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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yams_ini

Awsum update
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hiii lovelies... here is the update for u all hope u all like it...hit like and do comment ...if any one love alya then sorry ...after this part she will be negetive ...soha ki jagha alya ...as no one wanted soha to come so alya uski kasar puri karegi ...hope u all like it...sorry alya lovers once again


part 17A


maniks POV...

We had completed more than half of the journey ...every one was busy with there phones ...some with novels...I could see cabir was eating dhruvs head ...I don't know what they are talking ...mukti was talking to alya and then my BABY ...she fell asleep on my shoulder ...I know whole night she mustn't have slept ...she must be taking tension about camp ...

I knew if I moved a little she is gonna wake up . ...I was sitting in same position from 3 hrs ...my neck was hurting. ...but I dont want to wake my sleeping beauty ...so I didn't moved into an comfortable position ...

We reached our destination ...after one more hour ...everyone started go get down the bus...

Navya ,harshad and shahid saw us like this ...

"Nandu ...nandu "said navya and waked her up ...I gave a long glare to navya ...

"Nandini uto hum pohuch gai h "said harshad ...he gave me a look ...
I just gave him my 'do hell with ur self 'look ...I stood up as nandini sat straight and gave awkward look to me ..I just got up and got my bags Down ...gave a push to harshad and went out ...I didn't wanted them to get any idea about us ...

end of maniks POV

As soon as manik went out harshad and shahid pulled nandinis bags down ...
"Tum uss manik ke saat kya kar rahi thi"asked harshad smirking ...

"Haa...tum uske shoulder pe soyi thi"said shahid
"Arre he came and sat beside me...meine Kuch nai kiya...and mujhe pata hi nai chala ki kab I slept"nandini said worried

"Don't get worked out its OK ...let's go"harshad said keeping hand on her shoulder and they all went down...they came out of bus and stood in front of fab5...navya saw manik staring at nandini ...and she got worried

"Uss rakshas se na dur hi raho"said navya caring for nandini ...

"Navya...Let it be baby "said harshad side hugging her nandini and shahid just smiled ...navya went to her LA LA LA land...and two souls felt fire burning in them...mukti and cabir ...cabir had no idea what was happening to him ...wen he saw navya and harshad together ...his blood boils ...alya was looking at manik...who was just looking at nandini lovingly ...and nandini gave him a smile which was more like a blush ...alya was pissed...
"I need to find out what's going on "she thought...

And poor soul dhruv he didn't knew what's going around him. ...for him it was like 'GOLMAAL HAI ,BHAI SAB GOLMAAL HAI"[:p]...

And about the camp location ...it was greenery everywhere ...it looked like they are in middle of forest there one side was covered with jungle and one there left there was a 'church'...and and ranch ..horses were tide near ranch ...overall it was an nice location...the best part was the 'CHURCH'...and after jungle there was a moutain Clift too...

Nandini fell in love with the place and manik once he saw the church ...his mind gave him a kurafati plan of spending some time with his baby angel ...

"Guys...so we reached our camp site ...guys start putting ur tents ...and yeah two people in one tent OK"raghav sir said ...

"Yes sir ..."everyone said ...

So it was decided navya and nandini in one tent ...harshad -shahid in one...manik -cabir in one ...mukti. -alya in one and dhruv was with a random guy...because he didn't had any option...

Boys were helping there group ke girls...nandini and manik were just giving looks to each other which didn't go unnoticed by alya...she was jealous ...she wanted to kill nandini there itself ...but still she controlled her anger ...

Then raghav instructed girls to cook something...and all girls were like 'cook and me no way' except nandini and navya ...but mukti said let's make Maggie and no one disagreed ...they decided to make Maggie ...as it was the last option ...

After they all ate their Maggie ...raghav sir came ...
"Guy its 7 so go to sleep right now ...kal subha tum Sab ko jaldi utna h ...4 at morning ...so go to sleep kal se ur task and all will start so sleep well good night"raghav sir said ...

