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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank You ! Beautifully written !👏
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Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Omg that was just mind blowing...

You did marvelous job with this one..
Every thing that you put in the words is so true..
I agree somewhere down the line its all Pandits fault..
Pandit is the one to manipulate Dhruv and also hurt Nandu..
Once again it was amazing..

Thankyou so much for all the love and appreciation! <3
So glad though that pandit's days are all nearly over now... God bless his soul once Manik sets him ablaze with his fury! 😆
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Beautifully written and captured the essence of today's episode

Thanks a lot for all the love and appreciation! <3
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Originally posted by: leel

Thank You ! Beautifully written !👏

Awww...you're welcome! Thank YOU for appreciating it! <3
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

Thanku so much babe! The fact that you took the time our to comment is the biggest form of praise in itself <3


u deserve it girl...👏👏. i regularly read ur post... but is always short of words as to what to comment after ur beautiful msg...😕


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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

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Here I am. Doing this between classes cause last week I made you wait all week..lol. This week I hope between assignments I can get my 2 cents down so that we may enlighten each other. And you always enlighten me with your beautiful words and thoughts. Your take on the episode adds so another dimension to the episode. You understand what the writers are trying to show their viewers and you break it down perfectly.

Dhruv and Nandini. Two important people in Manik's life. Dhruv is part of Manik's existence but Nandini Murthy, he is his life, literally. This isn't about picking one or the other. This isn't about priorities. This is love. Nandini is the reason for his existence, she is the oxygen that Manik Maltorta breathes. Their love, so pure, so true isn't something he is going to justify to Dhruv. Dhruv is wrong, his accusations are misplaced once again. Manik, today he wasn't angry. Today, he was hurt. Never has manik Maltorta fought so hard against his own anger. Today, he begged his buddy not to let his anger win, not to unleash the bull. The struggle was so real. It was so visible. He was desperate to not to cross a line, not to raise his hand on his brother. He kept warning Dhruv that he is threading on dangerous ground, he needs to stop. And that punch, it was like Manik punched himself, he hurt himself he couldn't believe that their friendship has come to such a sad point that he has been reduced to punching his buddy, his brother. His pain was so vast one could drown in it.

A line was crossed today; a line of respect Manik demands of his friends for the love of his life. Dhruv crossed that line! He has disrespected a woman, questioned her character, and accused her that she toyed with two men at the same time. Disgrace, such a disgrace., Dhruv. Have you become such a man who has no respect for woman ? Will I too far off if I compare you to men like Rocky and the politician ? Because respect for woman really starts from the heart. Disappointment for Dhruv continues to increase. Had Dhruv chosen to spit venom against Manik once again, he would have stood there, let his heart get crushed to pieces but he would have not uttered a single world. But Dhruv, today he has chosen Nandini as his punching bag and nobody and I mean nobody gets away with hurting Manik's Nandini. Even Manik himself. Manik refuses to forgive himself for hurting her so how did Dhruv ever think he could get away with this ? Manik, so defeated he was today, all his hope has been crushed. Maybe his friend will never come home. Maybe, he will never be able to welcome his friend again with open arms. Hurting his nandini is a crime in manik maltorta's eyes and today, Dhruv has committed that crime but Manik still loves his brother, his buddy. So today, his heart bleeds. He couldn't protect Nandini from Dhruv's venom, he couldn't stop his buddy from going farther away from him. So defeated our Manik was today.

Today, Dhruv may have done damage I had feared last week. He picks another victim for the blame game: Nandini. So blind Dhruv has become in his own anger and resentment that honestly there seems to be no hope. His misconceptions have been fueled by the Pandit and today was all about Pandit's attack, he pulled out the big guns. Ams has witnessed Manik at his worst. They say, your first impression is the your impression. The Pandit has managed to paint a rather poor impression of our Manik and Ams like any mother who has her child's best intentions at heart will want her child to stay away from such a boy. Manik will have a hard task at hand to win his Nandu's Ams's heart. He knows how important Ams is to his Nandini. He needs her to accept him, to give her love and blessings to them. And he will face the challenge head on. Really keen on seeing how this will happen after the Pandit has been exposed and the fusion has finally happened. But for now, Manik is the rich, bad boy and Ams will want to keep Nandini far away from Manik. So Pandit gets a point, for now. Today, the Pandit attacked. Tomorrow Manik will answer. He will connect the dots and see how the cheap game you played. And he shall make you pay Pandit. Like I said, nobody gets away with hurting his Nandini and you have caused Dhruv to hurt her where it hurts the most. Her heart. And you have caused her to shed tears, her precious tears that break Manik's heart.

When they hurt, they always find solace in each other's arms. It's the safest place in the world. In pain, they are companions. They absorb each other's pain and sorrows. But imagine the guilt Nandini is now weighted with that her Manik hadn't been able to reach out and soothe her initially. Because she believes everything Dhruv said, "It was me." She now believes the fault was hers. She is now breaks down in sobs because she thinks she broke a pure friendship. Nandini Murthy, who wouldn't even hurt a fly intentionally and here she thinks she has broken a pure friendship, a beautiful bond of love. His words of reassurance can't reach her. Her tears, he wipes her tears but they keep flowing and his pain increases too. How can he reach her ? She has gone off to her own place of guilt where he can't reach her. So he plucks her into his arms and places her on the table so they can be on the same level. He forces her to lock her eyes with his. He needs her to see the truth in his eyes. He demands that she sees herself in his eyes. She is the truest truth is his life. She is his light, his shining star who has pulled him out of the darkness. She is his calm in this noise and chaos of life. How can she even think she is wrong for him when with her, he is at his best. With her, he feels alive, he feels happy. With her, he can be simply Manik. That day, she reassured him he is perfect for her. Today, he reassures her she is perfect with him. With her, everything seems perfect. Imperfect alone, together they are perfect, just perfect for each other.

