Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
I thought yuvraj is gay but then remembered its ur frnd's name.! U won't b doing that 🤣 so girls r playing pranks on their boys! Waiting 4 never have i ever continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like z bold nandu
Y so late
Ok u must be busy
Update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
hehehehehehehhehehehe LOL ohhh gosh... hehehe ManBir misunderstand yuvraaj and he make them owl n fool hehehhee 😉
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It was superb update. ..
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Chapter 11(Part 3)

All of them settled down..boys in 2 tents and girls in other 2.At night they do barbeque and prepare some drinks.They put on their bonfire and sit around the heat in circle all together. After eating manik said "guys let's play game and have some fun today."Cabir supporting him said "yeah,lets have some fun".

Both of them know mukti would say only one name and as per guessed mukti shouted "never ever I have".They smiled seeing each other and all of other agreed to this.Abhi start the game saying "never ever I had gone to strip club."All of them laughed and passed on bowl to drink.Manik,cabir,yuvraj,dhruv had as sip.Nandini gives looks to manik with angry face and manik slowly said "abhi now I am dead because of you".Dhruv was next "Never ever I had slap someone in my life".Yuvraj and Nandini and manik had sip when yuvraj said "Nandini have atleast half bowl for this one."And both of them laughed.Navya said "never ever I had hurt or broke someone heart".Again Nandini and yuvraj and cabir had sip.

Next was yuvraj,he said never ever I had true love in my life.All of them had sip except cabir.Navya saw that but she just ignored and Nandini puts her hand on navya hand and smile.Then alya continue game saying never ever I had heartbreak in my life and he kissed dhruv saying it.Nandini had a sip.She saw all looks sad but she just smiled and said "common guys it's just game,my turn now".She said "never ever I had watch any po*n movie."All of them laughed hard at this.For sure yuvraj,manik and cabir had sip leaving abhi,mukti and alya and navya.Then cabir said my turn now and said "never ever I had kiss any guy".All laughed at this.cabir winked at manik.Nandini,mukti and alya had sip.Manik and cabir looks towards yuvraj as he didn't say anything.last was manik so he decided to take revenge from yuvraj and he said "never ever I had any gay friends in my life".No one had sip and then manik said "Nandini,navya and abhi you should have sip as you guys are having gay friend yuvraj".Right yuvraj.All were shocked listening to this.Yuvraj didn't say anything.Navya shouted "looks like manik you got drunk".Cabir holds navya arm not to interfere.Manik said "so yuvraj,what happened to you now,feeling shy about it.I can fix you with some boy.tel me".Dhruv told manik to stop now and go to their tents for sleep.But manik said "no lets finish the game first,the game he started with us."

Nandini shouted "stop it manik,you don't know anything at all".Yuvraj interrupted "leave it Nandini,it is just for fun,just a game".Nandini in angry mood replied "no,yuvraj,you will not stop me or any other person here will not stop me now".Then she turned towards manik and said "what do you know about him.?You know nothing."Yuvraj holds Nandini hands and told her to calm down when nandini jerks his hand and shouted "yuvraj now you stay away,manik should understand how to respect somebody feelings."Nandini said "you know I never interfere in your life because you have separate friend circle,I have different friend circle.But I have notice this thing since we have reached here you are so insecure and always have rude feelings with yuvraj.why so?"Can I I ask what's the reason. How many times do I need to prove my love to you.How many times do I need to tell you I just love you lot.But still I sense insecurity in you,this insecurity makes me feel like you have no trust on my love.Manik was going to say something Nandini said "let me finish first".She continued then "they are my friends,my life, and yess I do love them,I love yuvraj,abhi and navya and no one can ever force me to stop loving them."

And what if is gay,he would be still my that childhood friend with whom I had some wonderful memories.And if you are angry that he played with you so let me clear this thing ,yuvraj just did what I told him to do,it was my idea,your Nandini idea".So,if you have any issues talk to me.Leave him.Saying all this Nandini just ran from there.And told not to follow her at all.Manik was going to go behind her when dhruv said "give her some time and manik make sure next time you would not do such mistake.this must be lesson for you".All of them leaves from there.Yuvraj was going in Nandini direction when manik and cabir said "sorry yuvraj,we are really sorry".Yuvraj smiled and said "it's okay,I told her to be angry and calm down but sometimes she really lose all that in her".Its okay,I will go and talk with her,you guys just relax.

