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*********AT NIGHT *********

Everyone decided to have a bonfire party ...they lighted the bonfire and sat around it making a big circle ...fab5 were sitting together in a line- alya ,dhruv ,manik,cabir,mukti and nh3 were sitting together - shahid harshad , navya,nandini and of course our dear abhimanu ...manan were sitting facing each other ... having there cute eyelock which were continuously disturbed by their friends ...

"Guys aren't u all getting bored ...let's do some thing fun "mukti said cheerfully ...

"Hey I second u on that young lady , lets play some thing "abhimanu said flashing his ever charming smile to mukti making her blush a little ...which never went unnoticed by our 'CID head' cum 'cupid' our very own cabira ...

"Why god why ...why u gave me such sharp eyes ...har bar I am the first one to notice chemistry between people pehle our dear manik and nandu and now mukti and abhi ...god don't tell me that u r going to make me LOVE GURU from fab5's drummer ..." Cabir thought to himself ...

"Yeah but what can we play here bhai ...don't tell me u r up to something "nandini said poking abhimanu's shoulder ...

Mukti had a big relief in her when nandu called abhi "BHAI"
And on the other hand our cute Mr manik malhotra smiled seeing his lady love's pouting angryily at her brother

"No not at all nandu ...tujhe lagta h tera ye bhola bhala bhai Kuch khurafaati kar sakta h ...look at my face ...I am so innocent "abhi said making an innocent look ...

Everyone giggled at his tactics while nandini softly hits him on his head ...

"Let's play truth and dare ...what say ? "Asked MANIK after having a soft laugh..

"Yeah good idea ..."every one agreed except harshad who made an excuse and ran from there ..putting navya in a big question mark .. But she chucked that thought... And of course some students knew that playing with fab 5 is really very risky because everyone knew fab5 gets damn dirty in some games ...so some of them ran to save themselves from them

Navya gave them a confused look and thought "ye Sab bahane bana kar bhag kyu rahe h ...chodo hame kya ..."

Slowly only fab5 and navya nandini abhi were left with 6 or 7 random people who were new and didn't know much about fab 5

"But how will we spin the bottle " nandini asked giving a confused look to everyone as the center had the bonfire ...

"Good question miss Einstein ...kya kare kya kare yeah let's shift then ...what say kahi aur bhet jaate h ,...,good abhi good what a brain miss Einstein ko bhi peche chod diya ..." Abhi said making every one laugh again ...

They all shifted to a corner under a big tree ...they sat in a circle ...and dhruv kept the bottle in middle ...

"Spin it "manik said ...and dhruv spins the bottle ...it landed on navya and to her bad luck manik was sitting opposite to her ...
She closed her eyes and said "navya naveli aaj tho tu gai "

Manik gave her his world famous smirk and said "ready miss madhubala. Truth or dare..."

Navya composed herself as if she is not afraid and said "yo navya ...hum dare lenge"...

"Good ...so madhubala ji ...u have to say some romantic lines to the guy I choose " manik said

"kya ? Par kise" navya asked as she didn't wanted to speak romantically with any unknown person

Manik looked at cabir who was sitting next to him shaking his head In a big no ..."cabir ko "

"Kya "navya and cabir yelled together while others laughed

"Kyu nai kar sakti "asked manik with a cute look

"Nai hum karenge na ..."she said nervously and whispered in nandinis ears "agar ye tumhara boyfriend nai hota na tho hum iska murder kar dete "

Nandini laughed and said "uska murder baadmein Karna pehle perform ur dare "

Navya bobbed her head and went near cabir who was standing giving her his careless look blowing a soft whistle ...but deep inside he knew what havoc was going on inside his heart was beating like a engine of train ...

Navya made faces and came more close to him making his breath hitch in his throat ...

"Cabir tumhare akhe ..."navya started romantically staring at him ...

"Kya hua meri akho ko "cabir asked spoiling her expression and making everyone giggle

"Kuch nai ...tumhari akho ko dekhke ...maan karta h ki tumhare akhomein kho jau and sidhe tumhari akho se tumhare dimak mein utar jau "she said resting her hand on his chest making him gulp all his saliva and making others mouth open in a big 'O'

"Kyu?"he asked breathing heavily

"Kyu ki tumhare dimak pura khali h ...bohat jagha h vaha settle hone ke liye " she said and started laughing while others too joined her ...

