chapter 21 was as usual awesome...loving ur story a lot
manan scenes was mind blowing...loving other couples also...i mean soon to be couples...😉
alya and aryamaan...for me their love is book wala love...!!!😆
dhruv and soha...cute and funny and lovable couple...
waiting for cabir and navya's connection...hoping that soon it will work out because they r going to be the official manan cupids...!!!
u penned so perfectly...
finally harshad showed his real flirty face...!!!! 😡
my favorite scenes and dialogues from this part...
Scene1---*-----(garden)-----*----
Rain drops were falling on her lips.. She sucked her lips. Suddenly Manik's phone rang and Nandini got scared..
Manik smirked and said " relax.. phone bell h.. thunderstorm nahi" .. Nandini recalled their hug and turned being embarrassed and nervous. She bit her lower lip and slightly pat on her forehead..
Manik on phone" ahh.. yes sir.. we are coming".. And he hung up.. Listening this Nandini turned and in her nervousness said " raghav sir the na.. Aaiappa.. Main kaise bhul gai.. Ma'am must be searching me in the hostel.. Itna time ho gya.. How can I be so irresponsible.. Main..."
Manik " nandini.. Calm down. ten minutes hi late hain"
Nandini freaked" Ten.. Ten. Minutes.. Oh aaiappa..ten..."
Manik held her shoulders and said " Nandiniii.. Calm down.. Take a deep breath"
Nandini was taken aback by his touch.. She turned her head to look at his hand that was on her shoulder.. Manik followed her gaze and was also taken aback.. He removed his hand from her shoulder.. He sighed, then leaned towards her.. He looked into her eyes and asked in a very soft husky voice " why are u so nervous..?"
This made Nandini more nervous.. She gulped her saliva and uttered " it is.. It is.. my first time na.." being lost in his eyes..
Manik being confused " first time?" while leaning back..
Nandini came out of her sub conscious state " Wo.. Wo.. First time.. Matlab.. This is my first time .. That.."
Manik narrowing his eyes " hmmm.." Nandini innocently " That m late for a class.."
Manik smiled at her innocence... Nandini bit her lower lip and said to herself while looking away " aaiappa.. He smiled.. his smile is making me so nervous.. Aise nervous hoti rahugi toh he will get to know that I ... I... "..
Her eyes grew wider and a smiled came on her face.. She bit her lower lip looking at him and said to herself " I am in love with him". She was lost.
Manik waved his hand in front of her and said " Nandini..where r u lost..?"
Nandini to manik " m late.. M going... bye.." taking steps in backward direction.
Manik "aree.. are.. nandini.. listen. I am also coming." . But she turned and ran away without wasting a second..
Manik " practice k lie late.. Like seriously.. Itna darti h ye phoolan.." not believing the reason of her sudden escape..
Nandini had a broad smile on her face.. she said to herself " i never knew love me itna restless feel hota h.. I m so restless because of you manik." she was breathing heavily..
Manik smirked and said " i never knew love me itna peace hota h. Finally i have found my peace in you Nandini" while looking at her.. And he sighed with relief.
Scene 4 ------**---------- (SPACE academy ) -----------**------------------
Aaliya and aryamann both bent down and together picked up his book.. Aaliya being annoyed in a loud voice " I guess we have some "BOOK connection." Aaryamann confused "BOOK connection?"
Aaliya smirked and while giving a fake smile said "yes. BOOK connection.. The first day I saw you I lost my favorite BOOK. Second time when I bumped into you, my BOOK fell down and now third time it is your BOOK".
Aaryamann smirked and while giving a fake smile said "I think you love reading BOOKS. And I am a philosophy student. May be destiny wants us to write some beautiful STORY together".
Aaliya got more annoyed. She almost shouted "stop bumping into me Mr. aryamann khanna"
Aaryamann raising his eyebrows "oh! You remember my name. But you said you are not interested knowing my name"
There was a silence for a moment. Both were still holding that book.
Aaliya annoyingly "whatever!" and she stood up leaving the book.
Aaryamann also stood up and said "the more ANGER towards the PAST you carry in your HEART, the less capable you are of LOVING in the PRESENT.." Aaliya was speechless and surprised..
Aryamann looked at his book and said "aisa main nhi.. Aisa is book me likha h. wonderful author -Barbara de angelis..."
Aaliya somehow managed to ask "why.. Why do u telling... all this to me?."
Aryamann " those who live as a prisoner of their past can never move on. Just free yourself from all the bars.. Just renew yourself.. Love yourself.." he took a pause and said " aisa book me nhi likha... This is what i believe ".. Aaliya was dumbstruck.
Aaryamann looked for his phone and found it lying on the floor. He picked it up and walked out of the scene. Aaliya kept looking at him...
Scene 5----*(music room"competition venue)-------
Manik who was becoming restless listening her said to himself "Maddie.. Maddie.. Maddie..huh.. dude .. U should act FAST. Or else.."
Nandini thought for a while and said " sir.. Give us one hour.. We will prepare a song and will get back to you in an hour." leaving manik's mouth open.
Raghav raising his eyebrows " u sure?" Nandini nodded.
Manik was looking at her in disbelief . Nandini took out a diary from her bag and stood up.. She turned a few pages and said " mil gya.." Manik was still confused..
Manik to himself " dude.. Are you sure u love her.. This phoolan.."(LOL)
Nandini stood up and sat down next to him.. She showed him the page and kept her diary away from his reach.. Manik read the paper and smiled. Manik " wow.. This is cool.. Good song for a Duet.. Tum likhti b ho..?"
Nandini "Kbhi kbhi"
Manik thought for a while, smirked and said " But we can't sing this song.."
Nandini with her eyes wide open" but why? U said it's nice."
Manik gave an excuse " but.. But we don't have music ready for it.. Lyrics hi to hain"
Nandini excitedly " toh let's just try making some good music for this song"
Manik showing fake attitude " why do u think I will listen to u.?
Nandini to herself " he is so kadva.. Nandu are u sure tu is se pyaar krti h?" ( lol)
Manik acting smart said " okayyy.. Toh let's do a DEAL"
Nandini innocently " DEAL?"
Manik "ya deal. I'll help u but after performance we will go for a WALK.."
Nandini heart again started racing fast.. She uttered " manik.. Walk.. Walk kis lie.. And Wo bi mere sath?"
Manik bring his face closer to her.. Nandini held her breath. Manik said in a low voice " just want to explore more" . Nandini in a low voice "explore. what.?" lost in his eyes.
Manik backed off and said "This place.. Of course.. And.. And u r not that bad company" he smirked..
Nandini came out of her trance and gave an excuse " manik.. Wo.. Wo.. Sir won't allow us.."
Manik " i don't need his permission.. you tell. Do u want to go or not?"
Nandini stood up and took a few steps towards window.. Her back was facing manik.. Nandini to herself " i want to go but i can't .. I am already so nervous.. and walk pe. Akele.. No. No.no. I should go a bit SLOW "
Scene 7---*( SPACE academy ---auditorium)------*------
navya's voice " harshadji aur kuch b galat Kia h toh Wo b bta dijiye.." ..
Harshad was shocked.
Scene 8--*--- ( competition venue)-------
Manik in his intense voice still looking into her eyes "then.. shall I drop u?"
Nandini lost in him " I am not afraid of falling untill m with you . I know u won't ever let me fall.. I trust you.."
Manik to himself " ab se I will never hurt u.. I will make up for every mistake i did in past.. I will make u SMILE.. I will make you say YES with a SMILE on your face. . And this WALK will be a walk to remember.. "continue soon ...
take care
thanks a lot for the pm...!!!!!
Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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