naa jeena tere bina - manan ff updated part 36 page 40 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 29:
a new day at space ,

nandini enters the college with a mild smile thinking of whatever was going on with her ... she was very happy...

as she enters the college premises , she sees the whole of space decorated with white flowers and roses ... she was mesmerised ...it was that beautiful...

as she entered the college premises she saw a large board -

I LOVE YOU NANDINI ... ILOVE YOU SO MUCH ...

nandini kept on staring at the board .she felt royal . wherever she looked she saw this board saying I LOVE YOU ...NANDINI

she felt great... she just wanted to go and hug manik for wat he was doing for her ... she thinks...

nandini: i'm so important for you ...so much...thank you manik...

she walked further into her class to see it decorated ... she saw manik ... she expected him to tell her something ... but ... manik ... ignored her as if all this was done by somebody else ... she kept on staring at him ...she never expected this to happen ... she expected manik to talk to her ... tell her something... she was very sad about all this ... her regular day in college continued ...

in evening , after college ,

she was about to step out of college ...

she is walking wen theres a shower of rose petals ... it was like a rain of flowers , tons and tons of them...

she looked up to find a helicopter holding the banner, I LOVE YOU NANDINI ..HAMESHA ...

suddenly she hears ... she turns ,happy and smiling ... she felt like the queen of the world ... she knew who it was...

nandini : MANIK( so much love and care in voice )

music of hasi plays in the background ...

manik : I LOVE YOU NANDINI ...HAMESHA( everybody hears this , even nyonika)

[ he has a guitar in his hands ]

Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

ooo


Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage

( he shows his hand for a couple dance to her ) nandini and manik starts dancing ...


Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda (points at her and sings , lowers his head )


Aur haan wahi ban gaye

[ stops dancing and he keeps on staring at her andfeels her face ]


Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

[shows around at all people and sings with hans open ]
Pehchaante hi nahi

ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi(shows his eyes and then points at her )

hai dhoondte wo tujhe


Pehchaante hi nahi

ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi

hai dhoondte wo tujhe

Hum the dhoondhte jisey

wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki

sar-zameen ban gaye

[huggs her tight ]
Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe

beinteha pyaar doon

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe

beinteha pyaar doon


Saari hadein maine meri,

ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa

awaargi ban gaye

(she looks at him with tears of joy )
Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

manik picks her up in his arms and swing around in joy...

manik : i love you nandini .. i can't... i can't leave you for anything or anybody ... i am not alive without you ... pls forgive me for whatever i have done to you ... im sorry nandini ... please forgive me and lets start fresh and new ...

precap:

nandini and manik together

manik tells nandini about arjun...

arjun plans to kill nandini .

I am sorry... I know its a very small post...but now fasting going on so.. bc with Ramadan... sorry...but plss do read and tell me wat u feel about it pls... waiting eagerly...
Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome !! It's lovely !
do continue soon
waiting eagerly 😛
and loved the way manik confessed his feelings
and the teasing 👏
Edited by princessangel23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful amazing update

Finally they are together again after so many ups and downs they made it

Loved the moments

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
just love it
plzzz do updload soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I thought it was done by Arjun 😡 but when I read that Manik did it I was like !!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 30 :

manik : I love you nandini ...hamesha

nandini: i love you too manik...hamesha

fab5 comes to them and clap hands

cabir: so finally manan is a couple ... wow...

manik : thank you guys

manik looks at nandini who was alreary feeling shy and looking down ... cabir points towards nandini planinng to tease her . cabir winks his eyes ..

cabir shows manik thumbs up ...

cabir : so nandini , how you feeling ??

nandini just smiles looking down ...

cabir :(smiles at her innocence )so manik , did you tell her ...

manik : yess cabir ... i was about to

cabir : no need my machoman... i myself will do it ... please allow me ... to do.. the honours

nandini was thinking what they are upto...

cabir: so nandini , we decided in the beginning that ... (nandini becomes anxious) wenever we have relationship with anyone outside FAB5 , we must do an initial ragging and testing ,you know testing of real gold like ...to know ... , if that person is perfect for us or not... manik did not tell you ?? (surprising look) ... FAB 5 got to know that i was just a prank so they play along .

manik texts to cabir : idiot , i don't want to stay away from her anymore ...

cabir : manik no... i mean (realises the situation and turns to nandini ) so nandini , are you ready ??

nandini : (looks determined) ... yess ...

manik admires nandini's innocence and beauty .

cabir : will you do anything nandini ??

nandini : yess... anything ( looking at manik ) (whispered) for manik ...

cabir : kiss him

nandini and manik : what (shocked)

nandini : why

manik :(looks at nandini ) why means what

nandini : keep qiute , manik

cabir : nandini , you just said that you will do anything for him ...right ?? then what happened ??(smiling teasingly)

nandini : kissing is not allowed ... i mean i don't know

manik :( teasingly) don't lie

cabir : wait a sec , manik(looking at manik ) how do you know that ??

manik : i mean ,(cutely as he realised) nowadays ... who doesn't know how to kiss ?? (nandini makes a pout )

mukti : so manik...(she remembers the flashback of nandini drinking the juice while playing never did i ever wen asked about kissing ) here we get an answer today... right guys...

cabir : what answer mukthi ??

mukthi : cabir , you dont remember ... that day... after harshads arrest... we had this first party with our sweet nandini ...

cabir remembers him asking her and all...

nandini lowers her head ... manik looks away..

cabir : so nandini , what you got to say about that ??

nandini just walks away ... cabir calls her but she smilingly walks away ... she colides into arjunn
arjun: hiii nandini

nandini : hiii arjun , how are you ??

arjun : so finally , manik proposed you rt?

nandini just smiles as an answer

arjun gets furious and burns inside but pretends to be happy outside ... nandini suddenly remembers arjun tellling her i love you

nandini : please don't take me wrong arjun , please understand ... im sorry ... really , but for me manik is everything , without him

suddenly manik appears and holds nandini just to show arjun ...

manik : so ... arjun , nandini is finally all mine ..

arjun just walks off .. nandini calls him but he doesnot respond or look back ...

nandini : manik, y do you do such things ??

manik : what did i do??

nandini: leave it ... ok ... now bye

manik : what .. (he holds her ) i just got you back , now theres lots left (manik winks at her )

(background music - ishq bulaava ) they both get lost in each others eyes ...

dhruv and alya comes to them and push them more close breaking their eyelock...

nandini was about to leave when manik holds her hand and takes her to sie and takes out his phone and calls chachii ... chachii recieves his call ...

preview :

manik tells nandini about arjun...

arjun plans to kill nandini .

please do send in your comments ... thank you so much.. waiting eagerly... apologies for being late in updating recently as I was busy...sorry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
JSUT LOVE IT
THE PREVIEW LOOKS INTERSTING
PLZ UPLOAD SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely updates... his proposal was so sweet...looking forward to Arjun's true face being shown to Nandhu
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
just loved it
cont soon

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