' she said tring to put a smile .Her chachi know she is trying to be strong so she just nod and left pating her cheekas feeling relaxed as she will come out of room
Nandini kneel to Shinee cage and get him out and put in her lap '' i cant put other in my misery i will be strong and will live just to make for the dream as he want me to acheive .shinee he will be happy na so will smile but will...he see me smling as he want me to shinee always
Shinee to move to sooth her skin with fur as he miss him to while liking her fingure to insure nodding his head as he understand her pain



Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
update today not next part but some parts to explain the storyline
jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

PLOT
HOW IT STARTED

We open in 18th-century BRITISH COLONIAL PERIOD , with a cat meowing on a rooftop. Cat,
Inside royal garden a Guy and a girl were walking in the some path but a flower line was between them seprating them
The guy wore a high class black coat with white shirt blue velvet scarf in neck and boots he is son of rich administrative Governor PRITVI PARTH SAMTHAN
The girl to dress in royal outfit but as grey gown with blue shade in between hair neatly done as their curves fall till her waist but her face wa cover by half mask as her eyes could only be visible .she is PRINCESS NITI RAJSHREE TAYLOR

THE guy was living for abroad to meet his mother as she is sick .After completing his studies he came to Bombay to meet his father and here is He now came to manglore as his father has engaged him with his Official Friend Daughter . He was here to meet her but as his mother is sick he had to leave back
It was silence between them as they walk together yet apart .They have know each other n childhood as they were young before he left to england with his mother 's native place for further studies but now its
You wanna say somethng princess '' he ask turning to her
she hesitste but gave him a talisman '' for your safe journey pls keep it close its a request ''
''sure '' he said took it kept in his jacket pocket as he walk towards the carriage and stop '' look like something bothering you '' he said looking at her hands as she a was playing with her fingures as gloves were their in her hand
''yes i do ...but after you came back hope u dont mindto wait till then '' she said bowing her head sure princess
He sat in and left as he was much worried for his mother sudden fall in health that he didnt notice the princess still standing their...
1 MONTH LATER

He stirs and finds himself covered with sweat as he sat alone in bed and so a shadow passes by and he walk to see and ensure who is outside. Its silent finds no response from anybody.Its been 2 days he come back and also the princess disappear without a trance he was informed as soon as he arrived...
This is a dangerous sign " royals are never left unattended nor alone" and he was alarmed as something did happen . A SERVANT arrives and delivers bad news.that they tried but could not find her .Rummours spread of her diappearance but he was worried and confuse as what where she is and what she want to tell him...


He came out of his chamber..
Guards everywhere and through the estate he came out in lose white shirt and black pants with boots coming to a halt by a pond where a princess was last seen . He walk over the bridge and found a cloth with flowers and butterfly sweded by hands it was her {NITI]he rembered well but .suddenly he something as the butterfly came to life and shine as the moon light fall on it andexact moment that the moon is eclipsed ..suddenly smething amed him with imunse pain in his arm as it was an arrow shoot to rip his chest but as h e move it am his shoulder and he toofalls into the pond, too...as some one push him in the water as his body sink down ...

We get a glimpse of the princess's body floating in the water, and then it's joined/superimposed with a man himself

Scene1...
We skip backward in time to childhood, as it was happy time with his parents as he sat on his father lap when PARTH was asked by his father what kind of girl he would like to marry. He had answered that he wanted a pretty face, so that he'd want to look at her every day. .


SCENE 2...
His mother ask him a riddle when he told her about his engagement .She was upset as for his father decision he was marrying but was not in love as she want him to experience the beautiful feeling and learn to be happy with someone and know power of love...
''What dies despite living, and lives despite dying? ''She ask him PARTH laughs prettily about not knowing the answer.
...
.
2015
MANGLORE
Beautiful green land garden attached to as lamp post in between garden with green shrubs in between with a river floating and large estate of trees could be seen .Two people are their a man in 40s and a young guy in eaarly 20s
Modern-day [PARTH] as MANIK MALHOTRA in this life is talking about a site his father transfored to him recently with the manager MR MEHRA explaning the area to him as he is in manglore to sigh documents for their new project " MANIK in this life Seeing a butterfly,passes by him reaches ahead which draws his attention to the girl in the distance:dressed in White full net sleve top and white skirt and with a brown waist chain with colourful beads on side tied on her waist adored with silver jhumkas shining due to sun rays and hands adored with silver bangles in one hands giving a indian touch to her innocent face and with other hands she was holding ballons .which were moving with the air same with her hairs long and black floating .Thats NANDINI VARDHAN all know her as but Nandu di for the kindos...
she waves her hands and calls out in his direction .as he thought it was him but soon some kids pass by him calling her di as she was calling the kids who were playing in the playground to ran to a girl with ballonns , Kids run to her she and kneel down as she gave one balloon each to the kids and as the same butterfly pass her to but sat on her empty hands and she smile a sweet smile trying to touch as she move her fingures but...and fly away
Two boys pass by knocking him out of the sight as he was in a trance.
His sight was blooged by some people passing and he saw the [NANDINI] girl walk out with the kids...

