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It"s Awesome. Continue soon. And PM me if you can😊
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PART 1

DESTINed or FAULTLESS

Nandini walk downstairs to get herself a coffee to refresh she went directly in kitchen and made it as she prefer to do her work herself black coffee was much needed for her to put her thoughts straight and organised herself.

She pour the hot liquid in her cup and took the cup and she rember something so she took the honey syrup and add to the coffee .He always question her why she drink these bitter coffee when she is so sweet and use to add honey and a smiley with cream as honey will keep her fit and coffee will also taste good .The memories lit her up and do brought a smile on her face.

Sapna came inside and was happy seeing nandu with a smile it was finally after 2 days she smile''the person might be important '' she said and nandini came out of her thoughts''huh''

Sapna'' missing Amms '' nandini nodded . Sapna ask her to join for dinner but nandini said she will have after completing her stuff which are left and will join soon and went out...

She thought to go to pool side and have a walk and as looking at the calm and still water make her feel good as she deep legs in water but then thought not as the music did convey that party time and nor she want to go nor will mukti like.

She walk and saw The piano and she thought to give a try to was place in the drawing room and as the room was big it was decorated nicely and had one more glass door opening to pool area ...

Nandini went near it and put the cup on the table beside and look at the keys unknowingly her right hands move to the keys and began to play the notes not the one on book but the one define her as.

I WISH AGAIN AND AGAIN...[she remberded his smile]

MY HEART RUSHES AGAIN...[ him offering his hand to hold]

UNDER THE SAME SKY BUT DIFFERENT TIME...[him kneeling before her]

OUR SAD ENTAGLED LOVE...[ he was before her talking to her by phone and he diappeared] she hummed the song which define them

With the sudden rush of memories she pull her hand back and again her tear betray her and fall...She wipe it and pick the cup and turn and Bang on something...much like someone hard chest

[10Minutes before]

Manik came inside as music was loud and he had an urgent call so he walk inside from the indoor door he saw a girl near the piano ''Must be Muktis Annoying Cousin''he thought as mukti menstioned and move ahead but what stop him on his track was the tone as the music was in air touching and hypnotising him to the direction .With every every beat t pull it and he walk near and near with blogged scene or images of someone,Laughter , and a image again closer as he move it drift away.

Without his notice he was just feets away from her as the track stop he hold his head as it hurt like cross the unknown barrier.Suddenly someone crash on him he was started but as his hands move and hold it but something spilll on the person and she hiss pain and was going to fall he hold her my her arms and stop her from touching the ground as did so and look at her he was lost in her as her baby brown eyes met his .He could see only hollowness inside them...

Manik other hand move and touch her burn space and she hiss in pain again and blinked her eyes

Nandini get herself free from the grip and got straight and look at her burnt space on her hand and she got a forwn on her forhead

With crash sound of cup sapna came and saw nandu and manik as manik was holding nandini in arms she choose to keep quite and observe them

Nandini look at the burn as it was stinky a little and turn to light red a hand came near her found and hold lightly''its hurt''came a voice as she look up her eyes grow wider and she take breath as she saw a faimilar face with the feature of same nose lips hairs strains on forehead but eyes were not green but shade of dark brown choclate her lips were not in the usual smile ...Its not him she knew that and she pull her hand out of his hold and take few steps back until piano surface hit her back lightly

Shilpa doughted but now was sure nandini did lost have someone in her heart but maybe the person is away far away as the girl did grow up in mature but much silent as he is the reason of her smile is away

Manik was a taken back himself at the reaction of the petie girl before her she was in grey pj with pink slevless top her hairs in a pony with strains out .Her face was dull and little pale her lips were dry and eyes with note of lack of sleep .She look odnary much common but her eyes shade with baby brown which were hollow now were big and were consist with little anger and mystery ...

Sapna came forward to them and come near nandini and hold her by shoulder which made her look at her

''Nandu are u ok beta '' shilpa ask and take a look of her arm'' its burn let me apply ointment it will make u feel better ''

''some wounds are better if left open ''she said in trance while still looking at manik as they gave a confuse look she corrected''i mean medicine does't suite me chachi so let it be it will heal''

''but mark will be left na nandu''sapna said with concern

nandiini look at her hand''its good as it will remind me of reality as i should be careful''she said and gave alook to manik and look at her chachi

Sapna''wait let apply turmeric paste and cleam it will soat u and heal too ok u go to your room and rest iwill come''sapna said and nandini nod aand turn and walk away without glaning back but manik eyes could not left the sight of her until she was out of it.Strange girls usually crave fr attenton and if hurt then pamper but she doesnt even care he was in his thought but sapna voice break them and he look at her

''Manik..that...''as she began but mukti came insde and drag manik out as it was tooboring without him .manik gave a understanding nod and walk with mukti but inside he was hell confuse even with himself too and her too.