When Nandini hurts, she can cry it out. Manik can gather her into the warmth and safety of his arms and absorb her pain.The way Manik drew her into his arms today was MY beautiful moment because as much as he needed to comfort her, he needed to soothe his own heart too because he too is hurting. Her tears, he can replace them with a smile. But Manik's hurt, he conceals it. His pain, his hurt, he is so use to hiding it. No one has ever taken the time to heal his hurts before so he saw no point in showing them. Until Nandini. With her, she sees his pain even when he tries to conceal it. So she will hold him with tenderness and kiss the pain away. How she wishes she could take all his pain and hurt away but that can't happen right now. His buddy is still lost, he hasn't found his way home. So she steadies him with her love. They stay connected for a few precious seconds to draw on each other's strength. They heal each other so they can get ready for another battle. The world is against them and now Ams seems to have been misled to join the wrong side. Will the battles be never be over ? They are fighting for so hard for each other right now, that when they do win, when their hope is victorious, when Manik has defeated the devil; their love will be all that stronger.

Umm, I think this got too lengthy but I genuinely struggled today, maybe because the episode was so fab and so well performed by all the actors that I couldn't find the right words today. Actually I need to take a moment to appreciate Uttu, Niti and Parth especially. Parth does so splendid in emoting his pain. Taylor was amazing today too. And Uttu, I have to say is one actor has improved leaps and bounds as a actor and his hard work shows. He matched Taylor and Parth well today.

Okies, now I am done. You were amazing as well my love.

Are you like serious?! Like if this was your sturggling piece...ummm I think I'll ever be able to praise you on your perfect piece then because I'm already struggling to praise this piece. Wow...just simply, amazingly, epicly wow!! This has to be one of my favourite take of yours on an episode and like I read it so many times already and I just don't know what I should highlight and what I shouldn't because it was all just so god damn amazing! I feel like I shouldn't even be adding anything here because you've linked and talked aout the littlest of details of this episode but I'm overflowing in emotions right now and so I will drop down some quick points.
First of all...absolutely agree with you thatoday's cast did a wonderful job! PaNi are always so apt and upto mark with their performance but Utkarsh undoubtedly did a fabulous job with his portrayal.
So it's needless to say that I loved today's episode! Like absolutely adored it...why? Because I'm a saddist and when my Manan are drowning in unbearab;e pain, they seem to express their love the best because that need they urge of each other always seems to add a new edge to their love and romance. The way he just helplessly tries to hold her hands, stare at her, repeatedly scolds her that no it's not your fault...his eyes are on th everge of crying themselves because he's somewhere drowining in the guilt once again that he wasn't able to prove his suitability for her. He was unable to protect her from the false accusations of his brother and he feels ashamed of himself to allow her precious tears to weep. As much as he was breaking from within too, he knows that this is not the time for him to fall weak because he has to become her strength, he has to fill her up with the belief that no she's perfect for him. I simply loved when you mentioned how the other day she spoke her words of reassurance and today was his turn. It's their way of sharing love and I absolutely adore the CV's for everytime they show the cycling nature of these two and how they take turns to fill each other with assurance, hope and optimism. A job well done by them! Another beautfiul idea you talked about was his deperation to make her look through his eyes...when he levels her and looks her into the eye and so effortlessly states the biggest truth of his life that she makes his life perfect. And then he envelops her into a bear hug because they've learnt that their touch in fact holds the real healing power. And you're right...he needed that hug just as much as she needed to feel his arms. And that peaceful smile did appear when she hugs him back because he can finally breathe a breath of relief that he's managed to comfort her somehow, that it's not aching so painfully anymore. His own guilt seems to have subsided a little bit too and it was just such a magical moment.
Honestly it was so hard for me to pick my favourite moment today because Manan are at their best when in pain and pain was evident throughout the whole episode. But if I had to pick one moment it would be when she broke her kiss and they instantly joined their forehead not wanting to let go just yet. He actually breathed a physical sigh at that point and that gave it all away. His thankyou to her for comforting him, his sorry for her on behalf of his brother and his guilt for raising his hand on Dhruv. The struggle is indeed real. I mentioned it in another post how they are so close to becoming each others' yet the journey still seems soo long because of the continuous hurdles they are facing with every step.
I have to agree...really quite looking forward to Amm's track with my two love birds because even amidst trying to prove his worth...Manan's relationship will ocntinue to bloom and grow. If we come back to how the CV's have a habit of circulating Manan's gestures for each other, it's now time for Nandini to sit Manik down and look him in the eye and try to show him her perspective that he's not only worthy for her, but he's the most perfect suitor for her. Whilst today the first impression may not have ben quite the way Manan would have hoped for, the day Amms will see Manik so selflessly fighting for her Nandu's safetly and innocence, she will surely be able to see the real Manik that Nandini had discovered once upon a time.
So here I was...so adamant that I wouldn't make this as long as usual but looks like I got carried away again... The effects that you have on me I swear :P lol
Again...loved this response of yours!
Twinkie <3
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Originally posted by: Smiley_23


u deserve it girl...👏👏. i regularly read ur post... but is always short of words as to what to comment after ur beautiful msg...😕


Awww...so sweet! Like seriously... this is just so overwhelming and I love you for praising the post so unconditionally and reading my writing everyday! <3
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

DAY 36! - You crossed the line!

He was warned. Not once. Not twice. But numerous times. No one's allowed to talk to her in such a bitter-filled tone. Let alone the tone, the context of the topic itself was senseless. Manik's never questioned her character, her intentions, her decisions himself. Then how dare he? He crossed the line today! Leapt out of the boundary that marked his last chance of returning home. "Enough Dhruv!" How desperately he wanted to control his anger today. He could understand his brother's frustrating pain, his wordless miseries. And so he was willing to forgive him for the first few accusations. But there's a limit to every nuisance. And that limit was crossed today.

You didn't just disgrace your once-upon-a-time bestfriend named Nandini. You shamelessly humiliated the pure character of a woman. You selfishly blamed an innocent individual for your own meaningless blunders. You didn't just pin-point the faults in a faultless girl, you pointed a dishonouring finger upon a girl who means the world to your brother. Don't forget, when you point a finger so harshly at someone, the rest of the four fingers are pointing back at you. You've blundered today. You've fumbled. You've crossed the line!

