Tangled Up With U! Ch15: page 40

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

amazing part...loving nandini's mom a lot...she is super cool
so nandu in new look for manik's party...eagerly waiting to know manik's reaction
continue soon...thanks a lot for the pm
take care

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Nyc update

Nandu mom helping her in dressing up for party...lovely

Awsumm

Thank uh for pm

Update soon

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blookfericon

@blookfericon

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Chapter.. (I forgot)

My car stopped at large Villa with huge garden.
I went and rung the bell.
And then old man opened."Manik?"I asked

"Haan Baba taiyari kar rhe party ka."The old man said

"Where?"I asked dramatically.
"Vahan"He said pointing at the small room which was looking foggy.

I went inside and fond a man instructing everyone to prepare well.I though it was Mnanik.His back which was bare and gave awesome view of his muscular back.

I went near him and said"Manik?"
Which made him react suddenly.

(Manik's POV)
I turned around finding different Nandini.Her slim body looked perfect in this dress and her sexy legs were loOking more beautiful.She was looking mesmerizing. Her hair was looking perfect and her beautiful eyes were shinning. But this can't make me fall for her? Hope so! But cause of her breathtaking look I wanted to feel her.
(End)

"Oops..U r too early."He said checking me out
"Yeah"I said
"I thought u will know about these kind of parties."He said

"Um..Actually mom sent me early."I said not having eye contact with him."Okahe..But u look good and different."He said which made me enlighten little.
"Um..Thanks."I said
"DO u need any help?"I asked
"No!"he said

"Okahe then I m out in the garden."I said and He nodded.

I went outside in the garden.After sometime I took my handbag out and it would be bad roaming with this.

It's seven thirty now.I should ask him where shd I place it.I went insdie and fond him hanging out with his some friends.they were laughing and chilling.

"Manik?"I said which caught everyone's attention.There were 3 girls and 3 guys."Can I have a minute."I asked
"Yeha!"he said
"Voh actually I need to keep this handbag."I said
"Seriosuly.U called me for this.Well i said u before u r not my fiance or whatever now.U know they are going to question me?But keep them upstairs from right side there is room.There."He said
I walked away taking my mobile out.I fond a gift for Manik which mom asked me to take for him.
"Manik?"I called once more which once again caught attention of his friend.
"Yeah'He said sarcastically annoyed
"I bought this for u."I said giving him chocolate box
"Chocolate Box?Seriosuly?"He asked which made evryone laughed.I was embarassed for a mintue.
But then I got back I m not Thsi Nandini.
"Yeah!I thought U would love ones from Canada...Um' The Vodka and Cigars are mindblowing there but u have to go there for that.I don want bad reputation in flight.Well if u don wanna have that give me."I said which muted everyone.I took my heels upstairs to the bedroom he was asking for.

(maniks pov)
"Who was she?"Aisha asked
"No One."I said
"Manik what are u hiding"Cabir asked
"Nothing"I replied
"tell Us"Mukti shouted
"Okahe tomorrow pakka"I said
"Let's enjoy party"I said changing subject
"But u have to take revenge for everything and the way she spoke"Aisha said
"Yeah Baby"I said keeping my arms around her waist.
Though Nandini was looking mind blowing this doesn't means she is going to make ne embarrassed in front of my frnds. Revenge!!
(End)

I came down and heard loud thumping music.I was always loved music but someetimes hated this kind of.The disco lights were there and everyone was dancing.I went near bar counter and sat there.

"Do u want anything?"A younbg guy asked
"Nope..Not in mood of Hangover tomorrow."I said.

I looked around dancefloor looking for someone familiar or u can say Manik
After lots of looking around I fond Manik dancing with a girl.She was kind of beautiful.And i guessed her as his GF.Her back was facing Manik's front.And Manik's hand was around her waist almost on her belly.I don know why but I felt a feeling running down my spine;JEALOUSY?No it cant be.
"One shots please!"I asked on the counter
"Now are u in mood of hangover.?"He asked giving me lemonade taste shoots which I took in one go.
"Yeah think so!"I said with a wink which made him fall down!!As in sense schoked.

I putted my head down on the counter thinking of what just happened in my whole life.How it was perfect and how it changed in 2 days.I was going to be married in a month.Well now 29 days.

