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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BriNi



interesting alia... if it is like that... then plz continue fast fast... 😊


Sure as I m a newbie I cant post more dan 10 but vil try to post...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
It's a nice one..
check ur scrap..I gave some suggestions..
hilarious was chotu ka grand pa one..
well penned it very well..
update soon..
Thanks for the scrap..
Love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on yu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aliavardan


Dude its not lk ek villain... In ek villain chootu was her bf her chootu is some one son... Nd real obstacle is yet to come dat is pandit... Who vil come in 3rd or 4th part.. Nd Pandit vil b first intrested in nandini not manik...



ohhh m sorry i jst felt lik dat due to police station scenen n ol dat
hope u dnt mind
srry again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
its was sooo funny i jst cudnrt stop laugin :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI DEAR ITS SOOO GUD I LIKED IT I READ ALL PARTS ITS AMAZING WELL DONE PLZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
PROMO

Manik nd Nandini get back to bunglow in search of chotu...


Reality of chotu reavealed...


A new entry...


Nandini nd Manik having fight abt new guy...




STAY TUNED...

Guys needed a suggestion whom do u want as new entry

Soha...

Harshad...

Pandit...
But d entry for promo guy is a change person he is somebody.. Elsr..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Harshad or pandit but not soha pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
iwow
Too good yaar
Loved it
Plz Harshad ko Lao yaar
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Sorry guys...
I was busy in a wedding... So could not update but tommorow for sure pakka...
Missed u all.. 😳 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Nandini nd manik along vith mariyan ener d bunglow...

Dey search for chotu everywere ven suddenly a boy abt age 20 comes dere...

Manik in rude voice: toh tum ho chotu.. Come vith me

Boy: how do u know me I really dont know you... Sorry to say dat..

Manik: watever!! Now come...

On d other side even nandini finds a small boy of age 5

Nandini: oh... Cutee pie.. I got u come vith me chotu..

Boy: hmm... If u give me blig (big) chokki (chocolate) only den...

Nandini: oh... Pakka baby... By d way how come u r sp charming wen ur mon is lk a draculla..??

Boy: Dont know...

Nandini comes vith chotu nd even manik comes vith chotu

Nandini cing towards d boy who.is vith manik: who is he?? Cant even do one work properly... Fool

Boy vith manik :.Beautiful!!!!

Manik: he is chotu...

Nandini: no dis cute boy is chotu

Manik: he is chotu

Nandini: no he is chotu

Mariya: no dis is chotu...

Mariya comes dere vith real chotu

Nanidini nd manik in unison : chotu ek choohe ka naan hain!!!(chotu is name of arat)

Mariya: haan!!

Nandini gets scated of rat nd runs...

Nandini: bachooo..!!!

Nandini collides vith chotu who was vith manik..

Boy helps her...

Boy: my actual name is dhruv

Boy : Dhruv naam toh suna hi hoga

Nandini: haan tum vahi idoit ho jo... Aliya ke saath flirt kar rahe the... Idiot... Maron parents did not teachu manners

Boy: Cool down... Flirting us so much fun.. Hain na mr. Rude tellinganik

Manik: mera naan manik hain ... Get it straight in ur head

Dhruv: yaa... Okay.. Noww sat her flriting is so mich fun

Manik:Chotu... She doesnt know meaning of fun...,she us serious types...

Nandini: watever!!! Making weird faces

Manik: Same here

At dat time she gets call from her father...

Nandini: hey... Dada...

Mr murthy: hai beta... Tera voh.dost pratap tujhse milla chata haim

Nandini: main kisi,pratap ko nai janti...

Mr murty : Nandu... Waho jotera chocolate chori kartha tha ( who used to rob ur choclates)

Nandini : acha pattu...

Phone was on d speaker so pratap said

Pratap: pattu nahi pratap, major pratap

Nandini: fatto!!!

She cuts d call... Gives money to manik...,nd goes home vith dhruv

Alya: hey dhruv... My baby

Mukti: aagaya.. Alya ka doggy... (came c alyas pet)

Nandini: keep quiet... She loves him

Dhruv is a very rich parents son... He roams all over d world.. He is a commercial pilot... He is all time flirt... He nd aliya r in relationship from 6 months...

Nandini: U both enjoy... Me nd mukti vill go for a walk...

Mukti: wats wrong vith u...

Nandini: dat fattoo patto is back... He wants to marry me... Wat to do??

Mukti: Say ur dad na...

Nandini: Tried... But no use... Do u know I hv never cn such a coward lk him... He os a army man... But is scared of cockroaches...

Mukti:.Wow.. Haan..

On otherside manik is vith his father

Raghu: Manu( manik)... Tujhe ek business man ko kidnapp karna hain... Aur ageka bad main batoonga ( rest plan vil say u later...

Manik: okay.. Baba

Manik.gets a call from cabir...

Cabir: bhai...

Manik: actually.. Mein na... I m sorry ... I m kidnappinv a rich businesssman

Cabir: not agin mein tera kya karoon (wat should I do vith u)

Manik: I want ro meet u... Ryt now...

Manik,cuts d call... He remembers dat he had to call nagesh... He helps him in kidnapping... But byistake he ,calls nandini...

Nandini: wat?? Y did u call me

Manik does not identify d voice nd thinks sge is nageshs wife

Manik: Give d phone to ur husband...

Nandini: wat idiot Im unmarried

Manik listening d words idiot gets to know its nandini

Manik : Tum nagesh je saath kya kar rahi ho

Nandini: who.nagesh??

Manik: from whose phone u r talking...

Nandini: its my phone... samsung gallexy ace 3...,new version... Nd starts giving add of her phone

Manik gets angru nd cits d call... Nd calls nagesh nd telks him d work..

Precap: manik to kidnap d busness man...

Keep guesssing who is d business man

Plz do read nd comment...
Nd sorry for boring update shocks r yet to come



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