"Yes sir"everyone said half hearted ...except manik as he will get time to spend with his angel... Everyone went to sleep except navya who wanted to take selfie with nandini and alya who was looking for dhruv and of course manik and cabir

Manik was standing near his tent and cabir was standing with him...

"Arre yaar...cabir help me na...I need to spend some time with her ...pls"said manik
"Haa haa...plan kya h vo bol "said cabir

"Sun ...I wanna take her to church ...akele ...lekin ye navya ki bacchi usse akela chod hi nai rahi h"manik said pouting pointing at nandini and navya who were clicking selfie together ...

"Accha ...tho navya ko mein sambhalta hu ...ab thik h"said cabir excited thinking about navya ...manik eyed him
"Aaj kal tujhe navya pe zyada pyaar nai aa raha"asked manik with a teasing tone

"Abe tujhe nandini ke saat time spend Karna h na"asked cabir and at the correct time alya was passing and she heard cabir ...she hided behind the tent and listened to there talks...

"Haa "said manik smiling
"Tho Chup kar ...varna I will not help u"cabir said blackmailing manik

"Arre gussa mat ho yaar. ...OK I won't ask u any thing ...now pls help me "said manik pleading

"Arre wha nandini ne tujhe sach mein sudar diya ,warna u and pleading ...no chance...anyway I will handle this madhbala "cabir said and went near navya and nandini ...manik stood near his tent and just hoped for best and alya she was just hiding behind the tent and looking at all this with tears in her eyes...

"Madhubala ji ..."said cabir as he reached near navni

"Hii cabir"nandini said smiling
"Hii nandini"he replied smiling ...
"Kya kar rahe ho tum yeha"asked navya angrily

"Actually madhula ji I need to talk to u..."cabir said
"Kya baat karni h bolo"asked navya ...
"Yeha nai ...mere saat chalo ...nandini u don't mind na ..."he asked nandini ...
"No..take her "nandini said ...and signaled navya to go ...navya agreed to nandini.navya went with him ...
Cabir showed a thumps up to manik ...and manik too winked at him...he came near nandini and took her hand and dragged her to church without listening to nandini and alya followed them. ...

nandinis POV

"Manik stop ...manik where are u taking me manik...listen someone will see us ...manik"I said as manik dragged me with him...
"Shhh yaar Chup chap chalo"said manik and dragged me with him ...

Oh so he is taking me to the church ...we went inside and I was just looking at church with aww...it was so beautiful ...it was such a peace full place ..."beautiful"I thought in my mind
"Not more than u"he said ...how come he know what I am thinking

I felt some ones presence behind us ...
"Manik ...mujhe laga ki peeche koi h"I said
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"Koi nai h ...baby ..everyone is in there tents "he said and hugged me from behind digging his face in my neck ...I smiled at his cuteness

"Tum mujhe yeha kyu laye"i asked turning and keeping my hands around his neck ...
"I just needed some alone time with u ..."he said

"Accha ..."i asked
"Haa"he said and rubbed his nose with mine

He took my hand in his and we stood infront of Jesus Christ ...I was looking at candles and of course Jesus Christ ...i joined my hands ...I felt his stare ... I gave him a 'pray to jesus'look...he nodded like an obedient baccha ...and did it ...I closed my eyes ...

"God pls hum dono ko hamesa saat rakhna...give all happiness to amms ,chacha chachi ,rishab and cabir navya dhruv and my manik .."I prayed in my mind and looked at manik ...he was still standing closing his eyes joining his hand ...I just admired him ...

He opened his eyes and looked at me ...he then gave me a candle
"Yeha lo ...light this candle ..."he said
"Manik dono saat mein kare "I asked
He looked at me and gave me his rare smile only reserved for me and then nodded in a yes ...

