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BrishtiDREAMER

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi dear ones...am Brishti...its been only two months since i have joined IF...i have been a silent but keen reader of all the stories here...i am addicted to them...really...every story is unique and heart touching...written beautifully...ur writings have always influenced and inspired me to write something too but am not at all a good writer...but i really wanted to write...and so here i go today with this one...u all can read it if u want...but please send me the feedback through comments...if u all dont like it...then i will stop...so feedback is really needed ...HERE IT GOES "i love u nandini...always have...always will"said manik...nandini who was enjoyigng the sudden yet beautifull rain ...dancing and twirling around, stopped hearing that...yes...he said it...the words for which she was craving...dying to hear...she finally heard it..her heart skipped few beats..a smile of relief,happiness,and pleasure appeared on her face..she was overwhelmed...she didnt know how to react...she just ran towards him...and crashed her lips with his..tears of happiness rolling down her cheeks...he was surprised at her reaction but then he also responded with same force,same passion...as if his life depended on this...breathing heavily..panting they moved apart for air...with each others gaze fixed on eachother...they were lost in their moment when a car came and stopped a bit far...the lady came out if the car and she witnessed everything and grind her teeth with anger..."enjoy ...enjoy today manik..enjoy nandini..but am so sorry gpr you both that you know what your enjoyment will not last for long...i will make sure of it...you two tried to mess up with me??Nyonika???huh!!just wait and watch"she said with a wicked smile on her face and drove off...they were lost and drowning in each others eyes when manik suddenly snizzed."manik...r u okay??"she immediately asked with her eyes full of love and concern..."yes ...i am okay...with you am always okay"...he said with his seductuve husky voice while he cupped her face...he then hugged her tightly..never leting go...then after sometimes slowly they broke the hug while manik coughed...once ,twice,and then more..."manik u have cold i think..lets get back to home.."she said in a concerned and pleading tone..."arey nandini its nothing...lets enjoy na"but he again coughed..."no...we are going home...its final...you will drop me in the cab stand , i will take a cab and you will go home,take medicine and will then sleep"she saud but this time with firmness in her voice..."vut why will i listen to you?"manik makes pout and ask..."because...because i dont eant to see you in even slightest pain manik..."she cupped her daxe and said...her hazel eyes filled with immense concern..love and care.That was enough for him...he wanted to be with her vut he couldnt say no to her...he kissed her forehead and said..."only a slight change ...that is i will drop you"she dudnt argue as she also wanted badly to be with him and she knew he needed her...so here i go with my first chapter of fisrt ever short story..i dont have any idea how is it...i just penned down what ever came to my mind...guys please let me know you like it or not...if not then i will stop it...please do tell ne with your comments...ignore please the typos...waiting for your feedbacks... part1-pg1 part2-pg2 part3-pg3 part4-pg4

Edited by BrishtiDREAMER - 10 years ago

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Garima

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awsm Part!!!
U pened it out very beautifully!!!
Loved it!!!
Conrinue soon!!!
N plzz pm me if u can!!!

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nyc update... plz pm me when u update... 😉

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 10 years ago

its beautiful...u penned each n every line very amazingly...plz do continue soon..

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Ayesha Nazrat

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start bristi. .

continue soon

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice start..

U penned it very well..

Update soon n add a title..

Love,

Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

wlcm to forum dear and Congo 4 new story interesting update continue asap

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BrishtiDREAMER

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Posted: 10 years ago

am overwhelmed...thanks for all your nice comments and likes,it means a lot to me...as it was my first ever i was very excited and tensed as well...however now much releived...i will try to make it more interesting and good..but as my exams are going on i may not update every day but will update whenever i get time...please suggest me the name of the SS...thanks...love u all..live.laugh.love.. 😊

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Addrita Islam

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Posted: 10 years ago

its awesome..u writing is also good..keep it up..continue soon

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BrishtiDREAMER

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Posted: 10 years ago

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this update is dedicated to my first friend in IF...MELLIFLUOUS...thanks for being my friend dear...maniks car stopped infront of nandinis house..."is it necessary to leave u now ...um..i am not so ill nandini..its jyst a bit cold...we could have spent mo.."manik was interupted by nandini who put a finger on his lips...their eyes met and as always they started getting drown in each others eyes...their eyes really expressed more than their words...manik then slowly moved his gaze towards her pink,soft lips and then towards her finger which was in ger lips and he bite her finger..making sure that she wasnt hurt..."manik..."she said..."hmm???"manik murmered and moved closer to herhe leaned forward to torture her lips one more time with his and so he did...she anticipated...then slowly he moved apart only to stare at her flushed and blushing face and her eyes closedhe loved her blushed face...actually he loved everything in,about and around her...his world revolved around her...yes the monster manik malhotra finally realised how much important she was ...rather she was the most important person in his world..."i love u...nandini"he assured her one mote time and he was ready to assure her for lifetime..."i know...i also do"nandini said shyly...after all she was the shy nandini murthy and manik was her first and she knew was last too...she in her mindcursed her shyness which prevented jer from saying those three beautifull words to manik...she knew how badly he longed to hear those from her and that he would never force her ti say also...she smiled inside knowing that the most important person in her life understood her most..."nandu..?manik beta??"chachis cheerfull voice came and brought them out of thei lovely trance..."yeah..um...hi..um..hello chachi...how are you?"manik fumbled and asked .chachi noticed his blush..chachi knew that these two are every day falling for each other...after all she has witnessed their love endevour since begining like cabir...she really loved manik and she always wanted him to be her nandus shahrukh...in brief,she quite knew that they loved each other and she loved thus fact..."hello manik beta...where were you since so long??i always waited for you to come here abd taste my yummy food you know"she chuckled and said..."actually chachi manik has fever...chachi actually we got wet in the sudden rain...and i think he got cold due to that..."..."nandu you are telling this now??hae ayyiaappa,why didnt i see,u both are wet"she exclaimed with motherly concern in her voice..."chachi its ok...am going home only...i will change and take medicine and will sleep then.."he wad looking at nandini and was saying..."you please make nandini change as soon as possible...and please take care if her chachi"said manik and blushed more..."manik beta i will take care if her...and you too...come get inside..."she turned with a grin on her face to see maniks concern for her and walked towards the door.."but chachi i can manage"he said and nandini pouted...she wanted manik to stay there..."i can stay only if chachi allow me to stay in your room"he said in a low,husky ,seductive voice with his famous smirk looking at nandini who even blushed more.."no more talks..manik you are staying here...come get rishabs clothes and then its dinner time beta..."chachi said without looking back and went inside..."so its ginna be fun huh??!!"again with the famous smirk he said then quickly pecked her on lips and went towards the door..."manik..."she touched her lips with her finger and fell a bit more for him...a smile appeared on her face..."coming chachi.."she said and ran into the house...everything seemed soo perfect..to love and to be loved... here is the second chapter...again in need of feedbacks...do tell me how is it so that i get a chance to improve... live...laugh...love... please suggest the name of the SS...

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