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Posted: 10 years ago
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"this is home not a hotel ?"Nyonika said as she entered the home , they all stand

"yes this is home and i am partying with my friends " Manik said while sitting on sofa he didn't let Nandini stand

"it will be better if you take your friends some where else " Nyonika said and walked to her room

"why she is always like this ? she can't see you are hurt " Nandini whispered

"we should drop the idea of party ?" Cabir said as he look hurt Manik and Dhruv

" no you all come at my place , we can have bonfire out side we will not disturb anyone "Aliya said

"not a bad idea " Cabir said ,he look at Mukti and Navya both looked at each other " i will say if we go to farm house it would be more great " Cabir said

" ya great "Manik at once stand he look at Nandini "Dhurv buddy i need a favor" Dhruv look at him

" bolo" he said

" you go with Cabir ,and give me your bike keys " he said and look at all they all whistle , Nandini hide her face behind the pillow

"Manik you both can even use the car diggy we will not mind " Cabir said

Manik took key from Dhurv and gave his hand to Nandini " see you guys there " he said ,he ran upstairs to get things

"stop him na he is hurt and having pain " Nandini asked Cabir

"you stop him na " Cabir mimic her ,she hit him

" guys why are you wasting your time ?" Manik said

" Manik if you dont want us to go with you its ok " Cabir said and winked at others

" come on we want to be with you guys , for 10 mins i want to take her to somewhere bus " Manik said

"guys it is their day lets give them some space " Mukti smiled and said

" see you guys at farm house " Manik pull Nandini with him her ran out the house


" Manik you are hurt and have pain " as he sat and wore helmet " if you are with me i will be fine " he said and pull her arm made her sit next to him " hold me tight " he warp her arms around him

" Manik where are you taking me ?" she asked as he drives

"to stars " he said drives fast

"Manik " she held him tight he smiled and look at her, her eyes was closed ,he hit break and she kissed his neck , he smiled and took off the helmet

"even i am with you , you are scared " he pull her down the bike

"this is first time i sat on bike " she said

" no second , you did sat with Dhruv " he said

"with you first time and it was not like this " she look at him and smiled

"forget it " he said and " look there " he point at the edge of the hill

"fireflies " she look thousand of them flying here and there

"Mom said if fireflies appear it is true love " he hold her both hands and said

"how you know ?" she asked him

" i know everything about you Nandini " he pick her up from her waist and swing her around

" I love you Nandini " he shouted on top of his voice his voice echo ,she smiled as he made her stand next to him

" i love when you smile ," she touch his lips

" i love when you be possessive for me " she placed her hand on his heart

"i love when you act you don't care , but i am on your mind " she touch his forehead

" i love when you fight for me and with me " she hold his fist

" i love when you hold me close to you and say what all fear you have " she warp her arm around his neck

"i love the way you are Manik , your heart is so pure" she placed her head on his heart

"you know why i brought you here ?" he asked her

"why?" she asked

" remember here you slipped ?" he pointed at the hill ,she tried to see in dark

"is this the same place " she asked him

"yes same ,you know when you cried i wanted to hug you and wipe your tears away" he said

" but Manik ego came in between " she said and look at the city "shall we go " she asked him

"will you always love me this much ?" he asked

"no " she said

"what " he left her and look at her " no " he became serious

"sill Manik , i will love you more " she pull his cheek

"Aah " he cried in pain

" i am sorry " she caress his cheek softly kissed his cheek Nandini see few headlight

"Manik lets go from here " she pull him to bike

"are you running away from something " he look in his eyes and said

"no i am not , lets go from here " she said sat behind him held him tight. the car came close to them Manik started the bike before the car could come close they were gone with the wind


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Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
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sorry for late comment... net issue..

interesting update... i was waiting for update... its really turning good..
bike ride of manan...
one more thing i like about u is u always made a circle like bringing the aliya tatoo in ur ss , or that cliff issue in this part.
u r god gifted naddiya...😊

but m suspicious about the car ..
are they trying to harm them???

do update fast na...
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Really great confession he drives byke with nandini awesome hope it will get to see in the screen too continue soon and raat abhi baaki hai
Edited by sona15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome!! Awesome!! Awesome!!

This I am sure Pious would love to read, if only she didn't had that resolution to not read any KY2 FFs :/
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awesome update
Yaaay manik and Nandu on bike wow I always fantasize then to be on bike ride
This has to be the most beautiful confession of Manan
Super mind blowing update
Thanks a lot for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
My reaction after seeing you updated..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
wohooo mysterious who were in the car????does nandini knows them????awesome update cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Wohooo...!!!
Wowww..!!
Beautiful confession...Just loved it..
OMG..That bike scene haaa...my dream come true..Naddiya..
I wish this bike scene happen in drama...
Bcz I love this kind of scenes...
Plzzz update soon...
Both of your stories are more than awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome n super sweet loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
lovely it was awesoem
i jsut lvoe it

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