She is his life, his reason of existence. This breath he seems to inhale every few seconds or so; it belongs to her. The beat of every heartbeat in his chest, whispers her name non-stop day and night. She's the biggest truth of his life and you've sinned to allegedly accuse her for being full of lies. You've lapsed in understanding the purity and value of relationships like friendship and love. She had only ever wished for a lifelong friendship with you. She had hoped to befriend your soul for the rest of her life. But you; so blinded and deafened by your own uncertainties and jealousies have torn apart her dreams of envisioning you as a life-long friend. You have hurt your brother the most today. She is his heart, his soul, his passion, his core. And you have continuously wounded her with your poison-filled speared words. She's bleeding, but the pain is spreading uncontrollably in his chest. "Dhruv! Ab bas! You're crossing the line dammit!" His hope for your return, his wish of being able to reunite with his brother, you've crushed them all today. He had considered you to be the most important part of his life. But she...she was, is and will always remain his life. You hurt her. You crossed your line!

The punch.

It was never his first resort. He was compelled to raise his hand on his best buddy from once upon a time. His friend dearer than a brother; seemed to have ignored all his pleas, all his requests to please...just calm down. With every progressive word, Dhruv's ability to think, to understand, to comprehend started to vanish. And so he was left with no choice. Dhruv had said enough, Manik had listened enough and Nandini...she had cried more than enough. He's let it all go on previous records. His brother, his best buddy; abandoned him so inconveniently. Abashed him with his ruthless taunts. But Manik had patiently listened to every word, accepted his every blame, tolerated his every painful remark. But today it wasn't about him. It was about this girl whom he can die for. And mind you, he may not realise it just yet, but he can become the death of someone for her sake too. She's the light of his darkness. She's the lyrics of his music. She's the smile of his lips and the strength during his weakness. She's the calm of his turmoils. She's the meaning of his life. She's the reason for his heartbeat and the definition of his love. She taught him how to live life. How to love life. And so if the need be, he will sacrifice his life again and again just to see her safe, smiling and protected. This was just a mere friendship. And he crossed the line!

A few days ago, Dhruv stood there so arrogantly, mocking Cabir how everyone seems to have left his side, but today that day seems to have arrived in reality. He has embarrassed his friends, his family; Fab 5. They had trusted his return. Hoped so obediently that he would never abandon their love and friendship. But today he failed them incredulously. "Dhruv...Kyun? Bas kar...ruk ja...mat bol..." Manik hasn't stopped loving him. In fact his pain for his brother has increased today as he was forced to raise his hand on him. He still wishes he could continue to hope for his surprise return somehow. His eyes begging him to just hear his heart and not his mind for once. He continues to plea to his brother to return on the path where they used to tread together once upon a time. He continues to request him to stop transforming into someone unrecognisable. But his brother unheard every word and blindly walked away, choosing to continue to walk towards the daunting dead end that awaits him.

As much as he craves his brother again today, as much as his inner consciousness is drowning in utmost guilt for physically wounding him, his priority will never change now. Nandini. Her loudening sobs need his attention, need his touch, need his caress. She's in pain. Her heart is weeping. Dhruv's hurt her and that's more than enough for Manik to know that he's crossed his line!

Pandiji...you're lucky you weren't the one on the receiving end of Manik's wrath. You're lucky that Manik hasn't yet connected the dots as to who has been fuelling Dhruv's anger for him to behave in such a dsigraceful manner like today. You're lucky Manik hasn't realised that you have in face so demonically crossed your line too. But that moment of realisation isn't too far when he will notice you smiling so blatantly and realise that you were the real reason for his Nandini's priceless tears. You were the true culprit, who has shattered his Nandini's belief in herself for which reason she is endlessly blaming herself for the broken bond between two brothers. You're in fact the true criminal who is disallowing her to believe every word of reassurance that Manik is trying to fill her with. You're the heartless devil who has made her heart and soul weep so hysterically that for a moment she seemed to have lost every ability to understand what Manik was trying to say to her. "Just shut up Nandini! Tum kya bol rahi ho...are you mad? You're not to be blamed...Okay?" You crossed the line!

It's you who has crossed the line because you made it so difficult for Nandini to breathe through her guilt at one point. It's you who has crossed the line because no matter how much he tried to hold her, comfort her, ease her pain; he couldn't because she just kept breaking apart. It's you who has crossed the line because for a few minutes her mind started to talk senseless blames and as much as he tried for her to listen to her heart, the painful shrieks were just way too loud that she couldn't hear herself what she was saying. It's you who has crossed the line because you're manipulating the reality of Manik's truthful love and care and portraying it as his arrogance and wild-side in front of you guru ma, It's you who has crossed the line because you are cheating the one who so proudly claims to have nurtured and perfected you to become the man you stand today. It's you who has crossed the line because you are juggling with hearts of pure souls in order to fulfil your devious needs. It's you who has crossed the line because you are maliciously consuming the trust and faith of the two people who possibly respected and trusted you the most. It's you who has crossed the line because you instigated one brother to cluelessly hurt the other. It's you who has crossed the line because your evil teachings provoked one brother's anger to become the reason for his own bashing.

They've somehow managed for now. He's somehow managed to numb her heartache by enveloping her in the cosy warmth of his long arms. He's somehow managed to assure her that there is nothing for her to feel guilty about by saying; "Tum mere liye kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti. In fact jab tum mere saat hoti ho na...toh everything seems to be perfect." He's somehow managed to fill her aching heart with a reassurance that he doesn't hold her responsible for any separation by kissing her so adoringly on her forehead and absorbing all the agony breathing inside her. She's somehow managed to read through his false, reassuring smile into the bleeding of his own heart. She's somehow managed to bandage the fresh wounds that have never stung him so hurtfully before. She's somehow managed to fill some relief into the soreness of his soul by dropping a loving kiss on his forehead so he is able to at least breathe amidst all this heartbreak. They've somehow managed to balm each other's sores and share the distressing suffering by just quietly joining their foreheads, so they can rise from this heartbreak and concentrate on their other battles.

