Manan FF: Bekhabar

Hi guys this is my first try...

CHARACTER SKETCH:
MANIK: A unknown person. He is from mumbai. He is a non honest person. He doent care for anybody. He was 8 yrs old wen somepeople killed his parents.Than a person named Raghu adopted him. Raghu was a criminal. Being with him eve1 Manik became a criminal.
NANDINI: A sweet, naughty girls. For he life is worth living. She has a father. She was first in Goa but on her frnd alya's insistence she shifted 2 mumbai. She is millionair
ALYA: A Millionair. She is a fashion designer. Nandini nd mukti are her best frnds. She is a fun loving cheerful person.
MUKTI: She too has a rich parents. Who dont care abt her. She left dem nd stays vith alya.She is aphotographer along vith alya.
CABIR: Patner in crime vith manik. He is not a criminal. He jist cant c manik in pain. So wenever police arrest manik cabir comes nd saves him. He is a richi rich person. He is not involved in crime.
NAVYA: She is maniks younger sis . Who stays in abroad. Manik never disclosed d true face of him to her. According to her manik is CEO of some big company in,mumbai.
So plz do hit like if u liked it.. If I get atleast 9 comments den surely Ill update 1st part...


Index...

Part1: pg 1
Part2: pg 2
Part 3: pg 3
Part 4 - pg 5
Part 5 : pg5
Part6: pg 6

4 more comments or likes den ill surely post by 4:00pm in evening... pakka promise...

So here it goes according 2 my promise...

A man is runnig here nd dere 2 save his life. He is shouting so dat someone can hear him...
Man: Plz forgive me I wont betray boss again...Plz

But to his bad luck he is killed mercielessly... His mother nd sister came running to save him bit it was too latebut saw d person who killed him... He has bern sent to jail... He is nonother den Manik...

Manik: dere is no forgiveness to betrayel... U betraued my dad... So it has only one punishmemt dat is death.

Inspectors come nd arrest manik...

ACP Aditya: Now say me,abt raghu den I vil for sure set u free

Manik: never ever he us my father... I m noy betrayal like u
ACP bets him nd trys hard so dat he says d truth... But didnt gin any thing...

On other side... In shopping mall
A girl has been forcefully been taken by some goons... A girl comes nd shouts on dem

Girl: how dare u try to force dat girl...
Goons: Hey girl dont try act smart
Girl: Dont u know Nandini is already smart
Nandini calls the Inspectors nd frees dst girl from their hold..

In police station she scolds d goons... Nd by mistakly sees Manik been beaten by ACP...un knowingly tear drops falls from her eye...
Nandini: Inspector uncle... Why r dey beating dat man so mercielesssly??
Inspector: He has killef thousands of people mercielessly

Just den she gets a call from someone she quicky reaches police station

Precap: Manik getting free from jail... Nandini Alya mukti... To have coversation

So guys... Here is my post according 2 my promise... plz do comment

awesome...loved it
nice start...pls continue soon...

Part 2
In jail... Cabir comes nd rescues manik as he was,vryrich
Manik: Thanks dude.. Tune mujhe phir se bachaliya.. I,know ki main tujhe bahoot problem deta hoon but main kya karoon... I cant disobey my dad...
Cabir:Mujhe thoda sa doubt hai.. Tu manik hi hai na?? kahi maine kisi aur ko tho nahi bachaya na??
Manik: Tu khabhi nahi sudharega..
Nd both laugh
On d other hand... Nandini, alya, nd mukti busy discussing...
Nandini: Alya kya kare.. Humhain maria ki help karna chahiye
Alya:But seriously nandu... How can v help her I know ki chootu usna beta hai par hum madat kareen toh kareen kaise...
Mukti:ya nandu... She is ryt.. We have noways to help her

At dat time nandu remembers abt manik

Nandini:Got it guys... I saw a man today in police statoin he can help us nd now our plan vil work for sure

Alya nd Mukti: really!!!

Alya: wat is his name??
Mukti: how much amt does he need.. Nd were vil v find him???
Den suddenly she remembers dat she doesnt know any thing abt him

Nandini:Guys I dont know anythng ant him... Sorry
Alya:Now wat 2 do??? How 2 help??
Suddenly mukti gets an idea

Mukti: Guy how abt v go d policstation nd ask to inspector itself he must b knowing him na...

Dey leave for policestation... Nd ask to inspector
Nandini: uncle need help... Apko yaad hain subha yaha ek criminal tha..plz humhai uske bare main bataiye hain
Inspector: in shock beta tujhe sach main uske baremain jana hain... Voh bahoot khatar nak hain... Seriously
Nandini, alya,mukti: together haan... Ab bataiye na...
Inspector: tum log kolad ke shinig bar main jao vahi milega tumhain voh ...

Dey live police station... Nd reach shining bar
Alya: patanahi aur kithni ghatiya jage janapadega...
Nandini:Chill na yeh last time hai...

Den nandini sees manil dancing with a girl... Nd teels alya ndukti abt him
Nandini: voh dekho alya ,mukti,... Voh raha inspector ne kahan thauska naan manik hain
Mukti:Naam kaisa aur voh kaisa...

Dey go near manik... Nd pull him in a corner
Manik:wat the hell... Tumlogo ne corner main kyu kheecha jo karna hain vahi karlethe hai...
Nandini: himhain tumse kam hai aur tum hain ache khaase paise bhi denge...
Manik:Fine... Wats d work.. Dont ask me to bdo cleaning work of ur house...
Alya:Shut up... Nd listen to wat u shld do...
Dey explain d plan...

Precap: Manik nd girls on mission nd Manik getting stunned to c wat he has 2 do

aliya...

its awesome...loved it...
continue soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...

with love
aavani

nice !! am loving it..

nice waiting for next part