Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 43

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww really loved d update 😳 it was beautiful yet adorble 😃 really loved d bond of Cavya 😊 really naya is very sensible as well as cabir n bth took a fair desicion n im really hapi for their new start 😃 bt i still wonder dt wht us d prob b/w manik n aliya?? Seruxly im geting impatient to knw abt dm 😛 it was really funny as manan jumped on cabiraa to get everting out from him 😃 but their bed time story was boring lol 😆 bt their lesson was really intresting with hot n senseous material lol 😆 😳 😳 really loved it yr plzz update its nxt chp soon will b w8ting for it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy dear..
It was a very nice update 😊
But what's the mystery in Manik & alya's awkward behaviour??...
Let us know soon dear 😊
And can you plzz pm me next time??
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was an awesome update...
Loved it...
loved cavya mature talk...
mananbir scene was awesome...
plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
FABULOS RESD LAST 2 CHAPTER IN A GO😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 14 (Part 3)

Nandini phone alarm was ringing continuously.Suddenly she jump from the bed and search the phone and put the alarm off.She saw the time,it was 6.30 in morning.She brushed her teeth fast and dress up and write a note for manik and grab the keys and leave.

Nandini drive fast as she saw the her phone showing it was only 6.40 a.m.She laughed at herself thinking that in her whole life she get ready in 10 minutes.She park the car and slowly open the apartment with the keys she was still having as abhi give her spare keys for any emergency. She.She looked here and there and realizes both navya and abhi were still sleeping.She smiled that she make it on perfect time as it was navya first day of job and she wants to surprise both of them in morning.

She puts the flowers In vase on table and keep her stuff on side and went to kitchen.She open the youtube and plugs her headphones.On one side she puts the coffee to brew , and she start preparing the pancakes,only one thing she was master at that and luckily both abhi and navya loves pancakes.

She prepared the mixture for pancakes and type in youtube "how to prepare the Custard as she want to make something sweet for navya.Finally after struggling for one hour she was done with custard and she place it in fridge to cool it down.The she arranges the coffee and pancakes on table and put the small gift on navya side and she hides her stuff and she check the time it was almost the time when abhi alarm would ring so she connects the phone with speaker and start the music with high volume.

As soon music started,abhi and navya both panicked and both of them rush to living room.Abhi slow down the volume thinking might be it is navya,but when both of them stand In living room and saw the breakfast table and look at each other and signs they haven't done it.Then abhi realizes it was Nandini fav music and whne he saw it was Nandini phone on which music was palying.Hes igns to navya and winks at her.Navya said "ohh abhi you are so sweet,you prepare all this for me as it is my first day.I w ish Nandini was here today.But it' s okay we can enjoy together".Nandini who was hiding and listening everything gets angry but she didn't move.Suddenly abhi removes the curtains and grabs her and said "navya look we have cute thief in our house". Navya and abhi laughed.Nandini making angry face said "Abhi,how you know I was there and you are so bad,you lie to navya".Abhi laughed and said "because our smart thief forgets to grab her phone".Nandini smiled a lil realizing her fault and then navya said and I know "abhi hasn't done all this because last night I told abhi that we would have breakfast outside."

Abhi said "can we hug now". Nandini smiling Hugs abhi.Abhi said he is alot happy to see her and navya also joins them in group hug.Abhi said "it is best morning surprise for both of them.After freshening up all three of them sit around table and saw breakfast.Navya was like "wow,you made all this". Nandini feeling proud said "yes mam".Navya then saw the gift written on top "all the best from your job.From : your family".Navya smiled and opened the gift ,it was small statue of lord ganesha.

Abhi and navya were enjoying breakfast with her whereas otherside manik opens his eyes slightly and was searching bed for Nandini but he cant find.He opened his eyes and check the washroom and living room ,he tried to call on her phone but she was not responding on other side.He panicked and was going to hit the wall in anger when he saw Nandini note on his bed side. She wrote "First try to calm down yourself,I am sure your morning starts on bad note today because I was not by your side so kiss from me on your lips first and smile.Now as you are leaving your anger from your body so relax ,I forget to tell you last night that I had to go to navya and abhi as it was navya first day of job.So,don't panic,I am with abhi and navya and I would be having my breakfast over here.So you and cabir can have breakfast together today.And I will be back soon.Love you".

He smiled and relaxed knowing where is she.He still lay dwn on his bed and start searching for jobs and apply some of them online and then he went to check cabir room and saw he was still sleeping.So,manik went to kitchen,make some coffee and toast for them and wake him up by kicking him and remind him its navya job today.

Other side,when they were done with breakfast.Navya check the time,she still got half hour so they sit and talk when suddenly their door bell ring.Navya went for the door meanwhile abhi was attending the call from yuvraj.Whne nvay return back it was big bouquet of white flowers with written "all the best for new job".Love :your family. Abhi smiled and pass on the phone to navya. YUvraj on the other line "so,you receive it". Navya smiled and said "yes, I did and I love it.You still remember I love white roses." Yuvraj said "common, we can never forget each other likes and dislikes." Then he said "all the best and then navya pass the phone to Nandini".

Yuvraj teasing her "so,our busy mam is there today". Nandini smiling said "busy is for world,for you guys I am forever free".Then yuvraj said "good ahh,abhi told me you make breakfast for all of them,next time when I am coming over there ,you should make it for me". Nandini teasing him said "no,you should make it for me". Nandini teasing him further said "anyways you are late, I already give navya gift first in morning from all of us". He said " I know,how can you be late for gifts".

After talking with yuvraj Nandini went to kitchen and bring the custard and palce it on table.Abhi and navya shouted "don't say now that you make it". Nandini feeling proud said "yess I make it,what you expect then.Who will serve you custard in morning at 7.30". Abhi and navya puts in bowl and abhi taste its and looks towards Nandini and signs him "thumbs up".They all enjoy sweet when someone knocks the door.Nandini went to cHeck on it.It was all the best card and small gift for navya again.

Abhi and Nandini looking at her and laughing that "so many gifts today ".She opened it and it was from cabir.she smiled.Finally after spending some quality time with each other Nandini said bye to them and leave.Abhi and navya leaves for their work.

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!!such a cute update..
i jus loved it..
u penned it so well dea...
no manan scene in this chapter 😭 i want manan scene each and every chapter...the way u write is awsm dea...hats off 2 u..
n thnks for the lovel n wonderful story
plss update soon..cant wait more
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow full family tym... Dey r so sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
I enjoy reading ur updates...loved this one too...please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow such a cute update
it was too awesome yar
jst loved it
they waynandu was keeping her friends happy
she can do anything for them
she cn knw the status of manik also
loved the family moments
cabir is trying his best feels good to see tht
continue soon
thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
woww...

it's awesome...

plz post next part as soon as possible..

we all are waiting...

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