MaNan FF:'Love Keeps US Together' Thread 2 Link - PG 1

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

M lovin it more n. More each day

Ur update suspence maing me crazy

Update soon

Cant wait yr

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

HARU I WANT A UPDATE TONIGHT DONT KNW HOW BUTVI WANT .SUSPENCE IS KILLINGVME MAN.

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sanya0612

@sanya0612

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

It's amazing ... ids getting interesting more n more. ... continue soon

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harshitha2398

@harshitha2398

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

WOW!! gud

The way Nandu called Manik a MONSTER... Superb!!

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ushmaaa

@ushmaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

arrey u made dhruv also like that..now from whom manik will be jealous😆...

anyways,it's amazing..

n the way the story is developing ,it's getting more and more intersting..

what was that jhatka at the end nandu got..plz reveal soon..

plz cont asap..

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Witcher

@Witcher

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Hm its getting interessant, so nandu will be obviously involved with everything

But why was nadini asked to deliver this, another mystery? Does the killer know that nandu is connected?

I have so many questions in my head and I am really excited for the answers 😃

Your writing is good and the story keeps getting better with each chapter

I loved how nandini stood up against fab 5

Ok dont take it as a "negative" comment

I love manan very much and of course i want them together but please dont rush it, it would be unrealistic and the story is way too good to have something in it that doesn't make much sense

Nandini having any kind of romantic feeling this early seems strange, she getting teary eyed because manik kisses alia? How long has she known him? I know its Manan forever but i feel they havent reached there yet where nandu would feel anything romantic

I am just sharing what I am thinking after reading this, I am not suggesting anything at all its your story

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kunwar amarholic.. !! ðŸ˜‰

@ndcdance

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

interesting update..

truth of manik's parents gonna reveal.and what s the shock that Nandini got..

loved her jealousy. If it was... :P

waiting for the next part..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: chair1992
Hm its getting interessant, so nandu will be obviously involved with everything
But why was nadini asked to deliver this, another mystery? Does the killer know that nandu is connected?
I have so many questions in my head and I am really excited for the answers 😃

Your writing is good and the story keeps getting better with each chapter

I loved how nandini stood up against fab 5

Ok dont take it as a "negative" comment
I love manan very much and of course i want them together but please dont rush it, it would be unrealistic and the story is way too good to have something in it that doesn't make much sense

Nandini having any kind of romantic feeling this early seems strange, she getting teary eyed because manik kisses alia? How long has she known him? I know its Manan forever but i feel they havent reached there yet where nandu would feel anything romantic

I am just sharing what I am thinking after reading this, I am not suggesting anything at all its your story

Yeah !! I completely agree with yu..I never take it as a negative thing..am glad ki u shared it...I know she doesnt know abt him...I know if I show Manan so fastly it would be unrealistic..But Sometimes we feel attracted right !! We feel attracted to a person right !! Maybe its infatuation or attraction .In next update u will get to know ...Thanks for sharing ur view...really I appreciate ur point of view..:) :) 👏