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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika279

wow nice update cont. soon

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Beautiful cute romantic story
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Beautiful cute romantic story

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Originally posted by: Manan_Ananya

amazing update

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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute lil fyt so much of love care for each other..
Yu penned it more beautiful..
Waitin fo camp scenes
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Originally posted by: divvi22

Cute lil fyt so much of love care for each other..
Yu penned it more beautiful..
Waitin fo camp scenes

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Posted: 10 years ago
aww manik back to his monster mansion
loved it
maink the monkey on the tree
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please do continue
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aww manik back to his monster mansion
loved it
maink the monkey on the tree
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please do continue
bye sumi

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Posted: 10 years ago
hii guys ...heres the update for u all...hope u all like it ...hit like and do comment...


part 15 A

...maniks POV...
I went inside my mansion...I know niyonika will be there sitting with a wine glass in her hand ..waiting for me to come and eat my head with her taunting ...oh god... past two days I was with nandini at her home away from this niyonika...I was in her arms ...near her ...her tight hug gave me peace ...the peace I was craving for...the love I was craving for...ufff ye chacha chachi 2-3 months baad nai aa sakta the ...

Anyway where was I ...yeah as I said there was my so called mom sitting on sofa with wine glass in her hand ...I ignored her and moved near stairs but ...

"Manik where the hell were u for two days ...actually I should say night...kaka told me that do din se tum raat ko ghar nai aate ...u come only in morning and then leave for college and don't come back till next morning...kaha jaate ho tum...let me guess tum apne in stupid friends ke saat tho nai the..."she asked in her taunting voice...

"Ohhh so Mrs niyonika malhotra was worried for her son...common yaar niyonika don't act like a mother ...this motherly things doesn't suit u...and u should not be concerned ki where I was and with whom...OK..so stop acting ...dad is also not here so u don't need to treat me in such a motherly manner ...OK"I said in my careless tone..

"Manik...don't talk to me like that...I am ur mother "she said angrily

"Unfortunately"I said "anyway have a good ni...no no have a bad night with bad dreams OK.."I added and went upstairs ...leaving niyonika fuming ...I don't care anyway ...

I changed into a black vest and white pants ...and sat on my bed ...my mood right now ...oh god I am so irritated ...should I call nandini ...no manik she must be with chacha chachi and rishab no..manik just try to sleep...I kept my phone and laid on bed trying to sleep
...end of manik POV...
...nandinis POV...
I was sitting on chacha chachis bed with chacha chachi and rishab...we were unpacking the bags...

"Chachi engagement kaisi thi"I asked excited ...actually I am always excited...

"Arre bohat accha gaya Sab Kuch...bas Teri kami thi vaha...amms ne bhi bohat miss kiya tujhe"she said smiling ...

"Arre sanno ji... Agar nandu vaha aati tho college kon jaata..."chacha said
"Haa vo tho h"chachi said and gave me a pack"ye tere liye h "

"Mere liye "I took it and opened the pack to see a black gown it had net design on shoulder side with straps and a silver shinny belt near waist (just like manan first date wala gown ...difference is it was white and this one is black)

"Aww this is so pretty "I said and hugged her"thank u chachi...I will where it on some special occasion"

"Special occasion ...tho nandu isse na bohat sambhal ke rakna hmm"she said
"Kyu?"I asked

"Arre tum teenagers ke liye wohi special occasion hota h jub tum pehli bar date pe jate ho kisi handsome sonne munde ke saat"she said in a low voice smiling naughtily

"Chachi Kuch bhi na"I said avoiding her naughty looks...

"Arre sonne munde se yaad aaya ...nandu ye manik ko de Dena "she said handling me a box ...I opened it to see a black shirt ...

"Ye manik ke liye h...bohat accha hai"I said running my fingers around it...

"Accha tho hoga hi na..choice kiski h...aur dekh manik ke shirt bhi black aur tera gown bhi black ek dam perfect tum dono ki Jodi ki tarah "she said in low voice in one go...

"WHAT?"I asked with my eyes wide open...is she having a doubt on me and manik

"Kuch nai...bas tu kal usse ye de Dena "she said

"Aap hi de do na"I said embarrassed with her looks
"Nai...usse na mujhse zyada tere haato se ye lene mein accha lagega"she said winking at me ...