Cabir made faces when manik said "hello but it was not romantic "...

Cabir gave manik a 'bas kar saale' look ...

Navya and manik started arguing when nandini said "manik stop complaining .. She started it romantically ..."

Manik looked at nandini and then at navya who was smirking ...

He gave nandini a soft smile and glared at navya ...she showed him her tongue and sat beside nandini

Dhruv again spined the bottle and to his surprise it stopped on him only. ...

Everyone hooted for him abhi was sitting opposite to dhruv

"So truth or dare ?" Abhi asked

"Truth "dhruv said with a warm smile ...

"OK so ...are u in love and if yes tell us her names first alphabet "abhi said only to get hitted by nandini ...

"Bhai ye tho bacho wale sawal h "she said
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"Haa tho agar usne iss baremein nai bataya hoga apne friends ko tho ..it will be fun "Abhi said

"Vo ...I am ...vo "dhruv hesitated

"Come on dhruv " alya said holding his hand

"Yes I am in love ..." Dhruv said

"What " fab3 and navni yelled together

"Great and what's the first alphabet of her name " abhi asked

"Ahh ..its 'N' "dhruv said and mukti gave him a 'bas***d u didn't told me this 'look

While cabir and manik exchanged looks thing about some thing similar and that was 'nandini' ...they have notice things about dhruv when it comes to nandini ...'is he in love with nan...,no its not possible ...but what if he is in love with my nandini " manik thought and that small thought made his blood boil in anger



"Dhruv ...u didnt told me about this "manik said angrily

"Wo buddy ...ek bar vo ladki haa bolde na then i will tell u each and every detail to all of u ..."he said giving a pleading look to mukti manik and cabir ...

"Pakka "they asked together

"Yeah pakka " dhruv said

"Lets continue then " abhi said and dhruv spinned the bottle ...while now manik lost the interest in game ...but he again got excited when the bottle stopped on his baccha ...but the next movement he got tensed as he saw alya was opposite to nandini

"Oh shit "manan said together softly ...

"So truth or dare "alya asked her with a devilish smile

"Dare " nandini said as choosing truth was not a good option

"Hmmm ..so nandini u have to kiss dhruv in front of all of us ...and before you argue that I didn't mentioned properly ..it should be a lip kiss " alya said

making dhruv go numb ...and f
Others get shocked ...maniks anger was getting above his head ...
"Have u lost it "nandini asked and abhimanu shifted uncomfortably

"I don't think its a good idea " cabir said

"Oh cabir ...we always played it dirty right then why not today ..."alya asked

"Alya ..." Manik started but before he could say anything raghav came there ...

"Guys come with I need to do an announcement "raghav said and took them with him ...while nandini ,manik ,abhi ,and cabir sighed in relief ...alya was as usually angry that this plan went flop ...

"Guys ...there's a bad news ...actually niyonika ma'am called me just now and she want u all back to space tomorrow ...I don't know the reason but we have to leave tomorrow ..so now go and sleep " he said sadly and went from there leaving all of them cribbing... All were angry with niyonika but they had to follow her rules and if she want all of them back then its a phathar ki lakir for all of them ...

They all went to sleep disheartedly ..

Alya was going inside her tent when nandini tapped her shoulder ...
Alya turned and gave her a disgusting look ...

"What ?"alya asked her

"What the hell is wrong with u ...have u lost it ...u wanted me to kiss dhruv "nandini asked disgusted with her

"Kyu tumhe sirf MANIK ko kiss Karna pasand h "alya asked

"Alya " nandini yelled

"Don't yell at me ...listen u ...u know manik can never be with u ...I will make sure he do hate u ...I will make him hate u and love me ...and tumhe kya lagta h ...ki fab5 will accept u as his girlfriend ...then its a big no ...even if one of us will say a no to u na then manik will leave u "alya said

"U know alya I trust him and ..."nandini said and was cutted in middle by alya

"Then u should not ...u know he love me ..sirf time pass kar raha h vo tumhare saat ...he is just taking revenge .. "Alya said

"Oh god alya ...u r disgusting ...I don't know why I am talking to u "she said and left from there angrily ...