Manik was just regretting the moments when he said all those things and make Nandini mad and in such bad mood on trip.

Nandini was sitting near lake when yuvraj hugs her from back.Nandini didn't say anything.Yuvraj said "I thought you change but you are still my old fierce Nandini would fight with anybody even her lover for her friends.Yuvraj said "I remember you always fight with other kids in school,it doesn't matter whose fault was,if somebody would say anything to us,you would had tough fight with them. Some happened today,it was our fault but still you rise your temper when they said about me."It is wrong Nandini.We were wrong at first place.

Nandini controlling herself replied"I know I should have control anger but you know we are family.They guys don't know what we are from inside.You know when your parents died and you moved here with uncle and aunt,how you survived here.Doesnt matter how rich our parents were but it was all four of us supporting each other at each and every level of life and we still keep that.We are hard from outside because of the world but when we are together it's just us the normal kids. Meanwhile abhi and navya just hug Nandini from back.

Navya said "so,our soldier is relaxed now".All four of them just sit near lake and see the stars and rewind their childhood memories.When yuvraj said "you go and talk with manik now".Nandini make a face.Abhi pushed her and said "go now,he is still waiting for you and he is sitting outside in cold."Nandini went to manik and he was just shivering and sad.She just hugs him tightly and said "I am sorry baby for getting mad at you".manik relieved by her hug heat replied slowly "no, I am sorry baby, I just spoil your mood on trip that you were excited.Nandini just keep hugging him and told him "no, she was wrong at first palce and loose her temper easily."Nandini holds his hand and told him everything about yuvraj childhood that how his parents died in accident and then he move here alone with his uncle.How four of them were family and always together.She told manik that yuvraj arranged all this trip for them as he was excited to meet you,the person whom I love more than my life.he did all this for me.She told him to go and sleep now as they were leaving in morning.

All of them leave for their tents.Nandini and navya were lying down when navya asked how come today suddenly you got again so high temper mood.Nandini replied "I don't know,today I feel like I was going to my old life ".Navya just hugs her and said "it's okay,you would be fine next morning". When Nandini asked her but are you okay"? Navya knows what she wants to ask but avoiding that she replied "yeah,I am absolutely fine,just tired,lets sleep now."Nandini and navya both sleep thinking about the night events.

Next morning all guys were packing up the stuff and now even manik and cabir and yuvraj were cool all together. Seeing this Nandini made joke on them "looks like boys are sharing love story now".And alya and mukti and navya laughed together.All of them packed stuff and leave for their next destination that was lake.

So,lake was nearby they guys decided to spend some hours and then return to back as they were travelling back to Toronto next morning.They clicked pictures together for their memories.Every couple got their pictures near lake and they were just enjoying sitting next to water.Nandini was sitting when dhruv came and sit next to her.Dhruv said "Nandini,we never talk much so I really don't know where to start conversation with you".Nandini smiled and said "dhruv you can say anything you want because I always see you as my friend."Dhruv smiled and said "I am really sorry for all those bad things that manik did that hurt you so much".Nandini replied "no,you never have to be sorry for that.It was all gone.And I already had forgiven manik".Dhruv said "you know maik is just a little boy who is very sensitive for everyone in his life even when I went into relationship he don't like it.He feels that my love would be less towards him now and this is the reason he and alya doesn't share good bond.He just talk with her because of me.He was always pampered child in our family,overprotective this is the reason that he always thought that whatever he wants he would get that and he always took love for grant.But then you came into his life.he become responsible,he loves you from his heart but still some days he become immature again and doent realise that he is doing wrong but then after harm is done he feels guilty."

Nandini smiled and replied "I know,no one is perfect.even if It's me sometimes I lose my temper and makes mistake but you know what dhruv , when you are in relationship and you love your partner so much that you know that he is the one for you,one has to bend little bit for that love.What if next partner don't want to bend, if you want relationship you should always fight for it and tha what I did".There was time when I thought we would never be together but then I never give up on him,I fight for him and I would still fight because I know I want to spend my entire life with him,with his love".Dhruv smiled and said "he must really have done something good in his life that he got you".