Aiyyo...aiyappa she really have a doubt on us shit,

"Hmm"I said and went near cacha and rishab who were busy with their perfume bottles...

Then we finished unpacking and we had our dinner and then we went to our respective bedroom ...

I was about to call manik but there's a saying na ki when u talk about the devil he appears ...here he was... my phone was ringing displaying his name "Manik:)"
I picked the phone
"Hii"I said in an exciting tone I told u all na I am always excited

"Hii"he replied dully...
"Kya hua are u OK..u r fine na"I asked him worried
"...honestly I am not ...ghar mein aate aate niyonika ...any way leave it ...tum kya kar rahi ho...how are chacha chachi rishab "he asked

"They are fine ...but u know what manik ...I think chachi have a doubt on us being together"I said trying to divert his mind from niyonika ma'am

"What?"he yelled and then said"wow"
"Wow ismein wow kya h"I asked
"Arre its good na ...I will get more special treatment... And u know na chachi is really fond of me so its good actually its amazing"he said excited ..
"Haa tumhe special treatment milegi par ...mujhe mujhe unki teasing sehni padegi...actually she was teasing me with ur name indirectly"I said complaining with a pout ...

"Accha tab tho tumhe abhi se aadat dal leni cahiye...and don't worry dhere dhere adat ho jaayegi ..."he said teasing me...thank god his mind got diverted from niyonika ma'am...

"Any way tum so jao ...OK good night "I said

"Hmm. OK ...waise bhi tumhne Jo news di h na chachi wali ...uskebaab I will have a good sleep...any way good night ,...mumhhh"he said and kissed me through phone

"Goodnight"I said blushing
"Arre sirf good night ...my kiss..,I gave u a kiss na...then u should also give it"he said in his cute childish tone
"Manik so jao...and I will give u your kiss tomorrow face to face OK"I said
"A are wah...ye tho aur bhi accha h...i n that case I will wait till tomorrow.. Good night"he said
"Good night"I replied...we hung up the call and sleep...

Morning I got up and took shower ...got ready and tied my hair in single plait ...I took my bag and went down to get a another heart attack 'manik'

He was sitting on dinning table with rishab on his right ...cacha chachi in front...

"Tum yeha kya kar rahe ho"I yelled at him coming near him...
"Nandu...bechara tujhe pick karne aaya h aur tu uss bechare pe chilla rahi h"she said glaring at me...
"Arre chachi...ye tho humesha mujhpe chillati rehti h"manik said
And chachi again gave me a'very bad 'look...I sat beside manik on his left ...chachi passed me the sandwiches and I saw rishab telling manik in sign language that I yell at him too...

To which manik said in low voice"yeah...she is a mini monster..."they laughed and hi-fived

I opened my mouth in a o shape ...we were eating breakfast when manik said"chachi nandini ne apko camp ke bare mein bataya"
"Nai...konsa camp nandu"chachi asked
Oh shit I forgot to inform them...

"Arre chachi college mein na camp hai 4 dino ke liye"manik said

"Accha ye tho bohat accha baat h...nandu tu haa rahi h na"cacha asked
"Ha..."I said
"Arre kaha cacha ji nandini ne mana kar diya tho ...phir meine isse mannaya aane ke liye"he said looking at me

"Arre nandu its very bad ...u should be active with this things too...sirf padhai aur music mein hi accha hona kafi nai h"cacha said ...
I looked at manik angrily and he gave me his famous smirk ...

"Accha camp kab h"chachi asked

"Kal hi h chachi"he said

"Accha tho nandu ...tujhe mein help kar dungi packing mein"chachi said

"OK chachi "I said
...we ate our breakfast... And were about to go when chachi called me and said "nandu manik ko vo de de na"
"Arre h"I said I went upstair and took the box came down and gave it to him
He opened it and said "wow this one is so good...thanks chachi ,...ur choice is just awesome"he said looking at shirt happily ...

"Arre tujhe kaise pata ki ye meri choice h"chachi asked
"Aapki choice humesha acchi hi hoti h"he said pointing at cacha and they both blushed...
"Are mera sonna munda"chachi said pulling his cheeks

We went out and sat inside the car ...
Edited by sauju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeah... i m the first one to comment... its awesome... but i m waiting for camp.. and their sweet moments... 😉

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