LOVE K LIE KUCH BHI KREGA update-pg145, NO COMMENTS pls - Page 43

Originally posted by: rini_4

I just luv when they tease each other nd manik he is always jealous..they r soo cuteee ..nd the way u portray then by ur writing is simply superb... nd I luv whn nandini threatened goons by saying " jate ho.. ya police ko call
kru.. Ye campus area h.. Already kafi security
h aas pas.." impressed haan tht was also awsum... yrrr whn they will confess there luv ..nd dear its a request if u can add some romance in upcoming chptr.. we luv manan romance ;) ..its a request ..its totally up to u nd I m dam sure that if u have thought smthng else it will also worth reading...
stay blessed nd keep writing... :)

Can't digest so much appreciation.. Hehhe. Love u girl..
Romance and confession is indeed on my mind.. That will be a special manan update.. I do have many things to show.. Wait for teaser.. And seriously I love ur comment.. Thnku..

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

Kya update he very nice huh read all the chapters in a go
Awsome track
Loved the update and story
Update fast patience nahi he mujh me plsss

Love
Angela

I guess this is ur first comment on my story.. Thank u so much for that. And u read it in one go.. That's overwhelming.. keep appreciating my story.
Will update soon.. Wait for teaser..
Stay blessed..

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Awww cute cute moments nd convos of manan.. Srsly, u nailed it..Nd m wondering, how u paired aryamaan&alia, dhruv&soha.. I think dy'll make a grt cple together..wanna c sum more chemistry&physics..hehehe lol.. Update soon dear...god bless u..

heheh.. Thanx kavyashree.. U liked the pairing.. U liked the way how I paired them..
Thnku.. This post was much needed.. More chemistry and physics and biology is on my mind.. Don't wry..
Hehehe.. Stay connected.. And by the way.. This is ur first post on my story.. Thnku..
Have seen ur scrap.. Take care.. Stay blessed. Keep appreciating my story.

nice update...thanks fr the pm

amazingly awsm candy sry i can't give u long cmnt this tym as I'm soo tired and was not feeling well so tc stay blessed
keep smiling and gn sd 😊
ek song for manan
Tere hone se hi mera hona hai..
tujh ko khona jaise khud ko khooonaaa...
Tu jo hain toh mai huu...
u jo hai toh mai hoon 😉 😛

NICE CHAPTER

chapter 23 was awesome...
update is filled with confused feelings...emotions...understanding...care..jealousy...so mixture of emotions ...
loving the way u shaping up each character...especially aliya..navya..soha...and ..dhruv...!!!
coming to manan...loved their nok-jhok...unsaid feelings...cute budding friendship...and mainly manik jealousy...
hoping that this jealousy will give us good result in manan relationship...!!!
u penned beautifully...!!!!
one quality i love in ur writing is u give equal importance and space to each characters...!!! its really commendable...
and hoping that soon mukti's character will also shape up well...!!!
continue soon...
eagerly waiting for ur next update...!!!
take care...

as usual coming to my favorite parts...




Scene3 - loved brother & sister bonding a lot

Aryamann "And I promise I won't leave u till my last breath.." while cupping her face..
Soha smiled with teary eyes and said "kha Nandu ki kasam" and both broke into laughter.. He hugged her and she hugged him back. Aryamann recalled the moment his mother left their home and a tear dwell into his eye but he didn't let it fall..


Scene4-loved bold and strong nandu

Manik moved Nandini aside while fuming in anger and took a step towards those guys. But before he could take another, Nandini had held his hand and had come forward.. Manik was surprised.. Nandini stood in front of Manik holding his hand facing those guys. Before Manik could react Nandini shouted " jate ho.. ya police ko call kru.. Ye campus area h.. Already kafi security h aas pas.." while gritting her teeth..

The guy sitting at the driver seat gestured the other guy and they left immediately.. Manik couldn't believe what just happened..
Nandini turned to him and asked " IMPRESSED .. Hannn?" . Manik immediately closed his mouth.


Scene 5 - confused feelings of aliya and dhruv...!!!
Aaliya sighed and said " bcz SOMEONE has told me not to get angry."
Aaliya giving fake smile said "yaaa.. whatever" and then thought " why m I thinking about aryamann"..

Dhruv was lost in his thoughts.. He recalled soha's teary eyes, her frustration and their first encounter..

Scene 6 - cute cupid cabir

Cabir " u have ur jacket na.." Manik " jacket!! Ya..why?"
Cabir " damn.. rainy season.. Night... Cold air currents.. Jacket aise SCENE me bahut important h"


.Scene 7 - loved navya and soha's emotional convo

Navya again faking her smile "hum. Hum to ekdum MAST. Hume kyaaa..". Aryamann " yaa.. both of u are MAST.. and alike.. give fake smiles to hide ur pain."

Soha "navya.. One must be blind, if he can't see what you feel for that..." Navya took a sigh and said "to tumne hume yaha apne lie nhi. humare lie bulaya" . soha smiled.
Navya sadly "hum pehle bahut roe. Fir socha acha hi hua jo hume jaldi sb pta chal gya.. aur ab tumahra concern dekh k to hume bura b nhi lag rha.. nandu ne kaha b tha k ye Infatuation ho skti h.. wo sahi thi. Pyaar hota to dard hota bahut." Soha hugged her and navya hugged her back.. Soha asked "Do u still believe in love". Navya "hmm.. Par hum smaj gye k pyaar k lie do logo ka ek dusre ko janana zarrori h. Kuch time saath chalna zarrori h"


Scene 8- loving this jealous manik a lot...!!!!

Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

NICE CHAPTER

scene 1

there i love ariyaaman ki protectiveness

scene 2

I love manan scene

actually i love all manan scene but this best

scene 3

ariyaaman and soha convo was emotional

scene 4

manan scene are awesome and cute

I love manik protectiveness

scene 6

manik and cabir convo was funny

manan scene are also nice

scene 8

I love jealous manik

and jaket scene

continue soon

ab main ne long comment kiya now you happy

thanks for the pm

Hayee.. Sonia darling.. Thnku.. And u know what made u write this long comment.. Lol.. Last time Tu Bach k bhag gai thi.. Anyway.. Thnku.. Thnku..
Love u loads.. Keep commenting .. Keep liking.. Thnku

Originally posted by: aavani

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">chapter 23 was awesome...
update is filled with confused feelings...emotions...understanding...care..jealousy...so mixture of emotions ...
loving the way u shaping up each character...especially aliya..navya..soha...and ..dhruv...!!!
coming to manan...loved their nok-jhok...unsaid feelings...cute budding friendship...and mainly manik jealousy...
hoping that this jealousy will give us good result in manan relationship...!!!
u penned beautifully...!!!!
one quality i love in ur writing is u give equal importance and space to each characters...!!! its really commendable...
and hoping that soon mukti's character will also shape up well...!!!
continue soon...
eagerly waiting for ur next update...!!!
take care...

as usual coming to my favorite parts...

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#FF0000" size="4">Scene3 - loved brother & sister bonding a lot</font><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="4">

<font color="#0000FF">Aryamann "And I promise I won't leave u till my last breath.." while cupping her face..
Soha
smiled with teary eyes and said "kha Nandu ki kasam" and both broke
into laughter.. He hugged her and she hugged him back. Aryamann recalled
the moment his mother left their home and a tear dwell into his eye but
he didn't let it fall..
</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Scene4-loved bold and strong nandu </font>

<font color="#0000FF">Manik moved Nandini aside while fuming in anger
and took a step towards those guys. But before he could take another,
Nandini had held his hand and had come forward.. Manik was surprised..
Nandini stood in front of Manik holding his hand facing those guys.
Before Manik could react Nandini shouted " jate ho.. ya police ko call
kru.. Ye campus area h.. Already kafi security h aas pas.." while
gritting her teeth..

The guy sitting at the driver seat gestured
the other guy and they left immediately.. Manik couldn't believe what
just happened..
Nandini turned to him and asked " IMPRESSED ..
Hannn?" . Manik immediately closed his mouth.
</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Scene 5 - confused feelings of aliya and dhruv...!!!</font>
<font color="#0000FF">Aaliya sighed and said " bcz SOMEONE has told me not to get
angry."
Aaliya giving fake smile said "yaaa.. whatever" and then thought " why m I thinking about aryamann"..

Dhruv
was lost in his thoughts.. He recalled soha's teary eyes, her
frustration and their first encounter..</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Scene 6 - cute cupid cabir</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Cabir " u have ur jacket na.." Manik " jacket!! Ya..why?"
Cabir " damn.. rainy season.. Night... Cold air currents.. Jacket aise SCENE me bahut important h"
</font>

.<font color="#FF0000">Scene 7 - loved navya and soha's emotional convo</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Navya
again faking her smile "hum. Hum to ekdum MAST. Hume kyaaa..". Aryamann "
yaa.. both of u are MAST.. and alike.. give fake smiles to hide ur
pain."

Soha "navya.. One must be blind, if he can't see
what you feel for that..." Navya took a sigh and said "to tumne hume
yaha apne lie nhi. humare lie bulaya" . soha smiled.
Navya sadly "hum
pehle bahut roe. Fir socha acha hi hua jo hume jaldi sb pta chal gya..
aur ab tumahra concern dekh k to hume bura b nhi lag rha.. nandu ne kaha
b tha k ye Infatuation ho skti h.. wo sahi thi. Pyaar hota to dard hota
bahut." Soha hugged her and navya hugged her back.. Soha asked "Do u
still believe in love". Navya "hmm.. Par hum smaj gye k pyaar k lie do
logo ka ek dusre ko janana zarrori h. Kuch time saath chalna zarrori h"</font>


<font color="#FF0000">Scene 8- loving this jealous manik a lot...!!!!</font>

</font><div align="left"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#0000FF" size="4">Manik was feeling jealous but he thought "its normal. M also concerned for my friends."

Manik couldn't smile this time and asked "he is.. ur.. ur
best friend".. Nandini "no.. he is my ONLY best friend". Manik was
feeling even worse.. He uttered "nandini"

Manik was speechless.. He thought " does she know I.. I.. Love.."
Suddenly
Nandini said " I know that.. That... That.. u are not a kadva karela"

<font color="#333333"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">awesome work dear...!!!
take care

with love
aavani
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Hey aavani...
I can't imagine my story without ur comment.. Don't ever stop commenting.. Seriously..
Chahe kuch b ho.. I love ur comment like anything.. I can't explain.. Have no words..
U don't know but I never read my post after updating.. But I do read my lines that u have quoted..
Seriously don't ever try to stop commenting.. Just tell me if u like it or not.. Whatever it is..just tell me..
Next Manan update will be dedicated to u for sure.. Seriously.. Jab b next Manan update hoga I will be for u.. And thnku for ur broad analysis..
Mukti's character is shaping.. The process is on though going a little slow.. Just wait for some time..
Love u loads.. Keep shinning.. Keep loving my story.
Alwz stay blessed