A Smiling day -MaNan Ts (Part 2 updated pg3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is lovely ... and I looove that song, one of my faves of late, terrific use!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww... This is sooo amazing!!! Continue soon pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely loved how maink witnessed the familt moment and yet gave them time to enjoy it.
loved how nandu still think about maink and his love
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely...
yaar u r too good in writing this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww ...thank you everyone for your beautiful comments 😳

Part 2
Nandini was more than happy to have such a blessed family along with her to support her at such stage . Nandini's laudatory face was enough to show her happiness . What would she do with out such a beautiful family and such a loving boyfriend , Nandini thought . Thinking of the word boyfriend a deep red colour flushed her face making it ever laudative . She noticed someone standing next to the widow and smiling . Her smile grew deeper seeing that someone . The reason for her to smile was that someone who was smiling at her ear to ear twinkle . She saw him watching through those glass window as if he got his world back . But he didn't enter in it yet . She broke the family hug .
"Ek min chacha .." Nandini said making her way to the main door . She opened the door and found him vanished . Nandini was looking for him through the bushes and the other side of the house . Unable to find him and unable to give up , she gestured as if she was in pain and squeaked "aah !!" . That was enough for the man of her life to come forward and pour out his concern . "Nandini ...kya hua ? ...u got hurt ? ...where did u get hurt ..tell me ? " ..asked he . "Kuch nehi Manik ..kuch nehi hua .." she said . "Meine tumhe cheekte hue suna tha ! " he said looking forward to find any wound on her . Nandini grabbed him and went inside the house.
"Nandini ..Kahan ..wait ...wo .." Manik tried to explain as she pulled him in . Chacha ,chachi and Rishab were more than happy to welcome him . Manik stood there making his face down and looking on the ground while Nandini went back to her silent mode . "Manik ...ham tumhara hi intezar kar rahe the ! " chacha exclaimed with joy . "Haan ..Manik ..we all were waiting for you only !" chachi also said . "Chachi wo..." Manik was about to say something . "Chachi nehi ..ma ! ..Jab mein Nandu ke liye ma hoon ...toh tumhare liye bhi hoon !" cachi said making Manik look into complete shock . While Rishab went and hugged him and chacha too . "Manik beta ...u can call me papa .." he said making Manik to reach twelfth heaven . He didn't know whether to smile or cry with happiness . All of them hugged him and Nandini was looking at him . Manik was overwhelmed to react , but he hugged them back . He gave a small grin looking at Nandini who was seriously staring at him . Manik deserved happiness and his Nandu gave all of it to Manik . But the smile was not enough for Manik . He wanted his Nandu back , that Nandu who would make him smile with her cute gestures .
After breaking the hug , chachi whispered to Manik "Manik ..mein tumhare liye special dish banaya ...idlychole ..try kargoge na ?" Maniks smiling face turned into a puncher ball . He didn't know what to tell , how to divert , how to make her mind change . "Chachi matlab ..m...wo ...mein ...Nandu ko leke ..bahar jana chahta hoon .." Manik whispered to chachi . Cachi' s face glowed into a first stuck bulb . "Wah ! mera sona muda !! ...isse kehte hai perfect timing ...take her anywhere and make her feel refreshed ..." chachi said give full pass ticket for doing what he wanted to . "Thank you soo much ..." said Manik and hugged her .
After few sessions of convincing , Nandini agreed with Chachi to go out with Manik . Nandini and Manik went into the car sitting there with pin drop silence . Manik ignited the car and started driving .Manik and Nandini stole each other's glances in between other than that nothing went along to break their silence . After thirty minutes of driving Manik parked the car at some unknown place and opened the door going out to open the way for Nandini .
Nandini was not very much familiar with this place , as she went forward Manik took Nandini to a vast basement room .Nandini's eyes widened at the sight in front of her . It was a garden filled with her favourite red and white roses and the between of the garden carved in the name "Nandini " Nandini was just looking around the whole place to find her pictures stuck in the wall along with his . There was a small fish pot in between which had gold fishes in it . And a small artificial water pool on the ground filled with water lillies . It was as if just like the feel of Taj Mahal built for her by Manik . She was walking through the whole place with a wide smile and looking around with fascination as if a small child got to see something new . Nandini turned to find Manik who was missing . She was looking around for him and found him nowhere . "Manik ..." Nandini called him hoping to get a response .
The next minute she heard some slow tunes of guitar being played .
Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Manik sang with his heart looking into her eyes ..
Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Manik was in tears looking at Nandu who was just mesmerised by his sweet and passionate gesture

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Manik was looking at Nandu and intertwining her small hands with his huge ones
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...
Manik completed his song making Nandu cry ...
Nandini stayed quite for sometime ...but then she just hugged him tight the next second . Manik felt as if his world has come back to him . He felt as if his life is back to track . "Your not the one to be blamed Manik ...It was never your fault .." Nandini said making him sit down on the couch the other side . "Par Nandu.." ..."Shh...let me speak .." Nandini said compelling him to keep quiet . "Manik ..it was not at all your fault ...tum khabhi iss mein galat nehi the ..u have always protected me and you did the same this time also ...mein bass uss situation ko ...accept hi nehi kar pa rahi thi ..I .. I was .." "Shh,...its ok ...let us forget that incident Nandu .." Manik said holding her hand . Nandini smiled and hugged him and the were just sitting there hugging each other with silence talking about their new battled victory .
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pls comment if you like 😉


Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
aaww dear its so awesome loved it nicely written :):)
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#18
Wow so beautifully wriiten os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Beautiful... love the use of song and the Murthys/Manik moment... looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
aww thank u all of u 😊😊😊

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