short story MaNan Epilogue 81

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yams_ini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Very nyc stry
Cont soon
Waitn
Tanq fr Pm

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Akanksha Jain

@akankshajain05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Wow what an update..
I love it..
Manik becoming naughty..
The best part was manik's blood on nandini's forehead..
Loved the update nadiya.. 😳

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Ayesha Nazrat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

its my third tym i am writing ths comment... my net sucks...

the update was OUTSTANDING... SUPERB...

WORDS R NOT SUFFICIENT TO CHEER UR BRILLIANCY...

U R GOD GIFTED,,, UR MIND IS A FACTORY OF BRILLIANT IDEAS...

U SHOULD TRY ON TV AS WRITER AS SOMETYM U MESMERIZED ME THAN KYY WRITERS...

U R FAB...

MANIK AND HIS WAY O EXPRESSING LOVE TO HIS STAR...

NO ONE CAN BEAT U IN THIS,... I BET.

THE SAREE... hayeee...

the sudden garland fall... on manan...❤️

the accidental blood drip on her forehead... and chutki var blood se uski mang saj gayi... BRILLIANT...👏

the tease manik...😉

mukti u cnt find them baby as they r lost in each other...😆

cabir ... u r a dude bro... always thr to rescue manan...😉

nandu dnt u knw manik is smart in these matters...😉 😃

and HALF WIFE???? like really???

kahan se lati ho yeh ideas... kavi SPOT WIFE and kavi HALF WIFE... 😎

U R UNBELIEVABLY BRILLIANT...👏 👍🏼

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Irrevocable712

@Irrevocable712

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

It was simply amazing...

Manik did believe in all this...really loved it...

N cabin was just too good...😆

Please update it soon...

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

"where were you both ?" they all asked them as they saw them coming in

"by the way how you guys went out " Mukti asked

" why you all are acting like their parents ?" Cabir asked

"we went to get food " Manik said and placed the packets on the table

"they went to get food and we all gutter mind " all the girls look at each other in embarrassment

"what you both are giving me in giving you guys time and sneaking you guys out " Cabir placed his arm on them and asked ,Nandini blushed and Manik smiled

"Anything " Manik said

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Wohhooo. .. lovey dovey promo. ..

Cabir u rocked. ..

And girls plzz stop being there parents. . They are mature enough to think about themselves.

Stop nuzzling ur nose between them...

Keep kam se kaam. ...

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khadupam

@khadupam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Wow
Cabirs help again
😃
Just Soo love him
Continue soon

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aliyaangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

lolllzz they r soo smart...fooled them all...
poor them got embarassd...
luv our cupid cabiirraa.. he vl surly get nythng as a reward... awsme promo...
update soon plzz..

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aliyaangel

@aliyaangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

sorry forgot to commnt on the previous ch..
cavya weddng preparation... wooww
manik n nandiniz garland scene ws nyc..
manik is a gentlemen..
my god that blood on forehead scene is wooww..
luls lyk evn destiny wants them togethr...
both the momz r such cupids..
aliyaz behaviour is confusing..
cavya married n manan dissappearz... hehehe
smart manik..phne off no connction.. no disturbance.. btwen half hubby n wifey ... ;)
love it alloitt... update soon...