Manan ff More than just friends

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first ff on If so plz do comment your views. Hope you like it! !!!

Characters
Manik Malhotra- 26 yrs spoilt brat,owner of Malhotra industries. Doesn't believe in the dating system. Loves his step brother and brother dearly.
Cabir Malhotra- 23yrs small brother of Manik , just joined office for his internship.
Asad Ahmad Khan- 28yrs CEO of Khan industries and step brother of Manik and Cabir.

Nandini Murthy- 23yrs just completed her studies and is applying for internship
Navya Naveli- 23 yrs step sister of Nandini. Currently applying for internship.
Zoya Farooqui- 26 yrs, adopted sister of Navya and Nandini. She is a professional interior designer.




Chapter 1- the comeback
Navya and Nandini were packing their bags when they heard Zoya asking them to hurry
Nav: oh shit didi hume Mar dalegi.
Nan: han barbie doll hurry up.
Nav: done...let's go hunny!
They went down the stairs to find and angry Zoya waiting for them. The looked at each other and gulped hard.
Nan:voh appi kya hai na hum pane books pack kar rahe the air hume...
Zoya: ok fine Nandu let's go we're getting late we're going to miss our flight .

Time leap
The girls finally landed in Mumbai.They took a taxi to their new house which were for their parents before they went to America When they got there Zoya instantly made a visit around the house which consisted of a small living room, a kitchen, a dining table placed between the kitchen and the living room there were two rooms downstairs while the other rooms were upstairs.
Zoya chose a room downstairs which the decorated with sky designs and stars while Navya and Nandini chose a room upstairs.

Malhotra mansion

"Cabiiir yaar come na mujhe jogging pe jana hai " manik yelled in from the living room.
"Arre yaar Manik jana tu. Mujhe subha subha mere achi dream se bahar nikal ke jogging nahin jana hai...jana tu...mujhe parechaan mat kar!!! Yelled cabir from his room

Manik went to jog and as soon as he was out he saw a beautiful girl dressed in a blue shirt and a skinny jeans. He was mesmerized by his new neighbour who just arrived. He knew since childhood that murthy uncle lived there and then left for U.S. and heard that Ananya Murthy died in an accident. Leaving aside his jogging he rushed inside and woke cabir and asad.
As soon as theyheard the comeback of zoya they went directly to their house.

As soon as they reached zoya came and hugged them. They were her first friends. After a while Asad took her hand and said how much he missed her while Zoya was blushing profusely. Manik somewhat was searching for someone else. Zoya led them in and made them sit. From the kitchen she called navya and Nandini to meet her friends. Manik could not take his eyes of the girl standing in front of him and that girl was none other than Nandini Murthy


To be continued

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start continue soon and next time pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 - New friends
Manik stayed there gazing at her while Nandini was feeling awkward. Cabir and Navya bonded instantly and as for Asad and Zoya they were lost in their own worlds.
Nandini went to sit next Manik

Nan: hi im Nandini, I heard a lot about you but now im glad that I've got to see you

Man: same here ...what about we go for a coffee?
Nan: Actually I have to go to S.A.C.E academy. I have to collect the application form there.
Man: you're going to space? Omg this year would be much more fun than I thought. Actually I own S.A.C.E so I'll suggest you instead of applying as a teacher come to Malhotra Music industries as a musician. Don't worry i would train you.

Nan: Thanks but I think I'll do teaching in the mean time. I'll move to Malhotra Music Industries as soon as you are done training me.

Man: Sure I'll be glad to teach you...so you decide when and I'll come
Nan:How about now?
Man:what? now?
Nan: yep ... there is no time to waste whenever it comes to music.
Manik was astonished by her reply. Her way of thinking was exactly like his.
They moved to Manik's place and went to his music room.
Nandini started singing
Nandini:
O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena

Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Yun hi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

Aa.. aa.. aa..

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila tu mere dard ka

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

Manik:
Kaisa hai, rishta tera mera,
Bechehara phir bhi kitna gehra
Yeh lamhe, lamhe yeh resham se
Kho jaaye, kho na jaaye hum se
Kafilaa.. waqt ka.. rok le..
Ab dil se judaa na hoo..

Manik and Nandini:
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galiyan teri galiyan
Yunhi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan

Man: WOW you have an amazing voice but i thought you did not know Hindi? ?
Nan: Actually I do know Hindi but I'm more used to English that's why i talk English but when i sing i sing in Hindi only.

Man: That's great!!!!

Scene shift
Asad and Zoya were sitting on a bench having black coffee together. Zoya was glad to be back to the person she loved for years. Zoya was staying in India for the first ten years of her life Nandini however was too small to remember. Zoya once again hugged Asad. On the other hand Asad who has been waiting desperately for her return reciprocated without any hesitation he missed her way too much,he wanted to be with her at every moment now, he could not afford to lose her again afterall he loved her since childhood.