Manik comes and said "so,both of you are bitching about me". Dhruv tease him "yeah just telling your childhood secrets".And they had a laugh.

After spending some wonderful time,they start their back journey to yuvraj home where they would stay night and would leave next morning.All were tired so they call drivers to take them to home.

As soon they reach home they went straight to their rooms as they just want to crash on their beds.Yuvraj was sitting in balcony with phone in his hand doing something and when abhi passes to kitchen he saw him and sits near him and said "so,why are you here all alone".Yuvraj said in sad tone"you all are going back tomorrow.I would be lonely again.I don't want this night to be over ever".Abhi said "let's go to Toronto together then". Yuvraj smiled and said "you know,I can't leave my work like this,I have done my whole life hard work here".Abhi replied "it's okay,you can come in holidays then.you are not so far away from us".

Yuvraj said "you know why I plan this trip for you all".Abhi smiled and said "yeah I know the reason.After all this is the reson Nandini always call us her family".Yuvraj smiled and said "I know you must have done all check on manik this time but still I just want to see Nandini face".Abhi stopped and said "I didn't check anything on manik.I texted our guy in india but then I saw Nandini doing job for him and manik love towards her so I just drop idea."YUvraj looking towards him "how can you.dont do same mistake again.still you should check.you know this time we can't afford any single mistake".Abhi smiled and said "I do understand your situation but you saw Nandini right,how changed she is and how much love both of them had for each other.so lets have them their back to each other.She did right choice this time.you can tell by seeing her face".Yuvraj relaxing said "I know,I was shocked when I saw her but I am so happy that she forgets past and move on".Abhi leaving her seat said "go and sleep now".Yuvraj smiled and said "good night" to him.

Next morning all of them woke up early and get ready to leave.Nandini went to yuvraj room and saw he was sleeping in chair in balcony.She knows that he is sad this moment so he just shouted near his ear and said "morning my baby".YUvraj smiled and side hug her.

All were downstairs ready to leave.Dhruv hugs yuvraj and thanks him for this trip.YUvraj smilingly said "its ok,I was selfish,I arrange this one for me".Manik hugged him and apologies again for whatever misunderstandings they got.

Yuvraj,Nandini and navya and abhi had a hug together and yuvraj said in slow tone "I would miss you guys".Navya said "don't cry now ok.otherwise I would pack you in my bag and take you with us".They smiled and hug tightly each other.And they said good bye to yuvraj.

All of them leave,leaving yuvraj alone standing there at gate.He grabs his phone from pocket and texted someone "Finish the work that abhi gave you on that guy and text me everything about it and make sure abhi would not get any news about his".

After this he opened his facebook and replied to message that he got last night again "Yes dude she is happy really happy without you,stay away from her now.She forgive you but she got new life so don't try to mess it up now.This is your punishment now that you would never get true love aaryaman". And angrily he puts back his phone in pocket.


Next update for you guys...I am gonna sleep now so next morning when i would woke up ,i hope to see lots of lots of likes and big big comments on it.

GUys always do leave your suggestions and always let me know how it is going or anything in you mind.Whenevr you guys leave your comments it boost me uo to write.Otherwise i always feel why i am writing .😭😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update.I hope aryaman is not manik's cousin whom he want to introduce nandani .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...awsumm game
Nandu n manik convo regarding yuvraj...finally all got cleared
But now just hoping tht aaryaman won't CME bck...n create mess
Very well written...superbb
Thnk uh for pm
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar glti nandu ki thi iss baar...
that's grt ki sry bol diye or sb sortout kr diye...
wooo amazing that they r coming back..
But Y yuvraj had still doubts on Manik...
ty for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shivani_telang

yaar glti nandu ki thi iss baar...
that's grt ki sry bol diye or sb sortout kr diye...
wooo amazing that they r coming back..
But Y yuvraj had still doubts on Manik...
ty for pm...

you know when you got best friends who are family for you,they still want everyhting perfect for you.like my best friend he also never trust my bf becoz they love us so much that they never want to c us hurt again.dats why yuvraj is just making sure that nandini got happy relationship this time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update
love it

please ariyaaman ko manan ke bich mat ane dena

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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