You crossed the line! - Page 2

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

<font size="2">DAY 36! - You
crossed the line!</font>

<font size="2">He
was warned. Not once.
Not twice. But numerous times.
No one's allowed to talk to her in such
a bitter-filled tone. Let
alone the tone, the context of the topic itself was senseless.Manik's
never questioned her character, her intentions, her decisions himself.
Then how dare he? He crossed
the line today! Leapt out of the boundary that marked his
last chance of returning home. "Enough Dhruv!"
How desperately he wanted to control his
anger today. He could
understand his brother's frustrating pain, his wordless miseries.
And so he was willing to forgive him for
the first few accusations.
But there's a limit to every nuisance.
And that limit was crossed today.</font>

<font size="2">You
didn't just disgrace your once-upon-a-time bestfriend named Nandini.
You shamelessly humiliated the pure
character of a woman. You
selfishly blamed an innocent individual for your own meaningless blunders.
You didn't just pin-point the faults in a faultless girl, you pointed a dishonouring finger upon a girl who means the world to
your brother. Don't forget,
when you point a finger so harshly at someone, the rest of the four fingers are
pointing back at you. You've
blundered today. You've
fumbled. You've crossed the
line! </font>

<font size="2">She is his
life, his reason of existence.
This breath he seems to inhale every few seconds or so; it belongs to her.
The beat of every heartbeat in his chest, whispers her name non-stop day and
night. She's the biggest
truth of his life and you've sinned to allegedly accuse her for being full of
lies. You've lapsed in understanding the purity and value of relationships
like friendship and love. She
had only ever wished for a lifelong friendship with you.
She had hoped to befriend your soul for the rest of her life.
But you; so blinded and deafened by your own uncertainties and jealousies have
torn apart her dreams of envisioning you as a life-long friend.
You have hurt your brother the most
today. She is his heart,
his soul, his passion, his core.
And you have continuously wounded her
with your poison-filled speared words.
She's bleeding, but the pain is spreading uncontrollably in his chest.
"Dhruv!
Ab bas! You're crossing the
line dammit!"
His hope for your return, his wish of
being able to reunite with his brother, you've crushed them all today.
He had considered you to be the most important part of his life.
But she...she
was, is and will always remain his life.
You hurt her. You crossed
your line!</font>

<font size="2">The
punch. </font>

<font size="2">It
was never his first resort.
He was compelled to raise his hand on his best buddy from once upon a time.
His friend dearer than a brother; seemed
to have ignored all his pleas, all his requests to please...just
calm down. With every
progressive word, Dhruv's ability to think, to understand, to comprehend
started to vanish. And so he
was left with no choice.
Dhruv had said enough, Manik had listened enough and Nandini...she
had cried more than enough.
He's let it all go on previous records.
His brother, his best buddy; abandoned him so inconveniently.
Abashed him with his ruthless taunts.
But Manik had patiently listened to every word, accepted his every blame,
tolerated his every painful remark.
But today it wasn't about him.
It was about this girl whom he can die for.
And mind you, he may not realise it just yet, but he can become the death of
someone for her sake too.
She's the light of his darkness.
She's the lyrics of his music.
She's the smile of his lips and the strength during his weakness.
She's the calm of his turmoils.
She's the meaning of his life.
She's the reason for his heartbeat and the definition of his love.
She taught him how to live life.
How to love life. And so if the need be, he will sacrifice his life
again and again just to see her safe, smiling and protected.
This was just a mere friendship.
And he crossed the line! </font>

<font size="2">A
few days ago,Dhruv stood there so arrogantly, mocking Cabir how everyone
seems to have left his side, but today that day seems to have arrived in
reality.
He has embarrassed his friends, his family; Fab 5.
They had trusted his return.
Hoped so obediently that he would never abandon their love and friendship.
But today he failed them incredulously. "Dhruv...Kyun?
Bas kar...ruk
ja...mat
bol..."
Manik hasn't stopped loving him.
In fact his pain for his brother has increased today as he was forced to raise
his hand on him. He still
wishes he could continue to hope for his surprise return somehow.
His eyes begging him to just hear his heart and not his mind for once.
He continues to plea to his brother to return on the path where they used to
tread together once upon a time.
He continues to request him to stop transforming into someone unrecognisable.
But his brother unheard every word and
blindly walked away, choosing to continue to walk towards the daunting dead end
that awaits him.</font>

