We Are Destined To Love - MaNan FF- note on last page 18..plz read it - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
nice idea👏👏👏...
u should surely continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-1


Murthy Nibas


"Aliya,tell me what should I wear."shouted Nandini holding a blue tops and a red one.
"Nandu u shd wear this orange top with white jeans"suggested Aliya.

"Thanks,but my sis why u choosed science?what will I do without u?"
"Nandu we are there going to learn.and u know na i love science more than music."

"uff,but u could ve chosen music as 4th subject."
"we ll keep meeting in the off time.And that Cabir and Dhruv are also with u."
"oh! They ll pick us.I shd go and get ready."


Malhotra Mansion


"Mithi ma, should I take guitar?" asked Manik while having breakfast.
"u shd take. U ve a class,right?"
"yeah,but i ve chosen music as 4th subject.I ve other classes"
"oh! Ek baat bolna hi vhul gayi main.Ur cousin Navya, she has also joined SPACE"
"Its good."


SPACE Academy


Cabir's car reached SPACE and all of them got down from the car.
"Yaar we are going to rock here!" said Nandini.
"yes,go inside,I ll come after parking the car" said Cabir.

Cabir went to park the car and other proceeded towards the gate. They were welcomed by the volunteers.They walked ahead and were stopped by the seniors.

"hello,beautiful.Can i have ur name and number" said a senior to Nandini. That was Trilok Chaurasia.

"listen, u are senior thats why I m leaving u. Dont try this again." saying that Nandini went from there.

"listen guys I ll be the first one to date her. Any of u wont try to talk to her" said Trilok. "Girl, u ve talked to me in that tone. It ll enough to make u my girl friend to shut ur mouth" thought Trilok.


Manik also reached SPACE.He went inside and proceeded towards auditorium as Principal will give a speech and welcome the new batch.

Manik reached where Nandini was standing. Both of them were standing near with there back facing.One volunteer was standing on the balcony with a plate full with rose petals.

Suddenly she heard someone calling her name.She turned to see who called her.She couldnt keep balance and dropped the plate.

As Manik and Nandini were standing near ,flowers dropped on them. They stepped behind and hitted each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
wow...
very nice start cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
good start dear...
thanks a lot for the pm...
pls update soon..take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry guys for not being able to send pm to all. And another sorry for not writing it properly as it is my first try to write a story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2


Maniks guitar hitted Nandini and they turned.Manik was shocked to see Nandini in front of him.

Their eyelock broke when Mukti came."I am sorry.are u okay?"
They both said in unison"Yes i am okay."
"oh actually i couldnt keep balance" saying so she gave an angry look to Harshad Arora who was sitting with Trilok.

Harshad,Mukti read in the same school where Manik read.As Manik was topper and he got prize in every prize giving ceremony so most of the students knew him.

Harshad could recognize him and murmured,"why this topper boy carrying guitar"

Trilok was already jealous of Manik as Nandini didnt say anything to him so hearing to harshad he asked Manik "Whats ur subject?"
"Science"
"so what are u doing with this expensive guitar?showing off?"

Manik again said polietly "I have taken music as 4th subject.

"oh, so u want to be a singing scientist or a scientist musician .But I can gurranty that sabki kaan kharab ho jayegi when u ll sing.vukamp vi aa sakta hain"

All started laughing. mukti and Nandinis group were standing far so they didnt heard what Trilok said.

Manik didnt get this type of comment in his life before. So he said"I can sing"

"toh gana gaake suna." Trilok was too sure about he wont sing.

Manik was not interested in having a fight with seniors and turned to go when all started commenting.

He ignored them and tried to go when Trilok said "sirf gaane se hi itna daar gaya toh music class mein kya karega. Jarur flirt karne jaa raha hain"

Maniks patience broke when he saw Nandini listening to Trilok.He didnt wanted to have his name in Nandinis bad book. So he took the guitar and started singing

Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Hai
Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Hai(Nandini and other turned to Manik and all were amazed)

Na Janu Main Kaisi Yeh Bekaraari Hai
Shayad Dil Ke Jaane Ki Ab Taiyaari Hai
Na Janu Main Kaisi Yeh Bekaraari Hai
Shayad Dil Ke Jaane Ki Ab Taiyaari Hai
Tu Dil Ka Thikana
Hoon Tera Deewana

Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye

Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Deewana Hai

Puchhe Nigahe Meri
Hai Kaha Raahe Teri
Jaane Kyun Na Jaane Tu
Tanha Hai Bahe Meri
Puchhe Nigahe Meri
Hai Kaha Raahe Teri
Jaane Kyun Na Jaane Tu
Tanha Hai Bahe Meri
Nindo Bin Raat Bhi Guzari Hai
Jo Utre Na Teri Hi To Khumari Hai Mushkil Hai Bulana
Hoon Tera Deewana

Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye

Dil Mein Jo Arma Jaage
Tere Hi Pichhe Bhage
Rukna Hai Tujhpe Ab To
Jaana Nahi Hai Aage
Dil Mein Jo Arma Jaage
Tere Hi Pichhe Bhage
Rukna Hai Tujhpe Ab To
Jaana Nahi Hai Aage

Surat Yeh Kyun Aankho Mein Utari Hai
Maine To Bhulai Duniya Saari Hai
Hai Tujhko Bata Na
Hoon Tera Deewana
Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye Deewana Tera Tujhe Hi Bulaye
Yeh Marzi Teri Tu Aaye Na Aaye.


All started clapping and Nandini went to talk to him. Trilok got angry and said "This time u got saved par aage aage dekho hota hain kya."
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
beautiful...loved it
pls continue soon..take care
thanks a lot for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Your writings are very interesting
Trilok as senior waiting to get him bashed by nandini
Its to lovely to see nandini in bold character
Hope alya won't fall for Manik plzz don't do that
Plz continue soon
Pm me if you can
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
hehe...tk as senior...
loved it..
loved the different character of all..
so manik likes nandani..
but 1 question..hw did manik see nandu in tv?
plz cont asap..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kristii

hehe...tk as senior...

loved it..
loved the different character of all..
so manik likes nandani..
but 1 question..hw did manik see nandu in tv?
plz cont asap..



Actually I thought to make Nandu a singer.I will write when Manik saw her on tv.But for ur question,the answer is Nandini would have participated in a music show.

And yeah I am writing any kind of story for the 1st time. So there 's a lot of mistake.I am not being able to write what I am thinking.

Thanks for positive commenting.

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