Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rodi122

i love your writing man i am your biggest fan😛

hey
Thank you so much😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Its such an owsm blossom... Update...

Plz dont take dis to much tym to update more parts u knw na we r always w8ng...

hey
Thank you for liking it and yeah i know its late but thing is i work 7 days and have lots on responsibilites on head,so i try to do as soon i got som ebreak,but i hope to do bit early next time😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

Wow!! again awsm update as always...u penned it so well dea
i jus loved it each and every part
the way u write is jus outstanding...hats off dea
m totally in love with ur ff...ur such an amazing writer...


must say u blessed with ur writing skill...
keep writing...plsss update soon as possible...cant wait soo lpng dea...will be waiting for ur next update...keep smiling..
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Awww,thank you love for ur words of ecnouragement,i really appreciate your love to my story.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iqra286

awww😳 really loved it yr😃 u have penned it down beautifully😳 really loved d lovie dovies n8 wo b in balnket😉☺️ n dn his love bites of cherry on d cake😛😳 bt dt teacher n student thing was really hilirious 🤣 naughty MALHOTRA with naught MURTHY is really a dangerous combination😉🤪 bt dt harshad thing makes me cunfse❓ i thought dt aryaman would be manik's cousin bt its harshad😕 pzz update itx nxt chp soon as will b eagerly w8ting for it😃 until dn tc love ya😳


haha,thank you.
yeah i know all you guys were thinking aaryaman was the cousin so its just twist harshad is cousin 😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 14 (Part 2)

Whole journey there was pin drop silence in car.Neither cabir or navya open their mouth,so finally when navay reach home and she was going to get down cabir holds her hand and said "you want to go for drive for 30 minutes and then I can drop u safely". Navya didn't say anything and was going to check the time,cabir said "its never late for drive and smiled". Navya smiled and said "okay,sure,just wait 10 minutes,I will just run to upstairs and let abhi know and leave my stuff in room". Cabir nods and park the car on side.Abhi who was standing at window saw this and open the door for navya.Abhi said " why you didn't call me to pick you up"?. Navya said "because our Nandini don't want me to do this". Then abhi asked how everything is over there and if navya feels any sadness on her face or anything.Navya smiled and said "relax big boss is excellent,she was same ,smiling,fighting." Abhi smiled and said "thank you for going over there to check on Nandini". Navya said "from when you start saying thank you to me and when you said me in morning that you want to see how things are going over there,I just had excuse to go and I did that not for you but for us.Abhi hugs her and congrats on her job and asked "why cabir I still down there". Navya said "she is just going with him for 30 minutes and then she will be back. Abhi just looks towards her and said "okay,so I will be already slept when you will be back SOgood night and c u tomorrow on breakfast".

Navya locks the door and go downstairs.Cabir smiled and said " you are the first girl I have seen who said 10 min and she is back in 10 minutes". Navya smiled and said "how many girls u date before who let you wait for long time". Cabir was silent and navya breaking the silence said "I was just kidding,I know you have girlfriends before,I was just pulling your leg". And for the time thing "I am not like every other girl out other,I am navya and she winked". Cabir start the car and after 20 minutes of drive he stopped near island.They guys walk for 10 minutes and sit on the bench near the island.

Meanwhile dhruv and alya cooks the dinner for all.And dhruv calls out everyone for dinner.Manik and Nandini come to dining table.Dhruv asked them "where is cabir"? Manik told him that he went to drop navya.Nandini saw the time and asked silently to manik "he is not back yet"? And both of them smile thinking navya and cabir must be together.Dhruv and alya come with food and asked "what is the reason for their smile".Manik said "nothing,just cabir". Then dhruv pass the plates to them.

Four of them had dinner together and dhruv asked them about jobs and plans for tomorrow and inform them that on weekend they are invited to dhruv friend party so in evening all of them are going over there.Nandini notice whenever alya is asking something to manik,he will just give yes or no answer with blank face.After dinner alya was going to get dishes but Nandini stops her and told alya and dhruv that they can go and rest,she and manik will clean out the dishes.

Cabir and navya were sitting and looking at stars and stealing looks at each other.Cabir finally broke the slience and said "did you forgive me"? Navya asked "for what"? Cabir feeling guilty said slowly "I just stop talking with you awhile".Navya said "I was not even mad at you for this,we talk at first moment because I liked you and I want to be friends with you,you stop talking at second moment,it was your decision and cabir I am mature enough to understand that you cannot ever force anyone to talk with you.Ofcourse I feel bad because on my birthday I thought we can grow in relationship but then suddenly I never see any progress from your side and what was the use if I try because you want some space and I give you that." Cabir didn't say anything and was silent. Nvaya puts her hand on his hand and said "you don't have to feel guilty". Cabir asked "so,I want to start new fresh with you only if you want to give one last chance to me".Navya smiled and said "don't take decisions so fast, let's get to know each other,had talks then we can decide further."Cabir said "okay,I will go now like u want to move,until or unless you are comfortable with me,we can decide to be good friends". Navya smiled and said "it's always good to have you as my friend".