<font size="2">As
much as he craves his brother again today, as much as his inner consciousness
is drowning in utmost guilt for physically wounding him, his priority will never change now.
Nandini. Her loudening sobs
need his attention, need his touch, need his caress.
She's in pain. Her heart is
weeping. Dhruv's hurt her
and that's more than enough for Manik to know that he's crossed his line!</font>

<font size="2"></font>

<font size="2">Pandiji...you're
lucky you weren't the one on the receiving end of Manik'swrath.
You're lucky that Manik hasn't yet
connected the dots as to who has been fuelling Dhruv's anger for him to behave
in such a dsigraceful manner liketoday.
You're lucky Manik hasn't realised that you have in face so demonically crossed
your line too.
But that moment of realisation isn't too far when he will notice you smiling so
blatantly and realise that you were the real reason for his Nandini's priceless
tears. You were the true
culprit, who has shattered his Nandini's belief in herself for which reason she
is endlessly blaming herself for the broken bond between two brothers.
You're in fact the true criminal who is disallowing her to believe every word
of reassurance that Manik is trying to fill her with.
You're the heartless devil who has made her heart and soul weep so hysterically
that for a moment she seemed to have lost every ability to understand what
Manik was trying to say to her.</i><i>
"Just shut up Nandini!
Tum kya bol rahi ho...are
you mad? You're not to be
blamed...Okay?"
You crossed the line!</font>

<font size="2">It's
you who has crossed the line because you made it so difficult for Nandini to
breathe through her guilt at one point.
It's you who has crossed the line
because no matter how much he tried to hold her, comfort her, ease her pain; he
couldn't because she just kept breaking apart.
It's you who has crossed the line because for a few minutes her mind started to
talk senseless blames and as much as he
tried for her to listen to her heart, the painful shrieks were just way too
loud that she couldn't hear herself what she was saying.
It's you who has crossed the line because you're
manipulating the reality of Manik's truthful love and care and portraying it as
his arrogance and wild-side in front of you guru ma, It's you who has
crossed the line because you are cheating the one who so proudly claims to have
nurtured and perfected you to become the man you stand today.
It's you who has crossed the line because you are juggling with hearts of pure
souls in order to fulfil your devious needs.
It's you who has crossed the line because you are maliciously consuming the
trust and faith of the two people who possibly respected and trusted you the
most. It's you who has crossed the line because you instigated one brother to
cluelessly hurt the other.
It's you who has crossed the line because your evil teachings provoked one
brother's anger to become the reason for his own bashing.
</font>

<font size="2">They've
somehow managed for now. He's somehow managed to numb her heartache
by enveloping her in the cosy warmth of his long arms.
He's somehow managed to assure her that there is nothing for her to feel guilty
about by saying; </b>"Tum mere liye
kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti.
In fact jab tum mere saat hoti ho na...toh
everything seems to be perfect."
He's somehow
managed to fill her aching heart with a reassurance that he doesn't hold her
responsible for any separation by kissing her so adoringly on her forehead and
absorbing all the agony breathing inside her.
She's somehow managed to read through
his false, reassuring smile into the bleeding of his own heart.
She's somehow managed to bandage the fresh wounds that have never stung him so
hurtfully before. She's
somehow managed to fill some relief into the soreness of his soul by dropping a
loving kiss on his forehead so he is able to at least breathe amidst all this
heartbreak.
They've somehow managed to balm each other's sores and share the distressing
suffering by just quietly joining their foreheads,so they can rise from
this heartbreak and concentrate on their other battles. </font>

<font size="2">But
this game that you've started, he promises to finish. </font>

<font size="2">For
today you've crossed the line, and as tomorrow will come, he will be compelled
to bound his boundary too.
Because no line, no boundary, no limit can restrain him from avenging the one
who dare to hurt his love, his life, his Nandini. </font>

<font size="2">______</font>

<font size="2">Here I am. Doing this between classes cause last week I made
you wait all week..lol. This week I hope between assignments I can get my 2
cents down so that we may enlighten each other. And you always enlighten me
with your beautiful words and thoughts. Your take on the episode adds so another
dimension to the episode. You understand
what the writers are trying to show their viewers and you break it down
perfectly. </font>

