A Oneshot focussed on two of my favorite character

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My second OS

The door bell was ringing for the past five minutes. "I am coming, I am coming", said an irritated Navya. "Who the hell is ringing, Nandini is at home, Cabir at work and Mukti and Alia are out shopping and well Manik, he probably is with Nandini. Oh no, what if it is antiji? She is very nice and caring but Cabir always gets angry when I spent time with her. No no, I am not scared of Cabir's anger, I will open the door."
Outside the door a nervous guy was waiting patiently. It was his first visit afterall to this bachelorpad. The suprise was very big when a nervous looking girl opened the door.

"Cabir?! You were ringing the whole time? What's wrong with you don't you know that a pregnant woman needs lots of sleep. Huh? Why are you looking at me like that? It's true I read it online, if you don't believe me, I will send you the link! Besides where are your keys? Did you forget them again? Anyway why are you even here, shouldn't you be at work? Do you have a day off? If so why didn't you tell me, I really need to buy some stuff and would like your help and advice, I mean afterall we live together. Hello Cabir, why aren't you saying anything? Kabse meh bole jarehi hu or tum gunge ki tara khare hoh. Normally you can't keep quit for a minute, are you ill? Huh say something" demanded a very frustrated Navya.

"Wow, you really talk like a waterfall, nonstop. First let me come in and introduce myself to you. Hi I am Ranbir, Ranbir Dhawan, Cabir's twin brother and you are" asked a smiling Ranbir.

"Katrina, Katrina Kaif! What has gotten into you? First you woke me up and than missed work and now you are playing one of your stupid pranks? And that to with me, don't you know that I am not that old girl anymore who will fall for all the lies and pranks! Besides don't you dare use my Ranbir's name, I don't like it. You know what I am hungry, I didn't cook anything today, so go and get some food. I want a pizza, a big one ok! And that too for myself, afterall I am eating for two."

Navya started to push Ranbir out when suddenly Cabir entered the house.

"Omg why are there two Cabirs? What have I done to get this kind of punishment, one is already horrible and another one? I must be having a nightmare." With that she fainted but before she could fall Ranbir catched her and laid her on the sofa.

"Bring water, fast",shouted Ranbir.

"Bhai don't worry, it's her roska tamasha. She will wake up soon, no need for wasting water" said Cabir.

"What are you doing here? Why didn't you inform me that you were coming? I would have picked you up, is everything ok? Are you in any kind of problem? Is it dad? Did he do something?"

"Relax and breath, since when do you talk so fast without taking a break? Huh? Anyway, I came to see my brother. Do I really need to have a reason to visit my bro?" Asked Ranbir

"Besides what's up with this girl? You live with her, how come?"

"Arre that is a long and tragic story of my life. I must have done some really horrible things in life to get stuck with her." Said Cabir.


"You must have done something really good in life that you got to breath the same air and stay in the same flat as me. You should thank your lucky stars that I am in your life. I cook, clean and do your laundry. You always smell of fresh roses because of me." Said a proud Navya.

"Roses, are you crazy? I have a unique scent and now I smell like some cheap chemical product?" Shouted Cabir.

"Arre guys stop fighting, Cabir you smell nice ok and you Miss Katrina Kaif, calm down, don't get worked up. It's not good for your baby, trust me I have read it online" winked Ranbir.

"I am leaving, I am hungry" said Navya and started to leave when Ranbir took her hand in his.

"Wait before leaving, tell me your real name" demanded Ranbir.

"You want to know my name, ok it's none of your bussiness!" Shouted Navya and freed her hand.

"Hey Miss Kaif, I am going to find out your real name and change it to Mrs Kapoor" answered a smiling Ranbir.

Navya who didn't know know what to say left the apartment.

"Mrs Kapoor, are you crazy, did you just flirt with Madhubala? That girl is mental, she needs medical help. While I am thinking of ways of getting rid of her, you are planning on turning her into my sister-in-law?" Asked Cabir.

"Arre I was joking, since when are you so serious, it was just a bit of healthy flirting, besides she is cute in an akward way" said a smiling Ranbir.

Chairfan
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Cabir and Navya can't be a couple but Cabir has a twin brother with the name Ranbir.

I am not a writer, I prefer to read, PLEASE ignore my mistakes
And it's my second OS here, hopefully I will be able to write a Manan OS as well

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Posted: 10 years ago
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U are amazing but can't imagine Navya with him. Because I want Kabir to be with her even if its just like friends. But I loved ur writing Kasam se
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahaha
This was so good.. Katrina kaif 😆
Mrs. KAPOOR 🤣

Really good one... you should write more! You write quite well 😃👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my gosh I soon wish this would happen!!! You should continue this . It's awesome:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os,
but i still want navaya-kabir,i know ranbir is kabir twince,but i just loved cavya chemistry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...loved it...pls do write more like this...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8seetha

U are amazing but can't imagine Navya with him. Because I want Kabir to be with her even if its just like friends. But I loved ur writing Kasam se


Thank you 😳
I personally love cavya scenes a lot they have a very unique and different kind of chemistry
I am curious whether ranbir and navya would hit it off so well as well
Besides navya loves ranbir na


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishneetb

Hahahaha

This was so good.. Katrina kaif 😆
Mrs. KAPOOR 🤣

Really good one... you should write more! You write quite well 😃👍🏼


Thank you 😳
I will write a manan OS (hopefully)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugarOOhoney

Oh my gosh I soon wish this would happen!!! You should continue this . It's awesome:)


😳
Thank you but its a OS
It really would be nice to see ranbir cabir and navya in one scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherma

nice os,

but i still want navaya-kabir,i know ranbir is kabir twince,but i just loved cavya chemistry


Thank you

I love cavya as well, they are very special

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