L"MANIK!!MANIK!!MANIK!!"I heard hooting from my behind which made me out of my trance.I turned around and fond Manik taking pace towards me with his hand of some beer or juice.Whatever!!What is he going to do now?And what he did made me shocked.He just splitted whole juice which tasted and smelled like vodka on the top of me.GOSH!!I heard everyone laughing at me

"BOOH!!!PRETTY GIRL TURNED INTO GARBAGE"Everyone was shouting.I don know why but I got tears in my eyes.I shdnt have them.And what I did which I dint wanted to I took bottle of beer and went to garden leaving everyone there.I dint let them see me crying but why i just walked away.I shd have gave him tight slap.

(Maniks Pov)
I don know why i felt back?I wanted to keep my reputation!I don want her as wife.But that was too much for anyone.
(End)

I went near empty garden which was still thumping with music.I sat on the most corner bench and took the large sip of beer.I cried for hours.I got joked up there and I m crying for that.What is happening??I rested my head on the bench and looked to the stars.
"Mom!!I miss u!!"I yelled as if she would be listeneing to me ignorring the music.
"MOM!!"I yelled and cried hard.

Now I m not this Nadnini.I do cry but not for this kind of stupid reason.I will fight with this bullshit guy.I went back to the hall and fond everyone dancing there.I was still drinking beer.I cleaned my tears from my cheeks and straightened my vodka dress.

I walked to DJ."STOP THE SONG!"i yelled
"Why?"he asked
"I want to announce something!"I said keeping myself calm
"But-"He said
"STOP IT NOW!"I yelled
He stopped the song.Well I did this kind of thing in Canada too and used to replace myself from actual DJ

"Microphone?"I asked and he handed me wireless . I went down and showed him my hand signalling to stop.I was drunk and I know that.And I love to be like that.As the song stopped..."Oos"Sound started

And then it was showtime.
"STOP IT U FOOLISH CREATURES"I yelled with my american accent."AWW!!BABIES GOT STOPPED FROM DANCING"i said making puppy faces."AM I HURTING UR EARS?"I yelled and then lowered my voice"Okahe normal mode!!Manik!!Be at front dude.U need to be shown as ur hunky face can turn into PIGGY face."I said
"DO u know what?"I asked pointing at him"I hate u!!Alot!!A hell"I said"And don u ever think I m like this innocent someone who can be slipped vodka on"I said"I would love to kick ur face and punch them hard like u turn into that pure in ductility."I said and heard laughings
"How u felt?Everyone is laughing Manik!"I said
"U know I felt bad that u did that and I cried I m not embarassed to say this but yeah I cried.U r jerk I don know how am I going to be with.."I stopped keeping both my hands on my mouth.

"Oops!!TOP SECRET"I said
"I hate u!!And I m deeply sorry for making u handle for forever.I m jerk I know that but I m not like u!Like who wants to keep reputation even after hurting someone else"I said with little feelings which made my voice soft"SORRY!!AND THANKU FOR PARTY!!!...ENJOY!"I yelled throwing microphone to DJ.I stepped upstairs to the room which manik asked me to keep purse on.While I can feel everyone's eyes on me.I ran to that room and shutted it hard.I cried near the window and cried like hell.I did good!!But still it feels bad!!WORST!!I took another beer bottle from side table and srank whole bottle.

And after a minute the door opened revealing Manik.

Precap:Romance!

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Samaira187

@Samaira187

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Wow 👏 way to go girl.. love what nandini did... 😊 it was right..
Also feeling sad for her..

Love your writing.. i know it's really hard to write three diff ff.. So take your time and update soon 😊

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zaroge

@zaroge

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Awww poor nandu

But ho girl u did the right thing

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lavanya

@Lovelylav7

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Awesome update.. But poor nandu 😭

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Apurva

@apps33

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

poor nandu

how can manik be soo cruel to dat poor creature

bt she definetly gave him a tough one

i loved it

cont soon plz

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Awsumm update..👏

Too good...loved wht nandu did...it's totally right

Ur writing skills r brilliant... superbb

Thank uh for pm

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

This was something unexpected...
Amazingly awesome..
At first manik rock nandini shock...
And at last nandini rock manik shock...

Waiting for romantic update...

Continue soon...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

awesome part...👏👏👏
felt so bad for nandini...but the way she faced it was amazing...bold and smart move
thanks a lot for the pm
waiting to read more
take care

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