But this game that you've started, he promises to finish.

For today you've crossed the line, and as tomorrow will come, he will be compelled to bound his boundary too. Because no line, no boundary, no limit can restrain him from avenging the one who dare to hurt his love, his life, his Nandini.

Twinkle <3


Hey Twinkle🤗

Lovely post as usual.. Love the way you wove in the words and concept for each post.. Especially with these hit and miss episodes, this is such a good break.. I guess I always end up liking your post more than episode :) Today isnt any different... (though i need to catch up last week, i thought atleast get me started with this week's first episode :))

Each bold line was WORD... But on blue.. I dont think dhruv will ever be on non returnable path.. He is just too precious to be away forever.. Yes there will be time apart.. there will be lot of time and efforts needed to fix this gap thats come between fab4 esp maanik and dhruv.. But it isnt irreparable.. Because maanik has learnt to forgive.. Atleast thats what i expect to see...

On Orange: Hmm for todays show down, i dont think i can blame panditji.. Yes he instigated dhruv to go confront nandini(unknowingly, he had expected that to be maanik) but it was soon to happen today or tomorrow.. Dhruv is on path of self discovery.. He has started opening up.. voicing his opinions... however wrong, they are his and he has learnt to express them and hence this was bound to happen.. also i dont think instigating dhruv is crossing line.. Him touching her.. Giving her that necklace, thats where i say he has crossed the line.. I can take conniving smart pandit but this creepiness.. Thats crossing line.. And maanik doesnt know the new level to his creepiness..

Lets get over with another issue i have with the episode.. Why are these two still hiding things from each other? The necklace and phone call - both hiding, while i want to understand their reasons, i am just loosing patience with all these hide and seek games.. Anyways, i am guessing this is just so they can have some drama for the big concert day and with amps and pandit..

Loved the overall dhruv-maanik-nandini confrontation scene.. Dhruv had it coming.. He has really crossed the line.. Blaming nandini, talking about her being with maanik for money/lead singer.. See that was so relating to his insecurities.. Today when maanik was consoling nandini about dhruv, he used correct word.. Overshadowing.. Thats the problem dhruv has.. Dhruv feels being overshadowed by maanik.. May it be money, lead singer, good looks (he voiced that earlier).. He really seems to be struggling with it and today as he has linked nandini to the same issue, (i really dont like those dialogs about being friends with him and maanik at the same time) I think his issue is nandini selecting maanik romantically over him.. Rather than just being friends.. (so i expected better and clear dialog there on that front) He voiced all those things..Today i could see our own nandu there.. She broke with each allegations dhruv made her.. She has said this time and again... Maanik's best quality and first quality she noticed was his friendship with dhruv and even when she wasnt with maanik, she never wanted to be cause of that breaking.. She has made that clear all the time.. So being held responsible for the same and seeing that friendship break, its a big blow to her heart.. And maanik, he knows very well that its not true.. She is best thing that happened to him.. And today he is standing for it.. Not once but again and again.. He didnt want to hurt dhruv, but he crossed the line.. He warned dhruv, but no use.. and his anger took over.. I loved the bit where even after hitting dhruv he looks at the blood oozing out from his lips and the pain he feels for hurting him.. So yeah he didnt want to do it, but he was helpless.. Dhruv had crossed the line.. And hopefully today he will realise that his silly plans arent enough.. Dhruv isnt ready to listen to any of these.. But aaliya- she is not ready to take this too.. I really liked how she said that he cant get away with this all the time.. Just wished they had voiced these opinions sooner.. And then and there itself..Instead of coming to maanik and telling him *tu paagal ho gaya hai* which i think is such a wrong thing to say esp if not followed with talking about how its not worth it esp when dhruv has moved too far from them.. I will be looking forward to tomorrows episode for atleast little followup.. That would be atleast make it little bit ok for me to digest that scene from fab5 perspective..

As i said, nandini has always loved the friendship that maanik offers.. Thats the first noticable thing that makes him not a monster.. And she being blamed to come between two best of buddies, brothers.. Thats a huge huge blow for her.. She dont know what to do other than be helpless.. Today I saw our own nandu in these scenes.. We saw her crumbling with guilt of breaking pure friendship.. But it was baseless.. And maanik wont let her be in that guilt.. I loved how he tries to console her.. Make her see the things, but she is just too broken by those words to hear those words.. Maanik might be telling her that she is being silly thinking dhruv said is true.. But her heart, it cant only think about dhruv';s word.. other words were just tangent to her.. Maanik saw that.. Loved how he understands her.. Consoles her.. Brings the peace .. just by hugging.. telling her that she is the best thing that has happened to him.. This is the confession for me.. This being there for each other.. Knowing how to calm the restless heart.. Understanding the pain even without having to tell.. Thats love .. It needs no more words.. Just a hug, forehead kiss.. And nandu recovers from her guilt.. Sees the pain that maanik is facing too.. Because yes these words are not just hurting her.. but hurting him too.. May be the hurt is double.. Its for nandini;s sake as well as the realisation of the fact that dhruv has gone too far.. He isnt coming back so easily.. And she see that as soon as he calms her.. And he doesnt hide it.. And she returns the same calmness that he just brought her by touch.. Touch is best language of love.. It speaks for itself and thats what manan are.. These small gestures, make them great., real.. I think this scene made to one of my fav manan scene ever.. because it shows the growth, maturity in their relation..