<font size="2">Dhruv and Nandini. Two important people in Manik's
life. Dhruv is part of Manik's existence
but Nandini Murthy, he is his life, literally. This isn't about picking one or
the other. This isn't about priorities. This is love. Nandini is the reason for
his existence, she is the oxygen that Manik Maltorta breathes. Their love, so
pure, so true isn't something he is going to justify to Dhruv. Dhruv is wrong,
his accusations are misplaced once again. Manik, today he wasn't angry. Today,
he was hurt. Never has manik Maltorta fought so hard against his own anger.
Today, he begged his buddy not to let his anger win, not to unleash the bull. The
struggle was so real. It was so visible. He was desperate to not to cross a
line, not to raise his hand on his brother. He kept warning Dhruv that he is
threading on dangerous ground, he needs to stop. And that punch, it was like
Manik punched himself, he hurt himself he couldn't believe that their friendship has come to such a sad
point that he has been reduced to punching his buddy, his brother. His pain was
so vast one could drown in it. </font>

<font size="2">A line was crossed today; a line of respect Manik demands
of his friends for the love of his life. Dhruv crossed that line! He has
disrespected a woman, questioned her character, and accused her that she toyed with
two men at the same time. Disgrace, such a disgrace., Dhruv. Have you become
such a man who has no respect for woman ? Will I too far off if I compare you
to men like Rocky and the politician ? Because respect for woman really starts
from the heart. Disappointment for Dhruv continues to increase. Had Dhruv chosen
to spit venom against Manik once again, he would have stood there, let his
heart get crushed to pieces but he would have not uttered a single world. But
Dhruv, today he has chosen Nandini as his punching bag and nobody and I mean
nobody gets away with hurting Manik's Nandini. Even Manik himself. Manik refuses to forgive himself for hurting
her so how did Dhruv ever think he could get away with this ? Manik, so
defeated he was today, all his hope has been crushed. Maybe his friend will
never come home. Maybe, he will never be able to welcome his friend again with
open arms. Hurting his nandini is a crime in manik maltorta's eyes and today,
Dhruv has committed that crime but Manik still loves his brother, his buddy. So
today, his heart bleeds. He couldn't protect Nandini from Dhruv's venom, he
couldn't stop his buddy from going farther away from him. So defeated our Manik
was today. </font>

<font size="2">Today, Dhruv may have done damage I had feared last week. He
picks another victim for the blame game: Nandini. So blind Dhruv has become in
his own anger and resentment that honestly there seems to be no hope. His
misconceptions have been fueled by the Pandit and today was all about Pandit's
attack, he pulled out the big guns. Ams has witnessed Manik at his worst. They
say, your first impression is the your impression. The Pandit has managed to
paint a rather poor impression of our Manik and Ams like any mother who has her
child's best intentions at heart will want her child to stay away from such a
boy. Manik will have a hard task at hand to win his Nandu's Ams's heart. He
knows how important Ams is to his Nandini. He needs her to accept him, to give
her love and blessings to them. And he will face the challenge head on. Really
keen on seeing how this will happen after the Pandit has been exposed and the
fusion has finally happened. But for now, Manik is the rich, bad boy and Ams
will want to keep Nandini far away from Manik.
So Pandit gets a point, for now. Today, the Pandit attacked. Tomorrow
Manik will answer. He will connect the dots and see how the cheap game you
played. And he shall make you pay Pandit. Like I said, nobody gets away with
hurting his Nandini and you have caused Dhruv to hurt her where it hurts the
most. Her heart. And you have caused her to shed tears, her precious tears that
break Manik's heart.</font>

<font size="2">When they hurt, they always find solace in each other's
arms. It's the safest place in the world. In pain, they are companions. They
absorb each other's pain and sorrows. But imagine the guilt Nandini is now
weighted with that her Manik hadn't been able to reach out and soothe her initially.
Because she believes everything Dhruv said, "It was me." She now believes the fault
was hers. She is now breaks down in sobs because she thinks she broke a pure
friendship. Nandini Murthy, who wouldn't even hurt a fly intentionally and here
she thinks she has broken a pure friendship, a beautiful bond of love. His
words of reassurance can't reach her. Her tears, he wipes her tears but they
keep flowing and his pain increases too. How can he reach her ? She has gone
off to her own place of guilt where he can't reach her. So he plucks her into
his arms and places her on the table so they can be on the same level. He
forces her to lock her eyes with his. He needs her to see the truth in his
eyes. He demands that she sees herself in his eyes. She is the truest truth is
his life. She is his light, his shining star who has pulled him out of the
darkness. She is his calm in this noise and chaos of life. How can she even
think she is wrong for him when with her, he is at his best. With her, he feels
alive, he feels happy. With her, he can be simply Manik. That day, she reassured
him he is perfect for her. Today, he reassures her she is perfect with him.
With her, everything seems perfect. Imperfect alone, together they are perfect,
just perfect for each other. </font>

