Shining like Stars ManNan FF Part 1 pg 1

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Hi Guys this is my first fan fiction I am ever writing please do tell me how it is. Criticism is also welcome. So here it goes...

Nandani's Point Of View:

It's just so refreshing to be back where you were born.. Where you grew up... Abhimanyu Bro and I have come to India after 5 years. Bhai took me with him to London when I was 16. He had found a job in London but he didn't want to leave me here alone, without parents. It feels like I am back where I belong. It feels like I am finally back home. London was awesome too, I loved it there, but Mumbai is Mumbai and nothing can replace it.. We are driving to our house. It is taking longer than it should or maybe it's just because I really want to get home.

We are finally home...

Nandani- Bhai I can't believe it we are finally back..

Abhi- Han Nandu mujhe be yaken nahi aa raha hai ki hum sach mein ghar aa gaye hai..

Nandani- Chalo bhai lets go in..

Abhi-hmm

Maniks Point of View:

It was such a good day today.. Well nothing much happened . As usual Fab 5 jammed together, partied , hung out together and that's about it but there is something that is disturbing me from morning...

FLASHBAK...

Manik- OMG I am going to get late again to pick Mukti up from the airport..

I was rushing to the airport in my car and the there was a Red light.. I wanted to skip it but then I saw a gorgeous cute bubbly girl in her car sleeping on a boy's shoulder... For some reason I felt really bad for seeing the guy next to her, a thousand questions came in my head... who was that guy? Why was he with that girl? Ever since then I can't get that girl out of my head her beautiful face her pouty lips and her angry frown is killing me.

END OF FLASHBACK!!

Manik- stop thinking about her Manik, she is just a random beautiful girl.. Stop thinking too much...

And that's it guys please do comment below if you want me to continue it or not.. and Please suggest names for this FF because I can't think of any... If you want a pm for the next part buddy me please

INDEX

PART 1 : page 1
PART 2 : Coming soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept
love at first sight
Cont soon
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refreshing and interesting concept..
do continue soon
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good refreshing start n give some title to it.
update soon...
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heyyy Congo 4 new story girls its interesting i liked it plz continue soon
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nice!! continue soon 😊
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congo for de new story girl like it cont soon
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THANK U TO ALL THE PEOPLE WITH LOVELY COMMENTS AND THE ENCOORAGEMENT TO WRITE MORE... WILL UPDATE SOON
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