Pandit-amps -- Pandit is being too smart and cunning.. I would have liked it better if amps would have seen how maanik was fighting with friend for nandu.. her honor.. Wasnt it pandit's plan that maanik and dhruv fight with dhruv blaming maanik.. But he ended up blaming nandu and that should make difference na.. Why was it twisted just for heck of it? Why can she hear two guys talking about maanik and his connection to his mom but cant listen to the actual conversation between nandini-dhruv-maanik? Just so amps doesnt like maanik? This is the dragging fest for THE DAY that i dont like.. This is what irritates me to no bound.. Atleast connect it properly.. Bring it on screen properly and convincingly that it doesnt seem just for heck of it.. Btw Pandit might be doing great job at making amps part of anti maanik malhotra fan club but see nandu was part of that club too.. This time maanik isnt alone, nandu is with him.. I hope they together can bring coconut face of maanik malhotra infront of amps.. Calling chachi.. She needs to advocate on behalf of him too.. And how is panditji calling nandini nandu not raising red flag for amps.. These people need to open their eyes and see whats really going on around them...
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Originally posted by: Queen_of_Shadow

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unres...I got exams nd papers to write.. but still stealing time to write this done..

DAY 36! - You crossed the line!

He was warned. Not once. Not twice. But numerous times. No one's allowed to talk to her in such a bitter-filled tone. Let alone the tone, the context of the topic itself was senseless. Manik's never questioned her character, her intentions, her decisions himself. Then how dare he? He crossed the line today! Leapt out of the boundary that marked his last chance of returning home. "Enough Dhruv!" How desperately he wanted to control his anger today. He could understand his brother's frustrating pain, his wordless miseries. And so he was willing to forgive him for the first few accusations. But there's a limit to every nuisance. And that limit was crossed today.You didn't just disgrace your once-upon-a-time bestfriend named Nandini. You shamelessly humiliated the pure character of a woman. You selfishly blamed an innocent individual for your own meaningless blunders. You didn't just pin-point the faults in a faultless girl, you pointed a dishonouring finger upon a girl who means the world to your brother. Don't forget, when you point a finger so harshly at someone, the rest of the four fingers are pointing back at you. You've blundered today. You've fumbled. You've crossed the line! Okay where do I start? Im trying to find the right words which I cannot seem to.. Since the beginning of the show, the only person who has ever tortured Nandini, spoke to her a rude way, hurted was the King himself. No one else had the right or was given that right.. Remember when Aliya truth came out, Nandini told Manik "why are you frustrated? Why are you mad? Because Aliya sent goons after me? When you have done worse to me? Tum karo to thek hai koi aur kare to problem hai?" Manik Malhotra marked Nandini Murthy as his personal property since the day she became his spot even after freeing her, he could not stay away from him.. Even during the breakup scene after soha, he was rude to her but he did not allow anyone else to talk bad about her.. He didn't even give Aliya a chance to say anything about nandini.. So how can Manik stand there and let his buddy talk in that nasty tone with her? He did not give that right to anyone not even his best buddy to talk to Nandini like that. No matter what manik and nandini has been through, Manik never questioned because he knows she is the most purest person in Space.. Even when Nandini fell for nyo's trap, he didn't question her intentions because he knew that she was a innocent soul and she got tricked.. but her intentions her love can never be wrong.. As much as Manik was trying to understand dhruv, he couldn't stand there and watch the girl who means the world to him get trashed. I agree with you, I don't think I have seen MAnik control his anger like this.. He is a fire that jstu needs a little gas and it will set ablaze but he was trying to hard to control that fire within him.. If it was anyone else in Dhruv's place.. who bechara ka lash hi nahi milta..jal kar rakh ho jata...here Dhruv only got a punch.. Dhruv knows that what type of person and how bad is manik's anger..yet dhruv failed to understand that Manik tried holding himself back from the punch but he could not.. - Love what you mentioned about Manik's primse rights on his Nandini! Exactly! Be it any emotion...love, hatred, anger, annoyance...it's only him who's ever allowed to express those emotions to her. Someone else raise a voice at her or point a needless finger and he will really have to face the monster in Manik. That's his love... his passion...his selfishness towards her. He may express his annoyance with her sometimes but he makes it a point to wipe her tears, bring back her smile so she's able to sleep peacefully that night. And today he tries so damn hard to control the anger which would've turned the opposition person black and blue if it had been someone else. His pain...oh god I can't forget it how even when he punched Dhruv, he walked upto him and almost begged him to let go of this hatred and irrationality and just come back to all of them. But Dhruv didn't listen and he knew better than to waste time on someone who was in no control of senses. He ran after her so desperately because he knows, just like him...she has a habit of taking up the blame of others' pain too. Don't we all know how readily she decided to walk out of his life when he had hurt his hand? Even then she had blamed herself for something which was not entirely her fault. Their unconditional love for each other and the people they love is what makes their love story so passionately epic!

She is his life, his reason of existence. This breath he seems to inhale every few seconds or so; it belongs to her. The beat of every heartbeat in his chest, whispers her name non-stop day and night. She's the biggest truth of his life and you've sinned to allegedly accuse her for being full of lies. You've lapsed in understanding the purity and value of relationships like friendship and love. She had only ever wished for a lifelong friendship with you. She had hoped to befriend your soul for the rest of her life. But you; so blinded and deafened by your own uncertainties and jealousies have torn apart her dreams of envisioning you as a life-long friend. You have hurt your brother the most today. She is his heart, his soul, his passion, his core. And you have continuously wounded her with your poison-filled speared words. She's bleeding, but the pain is spreading uncontrollably in his chest."Dhruv! Ab bas! You're crossing the line dammit!" His hope for your return, his wish of being able to reunite with his brother, you've crushed them all today. He had considered you to be the most important part of his life. But she...she was, is and will always remain his life. You hurt her. You crossed your line! Nandini Murthy is Manik Malhotra's oxygen that he needs to breath..to live.. You summed up everything I want to say in the bold lines... She is his life, his truth, his present and his future.. His light in his dark life..She was crying helplessly while he was hurting himself deep inside.. He can take anything thrown against him.. He will take every bad and harsh word that dhruv said but he could not..better yet he WILL NOT take any word against his Nandini.. HIS NANDINI.. the one who taught him to live..the one who smile and caress can take the pain of a million knifee stabs away.. he will if needed can sacrifice his happiness even himself for HIS NANDINI.. HIS NANDINI is his shining star who can see through Manik's masked monster face easily.. Who can read Manik like a book.. Who can tease MAnik to cheer him up..Who can put herself in pain to save Manik Malhotra in needed.. She has become his world.. He will not let anyone not even his friends talk bad about her...Even mukti if I remember correctly tried to talk about Nandini during the breakup scene, he simply told everyone..he does not want to talk about Nandini.. He tried so hard to warn his buddy..please stop..I beg of you please stop.. if you want to use me as your punching bag,, I will happily come forth just ask.. but please stop blaming Nandini.. She didn't do anything..She is innocent as a star.. (however I really wished Manik told Dhruv the truth that I fell in love with Nandu.. I did everything.. I pulled her close to me...).. She is my life Dhruv..please stop, Don't make me choose btwn you and her.. She is my life, meri har dhadkhan mein sirf Nandini ka naam hai..meri zindagi hai woh..meri sab kuch hai woh.. - Oh damn girl! that last line was just brilliant! Someone from the CV team needs to read this and include it in the future because it was just so full of pain! Yep you're right...he's stopped everyone from uttering a word against his Nandini because he can never hear a word against her. I bet even if Nandini Murthy herself walked upto him to confess a wrong-doing he will totally disregard it and fail to believe her. That's how deep his trust is in her. For me today was the day when Manik finally realised his prioirites. He realised that she's like his shadow, they can't be seperated and it's impossible to choose or un-choose her because she lives within him and is a part of his identity. Exactly why he so desperately wanted to tell her that no... she can never be wrong for him because she's the only right thing that's ever happened to him in his life!