<font size="2">When Nandini hurts, she can cry it out. Manik can gather her
into the warmth and safety of his arms and absorb her pain.The way Manik drew her into his arms today was MY beautiful moment because as much as he needed to comfort her, he needed to soothe his own heart too because he too is hurting. Her tears, he can
replace them with a smile. But Manik's hurt, he conceals it. His pain, his hurt,
he is so use to hiding it. No one has ever taken the time to heal his hurts
before so he saw no point in showing them. Until Nandini. With her, she sees
his pain even when he tries to conceal it. So she will hold him with tenderness
and kiss the pain away. How she wishes she could take all his pain and hurt
away but that can't happen right now. His buddy is still lost, he hasn't found
his way home. So she steadies him with her love. They stay connected for a few precious seconds
to draw on each other's strength. They heal each other so they can get ready
for another battle. The world is against them and now Ams seems to have been
misled to join the wrong side. Will the battles be never be over ? They are fighting
for so hard for each other right now, that when they do win, when their hope is
victorious, when Manik has defeated the devil; their love will be all that
stronger.</font>

<font size="2">Umm, I think this got too lengthy but I genuinely struggled
today, maybe because the episode was so fab and so well performed by all the
actors that I couldn't find the right words today. Actually I need to take a
moment to appreciate Uttu, Niti and Parth especially. Parth does so splendid in
emoting his pain. Taylor was amazing today too. And Uttu, I have to say is one
actor has improved leaps and bounds as a actor and his hard work shows. He
matched Taylor and Parth well today. </font>

<b><font size="2">Okies, now I am done. You were amazing as well my love. </font>

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omg Twinkle...HATS OFF to u...u added MORE DEPTH MORE BEAUTY to the rockin epi today..!! truly outstanding...loved readin it

Originally posted by: jai18

Dude that was bloody brilliant :D WOW WOW WOW!

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Had Dhruv chosen to spit venom against Manik once again, he would have stood there, let his heart get crushed to pieces but he would have not uttered a single world. But Dhruv, today he has chosen Nandini as his punching bag and nobody and I mean nobody gets away with hurting Manik's Nandini. Even Manik himself. Manik refuses to forgive himself for hurting her so how did Dhruv ever think he could get away with this ? Manik, so defeated he was today, all his hope has been crushed. Maybe his friend will never come home. Maybe, he will never be able to welcome his friend again with open arms. Hurting his nandini is a crime in manik maltorta's eyes and today. I agree with you that MAnik still did not forgive himself for breaking Nandu's heart.. He still considers himself unworthy of her after all the crap he made her go through.. Thats why he got no answer for Pandit's taunts😡...SAying anything about Nandini is not allowed in Manik's dictionary.. Only Manik has the right to do anything with Nandini ( meaning romantic things).. No one is allowed or was given that right. (agar MAnik ko pata chal gaya ki pandit ne nandini ko nandu kaha...world war 3 start hoga...😆)...

