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Posted: 10 years ago
Yr ab bus kro an r kitna w8 krvao gy ap 😔 bachy ki jan logy kya w8 krva krva k 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mumma yeh update nhi kar rahi 😭 😭 😭
Plz update soon...
Aur kitna intezaar karvaogi????
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...hiii guys ... after a long long time ...any way heres the update ...


PART 20



"nandini "he called her breaking her thoughts ...

"Hmm"she responded looking at him ...

"Tell me na baby ...who was he ..she what ever ...I will dig him inside the ground ...my baby cried so much "he said her anger rosing up ...

"Manik ...rehne do na pls"she said not wanted to tell him anything. ...

"Par ...nandini I need to know ...kya guarantee h ki he/she will not mess with u again "manik said cupping her face ...

"But I won't mess up next time ...,I love u "she said and hugged him . .

"OK don't tell me now...but agar u feel to share this thing then I am just beside u ..listening to u always and yeah I love u too"he said and rubbed her hairs ...

"Hmmm"she murmured and hugged him tightly ...

"Waise camp wapas jaane ka plan h yaa Kuch aur plan h ..."he asked naughtily yet softly tickling his fingers on her back ,...

"Manik ...you one track mind "she said hitting him without breaking the hug ...

He giggled like a baby and hugged her tightly ...

manik's POV

I am gonna smash that person ...how dare he/she hurt nandu ...she is so hurt ...I won't spare the person ...god pls don't play this games with us ...I love her a lot and I can't live with out her ...she is the reason I am living ...pls don't snatch this reason ...she is really important more than any damn person ...and I won't spare the person who hurt her even if he/she is a member of fab5 ...

nandini's POV

HOW how will I tell him that the person is alya ...he won't believe me ...fab5 is important for him ...may be more than me ...he loves them and for them he can do anything ...what if he left me ...no I can't loose him ...pls aiyappa ...don't do this ...I love him ...pls don't snatch him from me ...

...NO ONE'S POV...

"Nandu chale "he asked ...
She broke the hug and said "hmmm but carry me ...I don't wanna walk "she pouted cutely ...

"Awww my baccha"he said and carried her in his arms with no efforts ...because his doll was lighter then air ...but still he like teasing her

"Ahhh. ...nandu u r so heavy "he said teasing her faking a pain ...

Nandini opened her mouth in a big 'O'..."what ...u wanna say I am fat "she asked angrily ...

"Yes...I mean no ...dekhne mein tho delicate si doll lagti ho...but u r heavy ahhh"he said teasing her

She made a angry face and said"itni heavy lag rahi ho tho mujhe neeche utaro ...put me down "

"OK ur wish is my command"he said and faked that he is gonna drop her down ...

"Manik no "she yelled and hugged him in that position ...

Manik laughed at his kiddish girlfriend and said "damn I love you my baby "

she smiled at his cuteness and kissed his cheeks ...manik blushed a little ...when cabir came there...

"Ohhh ohhh do pyaar karne vale jungle mein kho Gaye lalala"cabir started singing in his not so surila voice ...

"Oh shit"manan said together and manik puts nandini down carefully ...

"Kya chal kya raha h yeha par "cabir asked like a saasu maa who caught her bahu and beta romancing in a corner ...

"Kyu tujhe kya problem h ...humlog Kuch bhi kar rahe ho "manik said rolling his eyes ...

"Yeah right ...ab dost dost na raha "cabir said sarcastically

"Guys shhh ,ladna band Karo"nandini said

"Abe guys ki bacchi ...kidar gayab ho gai thi tu ...pagal h kya ..tum janti ho tumhare iss pyaare boyfriend ka kya haal ho gaya tha ...for the first time I saw him crying ...aage se aisa mast Karna warna I will slap u tightly ..."cabir said like a big brother scolding his baby sister ...

Nandini holded her ears and said "sorry"cutely ...

"Ummm chal maaf kiya"cabir said and patted her cheeks ...

Manik was smiling through out ...

"Ummm now let's go ...waha ek aur tufan humara wait kar raha h "cabir said

"Kya ..tufan "asked manan together again ...

'Made for each other ' cabir thought in his mind and said "madhubala ,"

"Navya uska kya"asked nandini ...

"Wohhh guys wohhh ...sorry"cabir said biting his tongue

"Kya kiya tumne cabir "asked manan together again ...realizing he did some thing very stupid ...

"Wo I told madhubala about u two,that u both are in love with each other"cabir said closing his eyes ...

"W-H-A-T??????"manan yelled together ...

"Par kyu "nandini asked thinking how she will handle navyas non stop question ...

"Vo usse tumhare iss boyfriend ka tensed face aur iska anger dekha jab tum gayab ho gai thi ...tho vo samaj gai and baad mein usne mujhe pucha tho meine bata diya"cabir said closing his eyes ...

"Oh no"nandini said and kept her head on his shoulder ...

"Wow cabir ...first time u did some thing good "manik said smirking ...

"Hai na"cabir said grinning wide ...nandini looked at them

"What ..?what's good in this"nandini asked punching both manik and cabir on their stomach ...

"Arre nandu kal kare so aaj kar "cabir said

"Aaj kare so ab"manik said side hugging nandini

She looked at them like they r some alien's ...

"Arre kabhi na kabhi pata chalna h na ...so why not now "cabir said ...

"But"nandini said ...

"No if's and but's ...just go and talk to her "manik said rubbing his fingers on her nose ...

"So cute ...par mujhe ye digest hai ho raha ... ..u too r so adorable ...dude u were not at all like this before you have changed ..."cabir said eyeing manik ...

"Hahaha,very funny " manik said ...

"Let's go to camp area "cabir said and manan nodded and walked with him till camp ...

They reached the camp location when ...they saw navya staring at manan with her mouth open as they were holding hand and walking while cuddling each other ...

"I am dead "nandini said as she saw navya eyeing her angrily ...

Manik just kiss her head and said "all the best baccha "

"All the best "cabir said in a scary way ...

Manik hit's him and said "nandu don't worry I am here only "

"She nodded and walked till navya ...
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PRECAP
Some mananbir+navya movements ...
Jealous manik but with a twist. ...
Truth and dare ...


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So guys ...I know it was short but next part will be big one ...pls give me suggestions or any scene you all wanna read in this ff ...comment big and hit like ...don't be a kanzoos ...

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Edited by sauju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
promo for chap 21

"ohhh miss madhubala ji ,do you have a problem with us being together "asked manik giving deadly glares to navya ...
Navya shakes her head in a no afraid of the monster manik

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"Manik have u lost it ...,tumhe pata h vo kon h " nandini said angrily ...

"Nai pata ...par the way u were hugging him ...it was like janam janam wala pyaar h dono mein "said manik angrily ...

"Oh god manik ...vo mera bhai h ...abhimanu murty "nandini said angrily ...

Maniks eyes were wide ..."oh ...I love u" he said ...
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Truth and dare movements ...


🥱 😉 😆
Edited by sauju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
awesome promo
cont soon
Edited by NAVYA64 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsumm update..😛 but small
too good..😊
superbb promo...eagerly waiting update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update
loved it
awsm promo
sounds interesting cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it when Manik said that he will not forgive the person who had hurt Nandini, even if that person is a member of the Fab 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update and promo both are awesome
bt plz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
cabir teasing manan was cute
awesome promo
continue soon

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