It was never his first resort. He was compelled to raise his hand on his best buddy from once upon a time. His friend dearer than a brother; seemed to have ignored all his pleas, all his requests to please...just calm down. With every progressive word, Dhruv's ability to think, to understand, to comprehend started to vanish. And so he was left with no choice. Dhruv had said enough, Manik had listened enough and Nandini...she had cried more than enough. He's let it all go on previous records. His brother, his best buddy; abandoned him so inconveniently. Abashed him with his ruthless taunts. But Manik had patiently listened to every word, accepted his every blame, tolerated his every painful remark. But today it wasn't about him. It was about this girl whom he can die for. And mind you, he may not realise it just yet, but he can become the death of someone for her sake too. She's the light of his darkness. She's the lyrics of his music. She's the smile of his lips and the strength during his weakness. She's the calm of his turmoils. She's the meaning of his life. She's the reason for his heartbeat and the definition of his love. She taught him how to live life. How to love life. And so if the need be, he will sacrifice his life again and again just to see her safe, smiling and protected. This was just a mere friendship. And he crossed the line!..Manik will soon get his answer that he can kill and die for Nandini...Like once Manik asked, do you think I can kill anyone for you? He will get his answer that if needed, he will murder someone cold blooded or beat them black and blue to teach them a lesson for messing with his dear Nandu.. When Dhruv taunted Manik about being the best, the lead singer and etc etc.. Manik chup kar sab kuch suna tha.. ek shabd bhi nahi bola.. He was angry but he didn't say anything..haat thak nahi uthaiya..he just wanted to explain himself like buddy I was protecting you. That's all..but today.. har limit cross hogaya aaj.,,,His nandini was being questioned about breaking a pure friendship that no one could break not even by Harshad... Manik could not take it.. why would our friendship break because of her? She didn't do anything? She was your friend first dhruv.. She was my enemy.. how can she break our friendship dhruv.. I am running out of words because you said everything so awesomely..Nandini murthy is the calm to MAnik Malhotra's storm.. - Bang on! He definitely can kill okay and that's when he will realise that no...his Nandini always knew him the best. I always say that these two... they still don't know the depths of their own love yet. We've even started Nandini taking up a furious form in the past week or so...for whom? All for him! This Nandini...she was always the rational thinker, but she has a part of Manik that lives insider her too that can bring out the bad and edgy side if the need be to fight for him.

A few days ago, Dhruv stood there so arrogantly, mocking Cabir how everyone seems to have left his side, but today that day seems to have arrived in reality. He has embarrassed his friends, his family; Fab 5. They had trusted his return. Hoped so obediently that he would never abandon their love and friendship. But today he failed them incredulously. "Dhruv...Kyun? Bas kar...ruk ja...mat bol..." Manik hasn't stopped loving him. In fact his pain for his brother has increased today as he was forced to raise his hand on him. He still wishes he could continue to hope for his surprise return somehow. His eyes begging him to just hear his heart and not his mind for once. He continues to plea to his brother to return on the path where they used to tread together once upon a time. He continues to request him to stop transforming into someone unrecognisable. But his brother unheard every word and blindly walked away, choosing to continue to walk towards the daunting dead end that awaits him.I loved when Manik was holding Dhruv's collar..He was in so much pain.. He was looking like he was dying from punching Dhruv. He looked like he wanted to wipe the blood off. Hold dhruv and cry and say sorry million times for hitting him like that but he couldn't.. the pain that parth portrayed here.. hats off to him.. MAnik wanted to say something else but dhruv (kamina) pushed him away..I hope for once Aliya says something bad to dhruv like seriously..I wanna see Aliya standing up...Disrespecting a girl is not allowed, you call Aliya a bad s**t and now you are shifting your anger to NAdnini.. Aliya please give him a piece of your mind baby..I will love you forever!!! - Just look at this guy! He really is the blessing in everyone's life. His Nandini was accused, she was falsely blamed for something she could never even think of doing and he was the one sufferring. She was crying, but his heart was the one shrieking in pain inside. And then came the punch...his brother was on the floor, bleeding and he...he could feel the pain, the soreness. My manik...so pure...the pain-absorber. He can sacrifice himself for his friends, his love...but they be hurt in any way, he will never spare the one! The struggle was so damn hard today becuase today the one who he didn't want to spare was his own brother. But like I said...it came down to priorities today. It came down to right and wrong today. And there's no doubt that Dhruv was the one on the wrong side.

