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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute!
Cabira is all time saviour!
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" i think Manik has taken her to the roof " Cabir pointed toward the stairs
" Manik you are gone this time " Mukti naughtily smiled " i want to catch them red headed " Mukti smirk
"i am also coming "Navya Aliya Dhruv all ran upstairs

"get lost from here "Cabir opened the door and said Manik let go Nandini cupped his face and kissed his cheek "yeh kya " Cabir wipe his face in his shirt , he grab Nandini hand and push her towards him
"she is there for all MUUUaaaHHH " he angry said , Nandini hide her smile
"Cabir you are so cute " Manik pull his cheek
"Cabir yar they are not here ?" Mukti said from stairs , Cabir and Manik look at each other
Manik picked up Nandini and ran out of the main door
"Manik " she was in surprise wrap her arm around his neck
"if you will walk in this you will take 10 mins to get down " he was in parking area in no time, as he made her stand ,next to his car
"Manik were are we going " she asked him nervously as he opened door for her
" they will disturbed us here i will take you to somewhere else, so we can continue where we left" he stare at her she was hesitating to sit
"are you nervous ?" he hides his smiled and asked
"no no not at all " she seated ,her saree pallu fall out of the car he picked it up and placed it in her lap
" if i knew you will have so much problem in this i would have brought something else " he seated and said
"i am fine " she said , he drives out of the compound
"Manik " she said in low voice
" yes " he look at her in side mirror and said
"where are we ?" she paused as she saw him parking car out side a fast food restaurant
" what would you like to have ?" he asked her and burst into laughter " crazy girl what you though where i was taking you " he saw a astonishment in her eyes "Pagal " he smiled
"Manik " she hit him
"bolo na " he said
"what so ever you like ?" she smiled and said
" ok " he walked out of the car
"Manik is really crazy " she blush and pat on her head , she was looking at him from the glass wall , he was talking to the guy and looking at her , she saw him coming with ice cream ,he stopped and throw the spoon in the bin
"what " she recollect how she made him eat last time
" here you go , he have to wait for 15 mins " he seated and said
" why you throw the spoon ?" she took it from him he hold her hand and kiss her finger
"spoon is here " he smiled
"Manik "she look around
"no one is watching us " he said "ok give me " he took it from her hand
"Manik " he had dig in his finger in ice cream cup
"aah " he brought it close to her mouth " fast or it will melt " he said ,she shyly opened her mouth he brought close to her and quickly have it himself "MMM so yummy " he lick his lips
"Manik " she look at him angrily
"you want to eat " he smirk and asked
" no " she said angrily or started looking out ,he brought his finger near her
"Nandini have it or i will drop it and then " he was near her face . she look at him " you know what i mean " he lick his lips "i can't waste icecream " he smirk naughtily . it was melting on his finger .his hand move close to her neckline ,she look at herself
"Manik "she grab his hand and lick it off , his eyes soften with emotions ,she took the cup from his hand , and wipe his finger in her saree "aah " she smiled and brought her finger close to him he blinked and hold her hand gently and have it
"you have become so naughty " she had herself and smiled
"if anyone else will offer me like this i will slap her seriously " he had again from her finger and kissed it


"mmm quite interesting "Aryaman look at them
" he is enjoying with Nandini , and for last 7 years my sister like crazy loved him " Harshad said in anger
"i have and idea , i will fall for your sister , and we can see does it makes Manik jealous " Aryaman said
"My sister , you said you liked Nandini " he said and asked him
" i guess it is not easy to walk in her heart ,she is so much in love with him " he saw them going . she was smiling at him
"i don't know i just want Manik should be hurt "Harshad said
( guys to much Pandit , i am making him vanish from my SS , i hope you guys dont mind )

"will you manage to walk upstairs ?" he asked her
" for you i must learn to manage it " she held his hand
" sweet " he peck her as she come out of car
"Manik " she look around
"ice cream thi" he winked
"liar liar pants on fire " she poke him he locked the car
"really " he smirk and smile naughtily
"Manik wait a second" she held his arm and pull it
"Kya" he look at her ,her hand was on his shoulder and she slowly moved up
"Nandini "Manik look around
"lipstick thi " she wipe his neck side and hit him on his chest " oh God Manik your heart is racing " she smiled ,he held her hand and walked upstairs