Nandini treated her little friend with ice cream and cotton candy as its sunday and fun day for them .Kids whom she teach piano rather play for them and tutor them as she is free and is in manglore at her GRANDMA house in manglore. Her GRANDMOTHER whom SHe calls AMMS is a classical MUSICIAN and DANCER who teaches girl too except her as she always manage to snik out and bunk her classes and escape fr fun but do plead a sorry song at evening with detaling of every happening thing she did ...
...
After dropping the students at their respective house she went to their tree house which is at the back of her house or say estate with a huge old haveli types house crafted and shocased with painting and antiquics as her GRANDFATHER love for Old Treasure .
Their Treehouse means Abhi . Rishu , Muku and hers secret spot and also OSCAR who lay down on mud lazlily. Oscar is their pet GOLDEN SHEPHERD dog who is so sweet but only to them and protect them and make stranger ran away .Ther is security cameras and security equipments too all around which keep them safe but Oscar is best but where is he...must be scaring little rabbits its his fav thing to do.
.TREEHOUSE It was at backyard of abhi house...But both Haveli are in same estate and just in front of each other crossing a little garden of flower or bushes. Abhimanyu house backside has their tree house and little away a pond but no one know from where the water came from as it is surrounded by trees and and lotus flower but the water is so fresh and good not muddy that a mystery ...
Abhimanyu her friend no bestfriend now in Canada USA for his foreign internship in MBA .His family and her are neighbours here and also they live together in USA .
Nandini and rishabh also live their with them as there parents were very close friends resulting them to follow steps .Now as She has holidays so she is here in Manglore to meet Amms as she was not well its 6 long month she is here and Rishabh is their as for his treatment but its good as he has began talking too so its nice improvement . ...
Their estate is huge as it consist of lots of green plants and trees much like as her AMMS and mother love plants a lot ...
She sat their as it would be risky to go in from front as amms would catch her make her practise Sa ...RE ...GA...MA...P...nooo nooo...With that she open her dairy of wishes and or write todays event ...and thought to write something she want to do ...she thought and write '
'
'I...WANT...No...LIFE...NO...SAVE...LOVE
''what to write she was confuse when sribble the words like puzzle on her note book...
Suddenly she hear a noise as something crash must be on the road she thought and got up from her place as the main road at a little distance. ...

...
Manik completed his work and now set back for Mumbai as the sighn he want are done on paper and he can go back but the sun rays do remind him of the girl of previous time like he would meet her again ...he shake his head in disapproval as he was living the place and would be back to his Friends THE FAB5..so MANIK driveS with concentrate on road not on some Angel ...what ANgel he thought seriously . HIs thought were broken by call from ''MRS DEAl'' as he have saved it which soo off his mood and he cut the call ...and continue driving but it rang again so he switch off his phone and toss on the side seat
.Meanwhile as he was in phone he fail to notice the car ahead and he saw and duck it safely fail to see the turn on road and as a result he apply break but they were fail so he got crashed in a huge tree ahead...
...
She move in the direction of sound passing the fence and some trees she reach the scene it look like the car hit badly with the something as it was crashed but look like the tea stall owner called ambulance and they were now taking the guy out of the car he was badly injured as blood was everywhere ..she move ahead to get a better view but suddenly OSCAR came and try to drag me somewhere and ran towards the trees and i follow him but as . I look back as they took him in the ambulance as his hand covered with black band and watch fall out of strecher and something fell from his hands flew and directly came under her feet she picked it up and its ...before she could see oscar came back with a piece of cloth cover with blood and kept near my foot and sighn to follow so i pat him and ask to show the way .
...

...
Oscar led the way as she follow him as they come across the fence and walk ahead crossing the tree house and walking through the lane and path we reach to the pond .i thought he again hunt a wild sqqirel but the cloth look like piece of shirt as we step down toward the pond i saw something which struck the life out of me
As a some one lay sat by the tree resting as blood was flowing from his shoulder and his head was also hurt .The wound was deep as something cut his skin .He sat their holding the wound to stop the blood looked clearly tired .Nandini rushed to him as he lift his head as she was near him .Both could only stare at each other untill he blink his eyes he open his lips and wispered like help which sent a chill through a body and shivered her and soon the guy pass out directly on her lap...She was frozen with the sudden happening and turn of event...

Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
aarohi_angel98 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Plz pm me when u update nxt...
Cooki thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
hey it's a very fresh idea yr...amazing..keep it continue...👏
sy3333 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Quite mysterious ⭐️
Liked i
hope u update the next part
Sooon😊😛
jivisha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
PROMO

Its like time has stopped ...for them but to register different thoughts

Its not him ...itcan't be him

its you ...but do i know her

10 minutes before

Manik came inside as he left his phone in the hall. Nandini head out of kicthen with coffe in hands and much in her thoughts..Manik took his phone and head out checking messages suddenly dashing in someone spilling the hot thing but soon to catch the person by waist as she fell backward
Her Hairs covere her face he soon got an urge to remove them as he did so the crystal clear mirror of brown eyes met his which convey only blankness but turn more bigger and full of pain...anger ...
she push him and straighten herself kneeling down holding her head...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".