"I will separate u both "alya murmured under her breath ...

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Nandu reach's her tent only to find navya standing there with a pillow in her hand

"Why r u holding this pillow kya hua "nandu asked

Navya gave the pillow to nandu and said "apke poojniya boy friend says the...kaha he ki vo tumhara wait kar raha h vo Church ke Lane mein "

Nandini smiled and took the pillow ...and went there after wishing good night to navya

She entered from the gate of church to see her dear boy friend laying on grass and gazing stars ...

She went near him and stood beside him ...he looked at her and said "come " indicating her to sleep next to him ...

She kept the pillow and slept beside him ...

"Taare gin rahe ho "she asked naughtily and rested her head on his chest ...

"Nai ...I am trying to find the brightest star but then I realized that the brightest star is just beside me resting her head on my chest"he said rubbing his hand on her arms

She blushed and giggled "kitne romantic line maar rahe ho ..."she said

"Tumhe dekh ke innovative ho jata hu mein "he said and kissed her head

They gazed at stars without uttering a word to each other ...

Nandini was remembering alyas words ...while manik was thinking about alya 's dare thing but his thoughts were broken by a sweet voice

"Baby ...ek baat puchu "nandini asked

"Yeah sure baccha .. But make sure its not any stupid question like last time "he said

"Hmmm...manik what if fab5 didn't accepted us "she asked in a very sad tone

The question made sense for manik ..he understood her fear ...

"Nandu ...why they will not accept you ...tell me ... I love u and they will always understand my love for u ...and yeah agar vo log nai maane then we both will run away together to some isolated island u know jaha koi na ho except us "he said naughtily ...

Nandini giggled and looked at manik by resting her chin on his chest ...
"Accha mr malhotra aur tum vaha karoge kya "she asked

"Mein I will teach music there yeah " he said

"Really honey ...but agar uss island pe koi hoga nai tho tum kya tree's aur plants ko gaana sikhaoge ..."she asked in a gigglish tone

"Arre haa ...tho mein apne favorite student ko shikhaunga ...u know who she is "he asked with a smirk

Nandini raised her eyebrow demanding a answer . manik slides his arm around her waist and make her lay on grass and gets on top of her making her shiver ...

"U ...I will teach music to u ...but u know u will have to pay a heavy fees ..."he said with a smirk ...

"Hook tum apne girl friend se fees loge "she asked in a kiddish tone

"Yeah u know ...we should not bring our personal and professional life together .. So I will take fees from you "he said with 'I am so smart ' look

"Ohhh what's the fees teacher "she asked like a student making him go all awww on her

"Ur fees is ..." He started moving towards her making her breath go wild ...her heart beating fast like a train ...

He went near her ear and whispered "this"..and he started kissing her face ...he kissed her nose softly ,then her both cheeks he slowly moved near her lips ...

"Manik "she murmured under her breathe

But he just claimed her lips with his ...sucking her lips madly ...nibbling her lips and trying to just talked her mouth fully in to his ...she kissed him back trying to match his passion but it was impossible to match his passion for her ...she clutched his vest tightly and he seperated from her realizing her need for air ..


Both were breathing heavily ..."I thought u will eat me up" he heard her saying softly ...

"I won't mind to "he said and Nuzzled his head in her neck putting all his weight on her ...

"So will it be a monthly fees ..."she asked

"No daily "she heard him saying while kissing her neck ...

"Manik get up ...u r heavy "she said and him off her and rested herself on top of him ...

"I love u "she said and kissed his heart ...he smiled at that gesture and patted her head softly to make her sleep as if she is a 1 month old baby

"I love u too " he said and hugged her tightly and both slept together


Precap ...

"How could u do this manik " nandini cried
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"Baby pls try to understand "manik said cupping her face
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"I don't wanna talk to u "she said still crying and pushed him and went from there leaving a frustrated ,sad and angry MANIK behind

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