" i am really not getting where they vanished " Mukti said will watching the video "till here they were here , and then they are missing " she rub her chin

Door bell ring , Mukti opened it
"where were you both ?" they all asked them as they saw them coming in
"by the way how you guys went out " Mukti asked
" why you all are acting like their parents ?" Cabir asked
"we went to get food " Manik said and placed the packets on the table
"they went to get food and we all gutter mind " all the girls look at each other in embarrassment
"what you both are giving me in giving you guys time and sneaking you guys out " Cabir placed his arm on them and asked ,Nandini blushed and Manik smiled
"Anything " Manik said
"really " Cabir
"yes for precious moments i can offer anything " he said and smile

"Nandini you tell did you guys did it ?" Mukti came closed and asked
"we just have ice cream and waited to get the order " she look at Manik hide her smile and said innocently " and we brought for you all "
" uff Nandini i am not asking about Ice cream " Mukti had a facepalm
"your company has made her too clever " Cabir winked
They all were having food when Manik went close to her, he cleared his throat
" what " she said while eating
" really you didn't get what Mukti said " he didn't said ,she stuff his mouth with pizza slice
" i don't anyone to know about our personal things ,and that was too personal " she took a bite and look at Aliya who was looking at them ,she move forward and remove crumb next to Manik lips . he was surprised to see her


"when Manik has brought paper plates why you are unnecessarily using these? " Navya and Cabir were fighting in kitchen
"yar " Cabir made face
"Cabir you will wash all these dishes aur call your biwi " Navya shouted
"biwi ji " Cabir smiled and pull her cheek
"oh tou hum hain " Navya look at others they all were laughing

" Cabir and Navya married life fight one " Manik had capture the video he naughtily smiled
"Manik if you try to upload i will see you " Cabir warn him
" deleted " Manik quickly deleted it

" wait a second Cabir what you both are cooking here " Mukti come forward and asked
"oh God not again Mukti , Mama is gone did she hire you to take care of us all " Cabir teased her
' i will kill you , and now i am sure it was you who helped them in sneaking out from here " Mukti said


Name this SS i will select the best
Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think you should name it : His Star,Her Solace :')
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Posted: 10 years ago
Damn that Aryamaan and Harshad
First he wanted to break them but now wants to take revenge as manik is not with Aliya
God this man needs a reason to trouble and hurt manik
Just hope in all these Manan relation doesn't affect badly with MUs and all
and naughty manik always find reason to kiss and peak Nandu very smart
So teasing session is still on for Manan
Hehe
I liked how Nandu told manik about not sharing their personal moments
Nandu is noticing now couple of times Aliya looking at them.. I think she will figure it out that Aliya still feels for manik somewhere
I really want Nandu Aliya talk on this and make Aliya understand and move on
Hahaha enjoying Cabir Navya fight
Superb update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful , loving it

just one suggestion pls
If you mentioned your all chapter's page wise on page 1

so everyone can easily find the all chapters

and I will also read again :) as I love ur stories
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vanivartika

wonderful , loving it

just one suggestion pls
If you mentioned your all chapter's page wise on page 1

so everyone can easily find the all chapters

and I will also read again :) as I love ur stories

i guess you haven't check page one once
its second post has the index


my all the stories has its index on page one only click the link it will open no need to add page number it does not open itself
Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow yaar amazing the way cabir helped dem out and den manik deleted der video mukti judgmnt abt cabir helped dem to excape its ultimate plz upload new part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter
Cabira got kissed!

He helped them to sneak out...

Manik got icecream!
Loved the icecream wala scene...

Nandu dodged Mukti s question so easily And innocently!

But Mukti mein abhi bhi CID ka bhoot Chada hua hai
she figured out it was Cabir who sneaked them out!

Harshad ki toh!
Aur woh ayushmam bhi koi kaam nahi hai!

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super cute specially the ice cream part
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved it cont soon di n sorry in advancr for such chotu comment

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