Pandiji...you're lucky you weren't the one on the receiving end of Manik's wrath. You're lucky that Manik hasn't yet connected the dots as to who has been fuelling Dhruv's anger for him to behave in such a dsigraceful manner like today. You're lucky Manik hasn't realised that you have in face so demonically crossed your line too. But that moment of realisation isn't too far when he will notice you smiling so blatantly and realise that you were the real reason for his Nandini's priceless tears. You were the true culprit, who has shattered his Nandini's belief in herself for which reason she is endlessly blaming herself for the broken bond between two brothers. You're in fact the true criminal who is disallowing her to believe every word of reassurance that Manik is trying to fill her with. You're the heartless devil who has made her heart and soul weep so hysterically that for a moment she seemed to have lost every ability to understand what Manik was trying to say to her. "Just shut up Nandini! Tum kya bol rahi ho...are you mad? You're not to be blamed...Okay?" You crossed the line! Aahh my favorite...Manik vs Pandit.. Pandit=2 and manik has yet to score.. Panditji..jitna jor se dhruv punch khaya aaj...usse at least 100x jor ka punch tum khane wale ho..ready ho jao.. Manik punched dhruv very light..thoda sa bleeding hua hai..lekin pandit tera to haadiya bhi tootne wali hai.. tujhe ab tak pata nahi hai tune kisse pala para.. Tu Am's to kya CID ko bhi bulale... Koi faraq nahi padega.. MAnik Malhotra can take all of them head on... Consider yourself very lucky.. Agar tu Manik beta ka punch khayega..seedha padega hospital ki bed pe.. You have dug your own grave my friend.. aab maza dekh..haa tu khush ho ja. you scored one point buddy.. actually two points deti hoon.. one for instigating Dhruv and two bringing AM's in.. Jaa khush ho ja...Muskura..smirk bhi de de..ek handsome wala because soon teri yeh muskurat face pe nahi dekhega...you are about to lose that smile my friend..because MAnik Malhotra is more smart than you give him credit for.. He will figure everything out tmrw..and then..you will see what happens.. and how you will pay for making his NANDINI cry by using his best friend...bahut bhari parne wali hai tujhe..for making an innocent soul cry...just consider yourself a lucky soul in today's episode.. You forced Manik's buddy to turn on him,,,then you forced Dhruv to turn Manik's Nandini...ooo pandit bad move..very bad move..NO ONE HURTS NANDINI AND GETS AWAY WITH IT... I thought you were smart khiladi..tu toh beta anari nikhla...When it comes to Nandini Murthy, Manik Malhotra is a smart shayar khiladi.. He does not get fooled at all.. He does let anyone easily go when it comes to NAndini..he always makes them pay and when it comes to paying back Manik..it tends to be very heavy.. All those priceless tears that you made a girl shed..you will pay it back with your life..beta...you were warned..suna nahi tune..dhruv ko bhi warn kiya suna nahi ussne..dekh uska kya haal hai..aur who to best friend hai manik ka..aab soch tera saath kya hoga.. You are playing a dangerous game my friend.. Manik ka nandini ko rulaya tune.. be ready pandit...you are going down. - HAHA omg epic paragraph...I was on the floor from laughter! 😆 Manik didn't even spare his best friend...his buddy...arrey, his mum has never been able to win against him so how the hell does this panditji expect to win this battel! Manik has a soft corner for Dhruv, the love for him...it still breathes. But mind you, loathe, hatred and absolute furiousness is what Manik feels for this devil and so there will be no one to save him from Manik's wrath on the day that he takes upon the role of a monster to protect his heartbeat. The list of pain and deception is very long and so this battle can't end so eadily. Manik will never let it finish until it doesn't end the way he wants it to end!

They've somehow managed for now. He's somehow managed to numb her heartache by enveloping her in the cosy warmth of his long arms. He's somehow managed to assure her that there is nothing for her to feel guilty about by saying; "Tum mere liye kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti. In fact jab tum mere saat hoti ho na...toh everything seems to be perfect." He's somehow managed to fill her aching heart with a reassurance that he doesn't hold her responsible for any separation by kissing her so adoringly on her forehead and absorbing all the agony breathing inside her. She's somehow managed to read through his false, reassuring smile into the bleeding of his own heart. She's somehow managed to bandage the fresh wounds that have never stung him so hurtfully before. She's somehow managed to fill some relief into the soreness of his soul by dropping a loving kiss on his forehead so he is able to at least breathe amidst all this heartbreak. They've somehow managed to balm each other's sores and share the distressing suffering by just quietly joining their foreheads, so they can rise from this heartbreak and concentrate on their other battles.I was heartbroken when Nandini was crying, how she kept blaming her self.. Manik for once looked like he was helpless because he could not control her..she looked like a little baby...He was getting frustrated because his pleas was not reaching to her...his reassurance was not going through to her.. He felt helpless seeing his love cry and he could not do anything to get her out of the trance.. he picked her up in frustration like you need to hear me out Nandini..shut up for once..You are my everything, don't ever think that you came in btwn me and my friends..you came in btwn my buddy and me..you did not.. you are my ray of hope..you are the sunlight that shines daily in my life.. All the good things, positive things come from you.. don't think you are bad omen in my life.. you are not nandini..you are the most purest person in my life.. I loved how he kisses her pain away and the best part was how Nandini saw through his fake smile, she knew he was hurt. He was hurting from hurting his buddy.. She knew it.. I loved how they found solace in each other's arms.. She kissed his forehead like I know you are going through a pain... (I just hope Nandnu don't go on a guilt trip and distance herself from Manik due to this).. - I hardly doubt she will go ona guilt trip again...didn't you see that innocent nod she does when he asks if she's feeling better. Ohhh my nandu is just so adorable! My manik was indeed in so much pain from both sides, he was on the verge of crying himself but he knew he had to stay strong because his Nandini was in a much more miserable state than him. All his pain is nothing when it comes to her tears. I bet there was a pang of guilt in him too somewhere because he couldn't protect her from the harsh blames of his friend. But she is there to reassure him that he was always the best option for her so they will both never tread on that guilt path again. The healing touch...so important for the both of them, it's more effective than words and that's why he just engulfs her in an hug because she wasn't listening to a single word he was trying to say. So much pain, so much agony, yet it is their love that always truimphs and even in the coming battles, their love will make its way to the finishing line!