Today, Dhruv may have done damage I had feared last week. He picks another victim for the blame game: Nandini. So blind Dhruv has become in his own anger and resentment that honestly there seems to be no hope. His misconceptions have been fueled by the Pandit and today was all about Pandit's attack, he pulled out the big guns. Ams has witnessed Manik at his worst. They say, your first impression is the your impression. The Pandit has managed to paint a rather poor impression of our Manik and Ams like any mother who has her child's best intentions at heart will want her child to stay away from such a boy. Manik will have a hard task at hand to win his Nandu's Ams's heart. He knows how important Ams is to his Nandini. He needs her to accept him, to give her love and blessings to them. And he will face the challenge head on. Really keen on seeing how this will happen after the Pandit has been exposed and the fusion has finally happened. But for now, Manik is the rich, bad boy and Ams will want to keep Nandini far away from Manik. So Pandit gets a point, for now. Today, the Pandit attacked. Tomorrow Manik will answer. He will connect the dots and see how the cheap game you played. And he shall make you pay Pandit. Like I said, nobody gets away with hurting his Nandini and you have caused Dhruv to hurt her where it hurts the most. Her heart. And you have caused her to shed tears, her precious tears that break Manik's heart. Pandit's countdown already started.. He has fully entered the lion's den himself...so aab pata chal jayega what it means to enter Manikk Malhotra's den who can go to any extent and length for the girl he loves...Manik is a experienced person as I said before.. Agar apni maa ko takar de sakte hai toh yeh pandit to baye haath ka khel hai.. He figured out Nyo's game during the break up scene without any explanation because he knows nandu's nature so a little smirk (cute smirk by dishank) from Pandit will reveal all the game plans.. I agree that MAnik might have a little tough time convincing am's but then again.. once hte truth comes out for pandit..am's might look into manik in a new way..she wants the best for her granddaughter like any parent and like the caption of Manik in the kyy forum "the guy basically everyone warned you about" thats what am is seeing.. a rich brat that is the trustee's son who bullies people..little does she know..that this rich brat means the world to your granddaughter.. your little nandu is madly deeply in love with this rich brat..She finds her peace in his arms. If Nandu is the life of Manik then Manik is the world for her.. Pandit ko ab tak Nandini ka pyar aur gussa nahi dekha (yaad hai, do baar punch khaya manik ne iski haath se)..so pandit you have a sherni sleeping, you are going the path to wake it up and if she wakes up..the punches are gonna be hard to digest for you.. Nandini is powerful by herself if she can take on a monster like Manik. plus the fab 3.you are nothing but a ant to her.. 😆

When they hurt, they always find solace in each other's arms. It's the safest place in the world. In pain, they are companions. They absorb each other's pain and sorrows. But imagine the guilt Nandini is now weighted with that her Manik hadn't been able to reach out and soothe her initially. Because she believes everything Dhruv said, "It was me." She now believes the fault was hers. She is now breaks down in sobs because she thinks she broke a pure friendship. Nandini Murthy, who wouldn't even hurt a fly intentionally and here she thinks she has broken a pure friendship, a beautiful bond of love. His words of reassurance can't reach her. Her tears, he wipes her tears but they keep flowing and his pain increases too. How can he reach her ? She has gone off to her own place of guilt where he can't reach her. So he plucks her into his arms and places her on the table so they can be on the same level. He forces her to lock her eyes with his. He needs her to see the truth in his eyes. He demands that she sees herself in his eyes. She is the truest truth is his life. She is his light, his shining star who has pulled him out of the darkness. She is his calm in this noise and chaos of life. How can she even think she is wrong for him when with her, he is at his best. With her, he feels alive, he feels happy. With her, he can be simply Manik. That day, she reassured him he is perfect for her. Today, he reassures her she is perfect with him. With her, everything seems perfect. Imperfect alone, together they are perfect, just perfect for each other. This scene was perfect for MAnik to assure her that she is perfect for him.. No matter what the world says just like how Nandini assured Manik, you are perfect for me.. CVS is doing a good job of showing each other's feelings like that😆..She was acting like a little girl out of control and MAnik knew he could not control her so what does he do pick the girl up and even then she tries to leave when he convinces her.. that you are perfect for me..there is no one better.. there is no one who i rather be with..you are my light..in my dark world.. in my pain, i find peace with you...He was trying so hard to make her understand whne she kept blaming herslef for breaking a true friendship..like its not your fault...nothing is your fault...I agree with you that he is the best when he is with her.. nothing goes wrong.. He can be the regular manik.. like a human being who does not put a shield on.. and even if he did put up a shield..he knows nandini is the only person to break it.. who can sense his worry even when her eyes are blindfolded... jsut like you said, she is the biggest truth of his life.. she is his life...his world...his smile..his heartbeat..his passion..

So the game continues.. pandit has two points manik has yet to score... tmrw Manik will hit a target.. Pandit ready rehna..yeh sab jo tune kiya from instigating dhruv and making nandu cry...you just did this two things but in return..tujhe kya kya milne wali hai...tujhe pata bhi nahi haiii😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Queen_of_Shadow

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