Nandini rush to her room close the door but left it unlock she lay to the door and take deep breath and slowly sat resting her back my it an dcuddliing her arms around her knees she was blank everything was so mess now its not him he is not him he is not my...the thoughts were running in her mind she put fingure in her hairs and hold her head as it will burst

Shinee who was out of cage and roaming came near her and lick her toe she look at him and took in her hands and hug him lightly patting him he to snuggle her as ensuring to trust herself and her heart.She get up and walk to the balcony she need fresh air .She open the door and ppush it a rush of cool air hit her she step out with shinee and sat on the sofa kept aside adjusted to railing of balcony she sat with her legs folded and rubbing shinees fur as.She lay their half laying her hand under her head shinee move from her hold she let him as he will come back ''She wish like him he to come back to her ''

Why after so much onelyiness and silent why the same face but she know thats not the person she love thats not the person who make her smile and lit her life...

He just look like him he is not the one she love or gave her heart too...He is not

But the truth is the one she love is to not here but far away...

As she was lost in thoughts and staring at the moon again she felt something touch her hand something soft on her burn mark she look at and found a blue rose touching her wound she look and found shinee near by pushing the rose through his nose to her .She sat straight and took shinee her hand and kiss him on his head he blink to ensure her it may seem a mirage but what she hold in her heart is true

She keep shine in her lap and pick the blue rose .Her room has two plot with blue rose on infront of her table and one in balcony .Blue rose are nor natural born but are are form when white rose is dye with blue or combination of two shade.She got one plant when she was roaming in her garden in manglore a week before

Its been 2 days he diasppear she usually spent time in tree house or near the lake one day she was roaming or trying to be alone walking amilessely in garden something prick her fingure blood came out she turned a and saw a plant of white rose and its branch one rose turned little red as her blood drop on it and as she bend down to pick the rose she saw a little plant and a bud on it which was blue in colour it was the first ray she got and a little smile to she got the plant by its roots and took home and put in a pot to grow and from then a rose will bud up as other dry to take its place

Why she love the plant because a flower is not born special or born with aim it is aimed or special as we took care of it and she took care of it for them herself and him to from us again someday...

A BLUE ROSE HE GOT HER THEIR FIRST ...she remberd

MANGLORE

LITTLE BUBBLES KINDERGARTEN

The place where she play piano for little kids after they finished their day and listen t her playing till their parents come and pick them .After that she teach piano their to her kids who came to learn keyboard and piano from her .ONe day she enter the class in white dress mean white salwar as she want to meet him and suprise him he always compliment she will look preety in indian dresse too.So to get a priceless expression from she dressed and came as he will wait for here and later they would spent some time together and he would drop her hme at last its een their schedule from past 1 week

.so she enter their was no one it was empty she look around and found no one she turned and count till 1.2..3..4..5..6..7...8...9..10 and as expected the kids came rushing ut from their hidding

Her [students] kids came one by one and hand her roses

Veer give her LIGHT Pink...GENTLENESS SWEETNES

Priya give her Lavender....ENCHANTMENT

Sam gave her White.......PURITY

Adhya gave her Green...SELFRESPECT,WELL BEING

Rohan gave her Yellow....FALLING IN LOVE, FRIENDSHIP

SHE KNOW WHAT THEY ALL MEAN AND TELL AS SIX ROSES SHE WISH FOR SIGNIFING LOVED OR CHERISHED

BUT their are 5 in her hand where is the 6th one...

They all kiss her on chick and ran out She turn to him as he kneel before her with some thing in his hand which was behind he took out a

Blue Rose....THE IMPOSSIBLE and gave her

''What these ...are u gone prapose me ..''she asked folding her hands ''i thought it will be red why''she ask pointing to Blue rose.

''red is love i know but i want more than love'''his talk do make her nervous like hell

''It define us a BLUE ROSE its not ought to grow naturally but by nature but it excist in natural way as it form by placing The blue rose being in itself something very extraordinary expresses that very same feeling. "You are extraordinarily wonderful", the blue rose exclaims for u as u chooseme. A truly wonderful personality you are,charisma that what a blue rose says about the receiver. A flight of fancy, an irrepressible imagination is what the blue rose is all about.and u are just the way'' They sat on the seat next to the window she lay her head on his shoulder and listen him as she was glad their was something which explain their togetherness

''Another meaning of the blue rose is that it symbolizes the impossible, or the unattainable. Since the blue rose itself is a rarity in nature, it stands for something that is hardly within one's grasp, an object that seems too difficult to be achieved. Thus the blue rose is admired and revered as an unrealizable dream.''

he enwisted their fingure and saiid looking at her''blue roses are traditionally associated with royal blood, and thus the blue rose can also denote regal majesty and splendor. Ithe blue rose signifies hope for attainable love.''

