Tangled Up With U! Ch15: page 40 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Wow nandu was awesome..
cont soon
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awsm..
Love your writing..
thnx 4 pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesome
pls pls update soon & at least inform d update & pg no on title!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
damn manik was little harsh..felt for nandu over there...
n its awesome yar..u wrote it well..😳
update ASAP ..m in love with your ff..(all 3 n thanks for updating all😃)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Awesome..loved the outburst of nandini..
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It was very nice update
Thanks for the pm
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I hope u all like!


was crying silently! I was crying on my destiny! I was crying on the third happened now.
Just them the door opened wide with angry Manik standing there. I was drunk b7t I got habit so I can remember everything. U can say I m never drunk or dizzy!

He came and grabbed my shoulders and made me stand
"WTH was that? " he yelled.
" Why are. U asking me ask urself" I yelled
"Never yell at me" he said making grip stronger in which I winced
"Manik u r hurting me! U hurted me and u will always hurt me! " I said with Crack in my voice I was in the verge of crying! Thinking what am I doing here??
" Stop crying! " he yelled
" U r hurting me! Shd I dance now? "I said

And then he left me with a jerk and I fall back and my head hurted cause of the drinks and I got little hurt with the corner of open window. I dint touched to see if it was bledding or what? I moved my hurted head behind my on hurted head so that It won be visible to Manik as I Don want any pity
" Oouch! " I winced
" U deserve that! " he said.
" U deserve every bad thing" he yelled

"I Don deserve this! I Don deserve insult u did, I Don deserve loosing mom, I Don deserve anything bad! Cause u know what I m not that bad I m not that bad. " I yelled at first and then I cried out. I Don deserve bad things. Do I?

I look into his eyes with my wet tear fall eyes. That's when his eyes widenend

(MANIKS POV)
I saw red on her head. It was bleeding though it was little one but guilty washed me! How can I hurt anyone. Manik u need to stop this
(end)

" Whatever I did downstairs was cause of u manik. U said me not to tell anyone about us. I never said but u insulted me. " I said
His eyes got softened.
" Okahe! Stop it was my mistake.i m sorry! I m seriously sorry! Now come I will help u in cleaning the mess. U r drunk" he said

"no no I m never drunk. Did u get that! I m normal! "I said standing
" Okahe u r! If u r then walk properly. "he said with smirk.
" Okahe! "I said proudly and started walking but somehow I got unbalanced and fall.

I was waiting for the hard floor to come in contact with my bare back but it never came. I felt a cold arms on my bare back. I opened my eyes and fond his brown eyes.

" U r drunk. " he said and stood up.
" No I m not " I shooked my head
" Oh! Go change and sleep. " he said

After lots of fights I asked him to wait here and took my shorts and tank top to washroom.
I shut the washroom and started unzipping my dress suddenly lights went off and my fear of dark came back. Stop laughing! Everyone e have some fears.

" MANIK MANIK" I shouted panicking
Suddenly door opened with a body figure must be Manik. I went to him and hugged and deepend my head in his chest fighting my fears.after sometime he too hugged me and again I shivered as his cold hands came in contact with my back.

The lights went on and I moved back.
"I m sorry! " I said.
" Okahe. U change! I m outside" he sajd

I quickly took my dress and entered in my sleeping dress. I went out and got awkward silent. Suddenly the storm and thunder sounded I jumped a little.
"Scared? " Manik asked
" No not at all " said
" Okahe! Now take this and put it on Ur head. " he said walking out.
Then he gave me bandaid and pinned it in my head. I shivered little but felt okahe then. And then he walked u out
" No no please stay I m scared" I said pleading.
"Haha i knew it. "he said sitting on the chair.

I kept silent and sit on the couch. Suddenly he throwed pillow on me.
" What? " I asked
" u r soo boring "he stated
I too grabbed pillow and hitted him. We stared pillow fighting. Suddenly his eyes hurted as I threw pillow.

" Manik I m sorry! "I said walking to him.
The pillows on the floor unbalanced me and I fall on him making him fall on the bed. Fish!! Big mistake
He grabbed his eyes and I struggled. Suddenly he left his red eyes and grabbed my waist.
I looked into his eyes and asked.
" um... Move Ur hands I can't move " said
" Who asked u to move? "he asked
" what? "I said
" Do u know tomorrow I have to tell my frnds abt u and I definitely sure they will not like u" he said
"as u dint liked me" I said

And hen suddenly he made me pinned to the bed and he was on the top of me. His both the knees near my body the side of thighs and his both the palms near my neck
"Who said I Don like u? " he asked
" What? "I asked
" I Don like u as u agreed to Marry me! I Don like u cause what u did downstairs, I Don like u cause u talked rudely to me but I like Ur attitude! I like Ur sense of humour! And I like Ur FIGURE! " he said
Last word widened my eyes Without any reaction or waiting for response he came near my jawline and kissed me and then came near my ear and said
" I Don like u but still I like u" he said and quickly bitted my earlobe. I shutted my eyes with fear with pleasure and somewhat shock.

He came under the ear and started kissing me. He kissed behind my ears and I moaned a little and he understood it as my sweet spot he harshly sacked that area and I know it will turn red here.
I robbed his shoulder and gripped it. Keeping away my moans I said "BUT I DON.. L. IKE.. U" which made him stop.
I seriously Don like him and he too Don like me! It's just Lust!!,

He stopped and then angrily looked into my eyes.
" U will regret Ur sentence" he said and walked out leaving me behind in this bed with memories of him kissing me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awesome update
Lovely
A least the talked
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Amazing...
Loved it..

Cont soon...

Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice update dear.
Waiting for the next update,do update the next part asap.

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