Then cabir drop navya and said good night.And when cabir went to home he just laugh seeing manik and Nandini sitting in living room clinging to window facing street.As soon both of the saw cabir they jump from their seat and rushes to door.

Manik and Nandini opens the door and grabs him to couch straight,Nandini went to kitchen to grab food for him.When Nandini arrives she pass on the food and said "start from start now".Cabir laughed and said "what"? Manik teases him and said "don't act like you don't know what we are asking". Cabir puts one bite in his mouth and signs them to wait.Both of them were like "seriously,today is your day".

Then cabir said "we just went for drive and then sit and we had some sensible talk like grownups".Then cabir asked "Nandini, navya is really your friend". Nandini looks at him and feeling proud said "yes, any doubt in that".Cabir smiled and said "yeah,because I have doubt then how come in so many years you never learn from navya.She talks so mature and like confident". Nandini hits cabir with pillow and said "next what happen". Cabir said "then goodnight happen and we decide to move slowly and to be friends first".

Listening to this both of them hand down their faces and said "boring".Cabir laughed and said "so,this was the end of your bed time story,go to your beds ad sleep now" and three of them laugh together.Manik and Nandini said goodnight to him and leave for their room.Meanwhile cabir finishes the dinner.

Nandini washes her face and feet and brushes her teeth where as manik was on ipad waiting for her.Nandini sits on bed and pass on the lotion to manik and puts her feet on manik laps.Manik smiles and start applying lotion and Nandini start doing something on her phone.

Then they guys hide themselves under the blanket and manik was busy in ipad and Nandini was playing angry birds.Suddenly manik throws her phone on side and pulls her towards him and said in sexy voice "so baby,want to learn something from your teacher now".Nandini smiling and running her small fingers on his chest said "sure teacher unless it is worthy to learn that".

Manik laughed and kiss on her lips which make Nandini moans and she start kissing manik back.Leaving the kiss,manik slide his hand under Nandini tee and start touching her breast softly which drives Nandini crazy and she pulls manik towards him and keep moaning his name.Manik pressing it soflty whisper in her ears "I love you". Nandini was already in sensual stage saying manik to stop driving her crazy. Manik pulls her tightly towards him and bite on her ear lobe and start kissing it whispered "so,you like the lesson today". Nandini smiled and said "yeah,I love it,but I want to learn more,you left me uncomplete craving for you more". Manik let Nandini head on his shoulder and said "I left so that tomorrow you crave more and ask to me and winks at her". Nandini hits on his chest.Nandini then ask manik "Manik can I ask you something"? Manik kisses on his forehead and said "anytime baby". Then Nandini was silent for minute,when manik shakes her and asked "what "? Nandini nods nothing and said "just want to know your view on cabir and navya". Manik confused said "you want to ask this from me". Nandini nods.Manik slightly up her chin and said "is there something else you want to ask". Nandini msield and said "no,just this".

Manik said "let cabir and navya sort this matter out,its their lives so let them take time an decide". Nandini agreed and told manik "she starts getting bored at home now,she want to do job".Manik assures her that she will get job soon.

Nandini kisses manik and said "she is going to sleep now". Manik kissed her back and hugged her .She hide her face in manik chest and dozes into sleep.😉😉

Hey guys,how are you all? I am back with new update.I know you guys want early updates but you know i work 7 days and all paperwork have to be done by me😭😭.And when i come home i just crash on bed tired.So,i always write whenever i have some time.but this week i was lil bit free so i present update early.And please always show your support by likes and comments because only that will encourage me to write more .

And lastly thank you to all of you for being reader of my story and loving it,your lovely comments always put smile on my face,😃😃😃.

and good part is i will be postingg next update on weekend only if you guys will give me lots of likes and comments.And my silent readers also.Give your support to me.😊😊.bie now.have to make dinner.🥱🥱


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
navya is really mature person
And manan are alway best
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahahaha dis is interesting cabir nd navya tryng to bcm cavya nw...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
love it
but mujhe aur bhi manan scene chahiye ab tum hare update main manan scene tohra kam hota hai
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update,n dnt stress much,update wen ever u find time

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