My Mysterious Life-Fiction-Character Sketch

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please leave commentsI know who am I but maybe people have forgotten me.Why? Idon't know.What for?I don,t know. I myself do not know what my life.

I woke up suddenly.I saw there was no one at home.The weather was rainy.
Heavy winds were blowing.

Who stays with you?Counsellor asked.

Me and my friend.I said.

If this happens to you everyday?.Counsellor asked

Not everyday,but most would.I said.

Ok.Counsellor said.

But I have heard some strange voices everyday.It happens to me again and again.why?

I think something is troubling you. I think you need to take rest.It,s better for you,Shyaam.counsellor said.

I think,you are right.Shyam said.

Shyam exits from the Room .
He sat on the Bench near the river with sad mood.

Background Music starts

Mujhe pata hain main kaun hun
Magar kho gayan hyn kahinn

Main khud nahin jaanta
Main kahin aur hun ya yahin
Main yaaha aksar aata jaata hun
Khoya main khud ko paata hun

Zindgi mein jaane kab aaayeeegi bahaar

Mujhe pata hain main kaun hun
Magar kho gayan hyn kahinn

Main khud nahin jaanta
Main kahin aur hun ya yahin

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Chapter-1
PAGE-2
Shyam sat on the bench near the river.Suddenly, his friend who live with him in the apartment comes.

He put his hand on shyam and asked.
Hey,Why you're sat alone on the bench?

I don't know.Shyam said
I am your friend,not your enemy.Tell me,Why you're sitting.He said.
My life is full of complications,I don't know what to do.I don't know where to go.Where's my destination.I don't know what is my destiny.He said in the negative voice.

The sad tune playing in the background.


I think you are frustrated.He said.
Be positive,Shyam.Everything will be alright.

Yes,I thing I am taking stress.Shyam said.

Suddenly his phone rings.
He picked up the phone

'Where are you?'the phone voice said.
I am near the river.He said
'What are you doing?She said.
I am Dancing.He said.
You took part in Dance competion?.She said jokingly.
Shut up,Rashmi.He said.
Ok,Rohit,I am just joking.She said with smile.
Well,Is it shyam Ok?She asked.
No,I don't think so much.Rohit said
ok.She said

Let's go to the home.Shyam said.
Ok,You will go.I'll come in an a hour.
But,Where will you go?He asked.
"Nowwhere" He spoke after little thinking.
Ok,Rohit.Shyam said.
Rohit exits and Shyam goes to the home.

Rohit called the taxi and sat.
Where will you go?Driver asked.
"Airport".He answered with negative eyes.
Ok sir.Driver said.

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Chapter-1
Shyam's house
Shyam watching T.V in the low volume.

Ashwin aslo wanted to watch T.V.
' Do you hear something!'Ashwin asked.
Yes.Shyam replied.
But,I can't .Ashwin replied back.
'Oh!sorry,Ashwin,I thought that you're not watching T.V.'Shyam said

'Where is Rohit'.Ashwin asked.
I don't know.Shyam replied.

3 hours later.
Rohit is still not come.Ashwin said
I think we should find him.Shyam said
Yes,you're right.Let go.Ashwin said

Ashwin and Shyam are both went to different directions to find Rohit.

Shyam's route.
Shyam drives off to find Rohit and suddenly a young girl collides with Shyam's car.
'Are you ok,Young girl'.He said.
'What OK'.She screamed.
Sorry.My friend has not been found.I am finding my friend.He said.
'Name?'She asked.
What "Name"?
'Name of him?She asked.
'Rohit.. Rohit Kumar'.He said.
'How he is looking?.She asked.
'Why you want to know?He said.
'May be I know him?.She said.
'How you know him?'He asked.
'I said may be'.She said.
'He weared a Red T-shirt with Blue Jeans.He is fair,tall and handsome.He is very slim.His hair is very long,black and thick.His face is oval.
'Rohit?.
Yes,so.He said.
That Rohit?
I don't understand your words.He said.
I tell you.She said.

Flashback

Today, I returned from America. I was standing on the aiport to find Taxi.
Suddenly I saw a guy who was in a hurry.He was looking at his watch again and again.I asked his name.
First,He ignored then he told his name,Rohit.
'Where you want to go?I asked.
'Why you want to know that Where I am going and Why I am going ?Mind your own buisness.
'Sorry'.I said.
'I just wanted to know that Where are you going ?'She said.
'I am sorry,I am not going anywhere.Today,My childhood friend ,Rashmi,is coming.He said.
'Ok'.She said

In present

'Then?'He asked.
'Then What,I collide with you.'She said.

Shyam phone rings.
'Hello,Rohit,Where are you?'He said.
'Home.He said.
'What?.Shyam said.
'I tell you,you come home.'He said.

'What happen?She asked.
'He is in home.'Shyam said.
'Who is in home?'She asked.
'Rohit'.He screamed.
Oh!Sorry.She said.

'So case is solved'.She said.
'Yes,We're playing C.I.D.He said.
'Sorry'.she said.

Shyam call Ashwin.
'Hello,Ashwin,Rohit is in home.Shyam said.
'What?Ashwin said.
Don't ask quetions.Shyam said.

Ok,I am going.She said.
By the way,What's your name?He asked.
'Aenem'.She said.
This is name?
It is the chinese short form.She said.
'What?I said.
'You know chinese?He asked.
'No,I didn't'.she said with smile.
'What's your real name?He asked.
'Nandini... Nandini Kapoor.She said. Page no.3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
can u give character sketch
bit clumsy
is this story based on manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Here's the character sketch of the Fiction NovelCharacter Sketch
Shyam-Shyam is an unemployed person living with his two friends named,Ashwin and Rohit.He is suffering from an unknown problem in which strange things happens with him.His real name is MK.Full Form will reveal in the next chapter.

Nandini Kapoor-She is RJ(Radio Jockey).More Information will revealing soon.

Rohit-Shyam's friend
Ashwin -Shyam's second friend

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