Wow look u did a real research on it '' she ask with a smile

''ya ofcourse it about us and it should be unique like us too ''u are like it as ''he pick the blue rose and ask her to look clearly the rose was some shaded in white in between''white is pure just like u and it show purity which is hard to exist ''he said and continue ''just like...

''just like u ''she comleted and looked at him and hugged him''and i m likiest to have u''he hugged her back''

She is strong and her heart know what she want she will only do what it want ignring what other say as that what she is and will be a fighter now with time and destiny

Nandini was so much in her dream as she was unware when sleep took in .Fab5 partyied like usual but manik was off like something missing and someone calling him all did not disturb him as he was still recovering ...lets see what desting store as its a new day with anew begginng and a resolved to fulfill...


Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
Roshni8 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Awesome update.
Its wonderful.👏 👏
I liked the concept very much.
I loved this story.
Eager to know what happens next
Cont asap
And pm me whenever u update😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry guys exam time will try to update soon be atience
fighting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

PLOT

Elite Space college institute of ARTS-COMMERCE - SCIENCE.Where students can merge two subjects together .Different Sector for each branch connected together with Canteen ,Library and Sports Field .A INstitute in Large Sector with all Facilities

Nyonika MAlhotra as the Managing Director


Character and plot

Nandini Vardhan
student of science .Teach and play piano .Return from USA now as for her vication lives with her grandmother n Manglore but after 6 Moths will move to mumbai to her Chacha House in Mumbai ...Saved some one life but soon the meet turn to greet of soulmate .
Unconditionaly in love with Parth Prithvi Samthan ...

Parth Prithvi Samthan
A Royal Young guy change of event led him face to Nandini who he term as his saviour.Once engage to a girl but she died he knows nothing about her except her name .Nandini is the girl he loves and she soon become his ray of light and heart beat in unknown world..


Sujata / Vinay Eyre
couple recently married. Nandni friends knows about the chemistry of them and help them in their moving love story

FAB5

Manik Malhotra got in an accident and disappeared was in coma for time now recoverd and back home forgot the incidents before the event happen.But stil something change in him something happen
beyond imagination as it was a dream far away .Doing MBA with Music

Mukti Vardhan
Nandini cousin they were best friends in childhood then cahanges occur now she doesnt like her much .Loves her parents and fab5 most .Soon to be engaged to childhood friebd Abhimanyu but confused.Doing MBA with Music

Alya -Druv
Treat-Term as friends but have spark.In Arts Field

Cabir
funny guy but now his boredness is away as he got his entertinment madhubala


Arjun ..
... student in Space Acadmey doing his MBA on scorlarship in Sports cota for boxing.an orphan lives in Dharavi East shore as their house is beside the beach on upper layer.He lives with his 7 siblings he is eldest of them and want best for his brother sisters.
He is cold ,rude arrogant as other think as for display he is but sweet and best brother for the kids .Care for ruhi and veer the youngest the most .he become more silent after his sister neha died with hid dad in accident[ or colapse of building ]whom he cared the most affect him most too

Ruhi have hole in heart he works bad and good part time to earn for her health .

Jhanvi Sehgal ..
...Legal gaurdian of the kids loves them work as head in bank .Lives with her mother and look after kids .Mother to all kids except arjun all are close to her

Reena Sehgal ....
...mother of jhanvi loves the kids worried for her daughter


Mehak Shah
...Arts student in Space .simple girl with traditon and morals .Secretly cares for arjun but afraid of him..

Yashraj
... Father of all kids adopted 8 kids as they all came idirectly in his life .Love them alll alot and care for them.Arjun ih his real son but he adopted him as to hide the truth .Jhanvi his his friend and person he trust most so he term herr as kids gaurdian .Termed dead 1 year ago with his daughter neha


Kids...

Arjun...20years
Neha ...dead...18
Maahi /Neel-twins ...14
Shravan...15
Piya ...12
Lakash ...10
Ruhi -Veer...8


Classmate in college for nandini
Science
Sam
Roy
Isha

Music
Navya
Ishaan
Shahid




















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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice plot...means manik was prithvi in previous life n when he meet with a accident near nandini's house in manglore that time nandini meet prithvi...n now prithvi is gone back to his time...n nandini is sad as she loves him...n no one knows about it except abhi who is in USA...n now she has come to mukti's house...n found that manik is look a like of prithvi...but she thinks knows that its not him...n manik has seen nandini in manglore but due to the accident he forgot about her...
i think that prithvi has returned as manik for nandini...in her time...n nandini n manik both are to still realize that...for nandini she has to realize that its her prithvi...n manik has to realize about his previous life when he was prithvi n feel in love with nandini...
its a different plot...showing that when love is true even god bends down his rule in front of love...to make the lovers meet...
can u please continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update..continue soon :)

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