Scene shift
Cabir and Navya were playing 20 questions.
Nav: Yaar Cabir where are the others?
Cabir: I think Asad is somewhere romancing with Zoya and for Manik and Nandini I donno
Nav: yaaa i remember how Zoya would keep crying in her room as she missed asad.
Cabir: seriously? I thought only Asad could do that?
Nav: I have an idea
Cabir: And that idea is to make Zoya jealous by bringing another girl in Asad' s life? Which will make her confess?
Nav: yep...but how do you know?
Cabir: I was thinking about the same. ...come let's go it's time for some fun...



So here it is i know there is no pic but im having difficulties with posting pic on IF. This story is also on wattpad on my account zoya_asya_
Edited by Sofiacutegurl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update.. Cavya plan yo make jealous.. zoya..let's see how she will b reacted
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter-3-Jealous

Manik and Nandini were on the terrace talking. Manik started liking her. The way she talks she seemed to be mature. Nandini also was feeling butterflies in her stomach whenever she saw him smile.
Man: You know what I think I'm falling for...
Cabir: Yaar Manik tu yahan hai...main ne tumko kahan nahi dhunda. Accha sun mere paas ek plan hai Asad aur Zoya ko paas lane ke liye.
Navya came and told them the plan.
Manik and Nandini were shocked to hear the bold plan of Navya and Cabir.

A few hours later

A new girl entered Zoya's. House search in for Asad Ahmad khan. Her name was Tanveer (A/N Tanveer is good in this story). As soon as Asad heard of her arrival he rushed to hug her. Zoya saw this and got jealous. Tanveer kept tapping on Zoya's nerves all day long.
In the mean time Tanveer' s little sister,Soha , came she was flirting with Manik but he just shoved her off.
Tanveer made the boys sing, hearing them singing together was her favourite pass time.

Asad:
Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai
Yeh na ho to kya phir
Bolo yeh zindagi hai
Koi to ho raazdaar
Begaraj tera ho yaar
Koi to ho raazdaar

Manik:(looking at Nandini and sang)
Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai Yeh na ho to kya phir
bolo yeh zindagi hai
Koi to dilbar ho yaar
Jisko tujhse ho Pyaar
Koi to dilbar ho yaar

Cabir: (Dancing with Navya )
Teri har ke buraai pe daante woh dost
Gam ki ho dhoop to saaya bane tera woh dost
Naache bhi woh teri khushi main aree

The 3 boys together:
Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai
Yeh na ho to kya phir Bolo yeh zindagi hai
Koi to ho raazdaar
Begaraj tera ho yaar
Koi to ho raazdaar

Manik: (slow dancing with Nandini)
Tan mann kar tujhpe fida Mehboob woh
Palkon pe jo rakhe tujhe Mehboob woh
Jiski vafa tere liye ho

All the 3 boys together:
Are Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai
Yeh na ho to kya phir
Bolo yeh zindgi hai
Koi to dilbar ho yaar
Jisko tujhse ho pyaar
Koi to dilbar ho yaar

Everyone clapped...
Tanveer kept on hitting on Zoya's nerve and by the end of the day Zoya ended up telling Asad to stay away from Tanveer to which Asad kept teasing her and she revealed that she loved him and could not bear to see hom with other girls.
Asad got overwhelmed and admitted his feelings for her. They both shared a passionate kiss which was distubed by the gang.
Cabir: Arre Yaar Asad continue na hume koi fark nahin parta hume jaldi adat hogo...
Asad: Cabiiir!
Manik: accha sun mujhe apne hone wali bhabhi se milna hai tho hatye please
Asad: And why would you think i would let you come near her
Manik: because she is my future bhabhi and you guys cannot meet each other alone as you guys are getting married by the end of next week!
Asya: Whattt!
Nandini: yes appi app agle friday hi Nikha karege.
Zoya: par mom and dad?
Navya: di they already know we've spoken to then about it so chill.
Asad: par tum log yeg kaise pata ke voh mujhe pyaar karti hai?
Manik and Nandini turned to took at Cavya who were standing there with a big smirk on their faces.
Zoya : tum log ruk ill show you how to plot plans against me.
Zoya took her sandals and started running after them like a ten year old kids.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
love it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for pm me..nice update.. Marriage.. I. Excepting manan romance and confession...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is the link to the other chapters

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4395953&PID=123500638&#p123500638
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No yaar.its nothing no chapter s thr.simply says this is not correct.no document s thr.plz do something.give us corrct one frm whr we can read ur ff. anyway thank u so much for ur update chap-1 the intro was very nice & bonding b/w bro's & sis's.u penned it
chap-2 each of thr expression superb.especially d chikdhood lovers
chap-3 zoya's jealousy & manik genuine character while avoiding that witch soha.superb & excellent.plz give us correct address plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No yaar.its nothing no chapter s thr.simply says this is not correct.no document s thr.plz do something.give us corrct one frm whr we can read ur ff. anyway thank u so much for ur update
chap-1 the intro was very nice & bonding b/w bro's & sis's.u penned it
chap-2 each of thr expression superb.especially d childhood lovers
chap-3 zoya's jealousy & manik genuine character while avoiding that witch soha.superb & excellent.plz give us correct address plz

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