But this game that you've started, he promises to finish.

For today you've crossed the line, and as tomorrow will come, he will be compelled to bound his boundary too. Because no line, no boundary, no limit can restrain him from avenging the one who dare to hurt his love, his life, his Nandini...This game that Pandit started with Manik will backfire on him pretty soon.. Just matter of time.. When it comes to Nandini, Manik kisi ki bhi nahi sunta.. nothing can stop him..not even his friends... Even if Pandit is using Am's as his weapon to weaken Nandini.. it wont work because her heart belongs to Manik..pandit beta.. Nandini respects AM's but she loves Manik, nothing can break that love apart.. nothing can separate Manik from Nandini. Nothing can separate Nandini from Manik..They are two souls together.. SO pandit your countdown started..congrats on getting your two points but yeh points tere ko save nahi karega.. you said manik made a huge mistake challenging you...beta you made a mistake of messing with the Lion and the Lion's lady..very bad mistake... - The game has indeed begun now and it's the last round! Manik's resisted enough just for Nandini's sake but this time he won't resist at all. The pandit has crossed the line and like I said, he's compelling Manik to cross his too.


P.S..HATS OFF TO ALL THE ACTORS..Parth, Dishank, Niti and Uttkarsh..👏..you guys did a fantastic job!!

The indeed were just fabulous! And you did an amazing job with your analysis too...some brilliant points and hats off to you for taking the time out to write it even though you're all piled up with assessments!

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Originally posted by: Preeshaxo

DAMN GIRL, TAKE A FREAKING BOWWW
This was just everything. How do I commend you for your words? I can't anymore, your killing me these days. Just too good!!!! I LOVE YOU KAY ❤️

How do I write my response now, I feel like my words won't be enough after reading yours. I'll try ok..
The episode was just love, for a Monday!!Freaking awesome!

Dhruv. Dhruv. Dhruv.
Where do we begin. As he started to speak to Nandini and blame her for the interference of his and Manik's friendship you see the worst side of him yet. The build up of anger he has for her, the words he has to describe her were just disgusting. This is the same girl who was his friend, who he once "loved" but now? So much hate.
You see the tears form in her eyes, the utter shock that Dhruv can think of her like this. You see Manik standing on the stairs, in disbelief of the words that are coming out of Dhruvs mouth.
I loved how Manik punching Dhruv wasn't just simply him loosing his temper it was something more. He warned Dhruv, the desperation in his voice as he tells him to stop, he begged him not to cross the line. And then he stops him the only way he could. There was so much pain in the act of that punch!
"Meine kaha tha na, ENOUGH"
He wasn't sorry for that punch, he was hurt that his so called buddy could even think about saying such harsh words about Nandini. He's helpless when it comes to her, nothing else matters. The care and love for her overpowers him when she's in pain. And then he runs after her. No second questioning the pain his buddy is in, Nandini needs him.

Oh Nandini, she made me tear up. she finally broke. It's taken its toll on her and she finally sobbed her heart out.
The way she continuously blames herself for what's happened, he tells her the problems were there before she even came into their life's but still she didn't listen. She carries on blaming herself so he picks her up and places her on the table to snap her out of it. These words slayed me "Tum mere liye kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti. In fact jab tum mere saat hoti ho na...toh everything seems to be perfect"
As the tears stopped, the glare she had on him. His words, the only ones she'll listen too. She needs his words to believe her importance in his life.
Hiding her face in his neck, picking up her arm and placing it around him. Embracing her, holding her so close and tight. Shielding her, protecting her, absorbing her pain. And as she hugs him back, the tiny smile on his face acknowledging that she is fine, she's calming down.
His lips touched her forehead and he kept it like that for a few seconds. Giving and taking strength from her at the same time. It was all sorts of love that scene 😳

She knew he was hurting just as much as she was and for the first time when someone asked Manik if he was ok, he didn't need to pretend and fake a smile he was. He knows he can be not ok with her, she'll be there for him, she'll give him the solace he needs and that's exactly what she does. She cups his face oh so gently and kisses his forehead, just like he did for her.
They healed each other man

And then he rests his forehead on hers, taking it all in. That they are together in all of this. So content, at peace with each other.

Because Home is where the anchor drops ❤️

Love
Preesha
🤗

P.s. No mention of PanditJi today, I'll tackle him tomorrow. Today was just about my babies 😳


Always... Like hamesha... Your response is always so refreshing and you have this gift of pin-pointing all the important parts of the episode which gives your response a sense of completeness. I rea your response and I walk like sheesh she jut made it seem so real that I felt as if I watched the whole episode again! Awesome response girl!

So where do I start... We all knew that the punch was coming but nobody had imagines the pain Manik will go through throughout the whole sequence. I mentioned it in another post that Manik's pain was the most unbearable today. Nandini was crying yet his heart was weeping seeing her inability to understand that it wasn't her fault. Dhruv was bleeding but his heart was throbbing. Yet he wanted to stay stron for his Nandini... Because no pain is matchable to her precious tears. Reya mentioned this beautiful idea that he picked her up and brought her level to his face so he could get her to see in the depth of his eyes and made her realise that she is his definition of perfection. That he dodnt really have a life before she came and lightened up his world.
One thing I'm eagerly waiting for is Aliya's talk with Dhruv today because I loved their confrontation a few weeks back and hoping it will be just as amazing this time.
I've said it so many times and yet I will say it again that these two never need words to express. Just a mere touch is enough to communicate, console and share and that magical touch was present undoubtedly. Loved it when they joined their forheads to reassure each other that they are there for one another. They were teleporting all the strength and positivity they could gather in order to make it through this painful phase. Their last day seems to be dragging on forever for the both of them because they are having to face new hurdles at every step of life. But we all know that their victory is just moments away and it will be the most magial moment till yet.

I shall stop here because honestly you did such a fine job that I have nothing much to say.

Shall see you around my Preesha!

Twinkle <3

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