We lighted the candle together ...
"Manik ...mujhe ek promise karoge"I asked

"Hmmm bolo"he said and took me near bench and made me sit ...and sat down near my knees facing me ...

"Manik ...kya hum saal mein ek bar yeha aakar ...yeha candle jala sakte h "I asked hoping he say yes
He giggled and said"I thought ki tum mujhse chand tare mang rahi ho ...and ur asking this ...ofcourse my baby .we will come here every year and light a candle together ..."

"Sacchi "I asked with my wide eyes ...
"Mucchi "he said

How adorable he is ...I kissed his forehead lightly ...
"Nandu ek important kam Karna tho bhul hi gai "he said stood up and took me near Jesus Christ...

"Kya"I asked confused

"One second "he said and cleared his throat ...
"Ms nandini murty do u accept manik malhotra as your husband"he said like a father or a priest ...

"What"I asked shocked

"Arre say I do"he said cutely

"I do"I said still confused what is he upto...

"Mr manik malhotra are u ready to accept nandini murty as ur wife"he asked himself and he himself said 'I do'

I was just looking at him like he is a ghost ...he sat on his knees and took my hand in his ...

"Manik kya kar rahe ho"I asked confused about what is he upto

"Shhh,can't u see I am marrying u "he said cutely

I just looked at him with disbelief ...he took my hand in his and removed the artificial ring I was wearing ...arre that one which I teased him about ki ek handsome ladke ne di h...and then he took a ring out of his pocket ...it was so pretty it was a platinum gold with an small diamond on it ...I looked at him with awe as he slipped it in my finger

He stood up and said
"Nandini ...the right of making u wear a ring is of only mine ..."
He moved close to me and kissed my forehead

I had tears in my eyes ...
"Arre why are u crying "he asked cupping my face

"Manik this was not needed ...why do u spend money on m..."before I could complete he kept his finger on my lips
"Shhh...ur are mine ...and spending money on people u can never let go out of ur life is nothing big for me...u know u r the most important person In my life ...and never ever in my life I can let u go away from me ...you r my star who glow for me who know how to make me smile i can never live with out u ...i cant even breath for one secend with out u so promise me ...that tum mujhe chodke kabhi nai jaaogi"he said
"I promise ,I will never leave u"I said smiling in tears...I hugged him tightly but his grip was more tight ...he can never let me go ...here is he my prince charming ...who cared for me ...and never let me go ...we broke our hug ...I looked at him and he smirked

"And now the best part of Christian marriage "he said and moved towards my lips ...

"Kya kar rahe ho"I said holding my hand in front of my lips
"Kiss...we are married na in christian style and christian marriage mein karte h kiss Sab ke samne ...yeha tho koi hai bhi nai ...tho problem kya h"he said cutely ..
"Manik we both are not Christians ...I am south Indian and u r pure Punjabi "I said

"Tho we married just now na..and with out kiss its not complete ..."he said pulling me close and tried to kiss me but I stopped him

"Accha OK ...hum na humari ye shadi phir kabhi complete karenge ab chalo ...navya must be worried na "I said trying to push him out ...but he was much more stronger then me

"Nandini ek kiss...pls"he said cutely

"No no no baad mein abhi chalo pls"I said and dragged him out of church with me ...

end of nandinis POV...

As soon as nandini dragged manik out alya hided behind a door ...as soon as manan went to camp area ...alya came out from behind the door

Her eyes were blood red ...
"How could u manik..."she said and burst out crying ...she remembered about manan
"Nandini I won't spare u ...I will make sure that u and manik get separate ...I will make ur life hell..."she said
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hope u all liked it ...pls hit like and comment ...warna no update ...and yeah in story nandini is 18

Bye lovelies will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow lovely update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice yaar
Manan got married!

Woh bhi Christian style mein

Loved it

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz dont separate manan...dont turn alya negative...
it will ruin everything...

do updatye soon,..,..,.,...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update... Continue soon. Thanks for the pm

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