manans new journey ff(part 11....25/3/15)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 11:: nandini calls ams...ams ka phone rings but she doesnt pick up so she calls chachi and tells chachi...chachi tells her ok take care of ur friend...usko kaadha banake milana...nandini asks chachi whr is ams chachi says ams is doin riyaaz...so nandini heaves a sigh of relief and says ok chachi rakhti hoon n puts down phone...Nandini is relieved after making the call...she says thank you cabir...manik luks at nandini n says u luk relaxed...she says yes i spoke to chachi...manik says ohhh good den now can we start breakfast nandini?? Nandini says i thot you already started...manik says how can i eat wen ur not eating...ab tension khatam hui toh lets start...cabir smirks n clears his throat and says nandini tumne manik ko kya kar diya hai...from the cool i dont give a damn attitude to a joru ka ghulam...waah waah, waah waah...manik says shut up and asks nandini can we go now?? Nandini nods n cabir manik n nandini start breakfast...mukti asks so guys wats the plan for today...aliya says lets go for a swim first and then hiking and ders a sunset point too a lil far from here lets go der...dhruv says aliya relax dont get so excited also...mukti says shut up dhruv tu hai hi boring sa...lets do sometin happening guys i mean after so long we are chilling together...manik agrees and says chalo lets follow aliyas plan wat say guys?? All agree n even nandini smiles... Mukti says ok guys den im goin to change into my swimsuit ill see you guys poolside in sumtime...all say ok n go to their rooms to change...manik follows nandini into her room...nandini says manik wat r u doin go change ur frnds must b waiting fr u poolside...manik says ok ill change even u change...nandini says ok...manik goes to his room to get his swimming trunks on...after he changes he comes bck to nandinis room n knocks on the door and says nandini...she doesnt open the door and shouts from in..kya hua manik...he replies saying wat do u mean by kya hua...hurry up m waitin since so long..nandini says manik tum jao main nai aa rhi...manik says wat?? Nandini says haan manik tum jao...manik says listen nandini jus open the door..nandini says no manik im not gonna open...Manik says nandini arrey but why...nandini says jao manik...manik gets angry and says ok...manik goes to the reception and says im sorry i left my phone in my friends room and shes not here rite now so can i get a spare key so that i can jus go and get it...the receptionist says sorry sir we dont keep spare keys...manik says ohh...then he says umm can you give me the keys for the interconnecting door between the my and my frnds room...receptionist hesitates...he says i know ull r not supposed to open the interconnecting door but plss im expecting an urgent call...she gives him the key he says thank u and goes to his room and with the key opens the interconnecting door and goes into nandinis room...manik sees nandini sleeping on bed and she has covered her face with the blanket...he goes and pulls the blanket from her face and says surprise...nandini gets scared and screams...manik lifts her and starts walkin towards door...nandini says manik tum andar kaise aaye?? Manik replied woh kya hai nas nandini i promised the receptionist a date and she gave me the key...smart naa...nandini says very funny manik put me down...he says no first you tell me why were you not wanting to come...she says put me down he says ok n puts her dwn...she says mr manik malhotra if u have forgotten i dont know how to swim and i dont like all these pool parties and all...and also there will b so many other people pool side so im not comfortable...manik says buss itni si baat...ok baba dont come in pool but atleast come n sit der...n about other people let me tell u der r 2 pools here 1 is for every1 and other is for private parties so itll only b us no1 else...ab toh maan jao nandini otherwise ill have to lift you and take you...and ek sacch baat bolu...ur not that light toh uthake itna chalne mein problem hogi...nandini says manik!! Manik laughs...Manik n nandini reach poolside where fab4 are already swimmin...cabir asks nandini y havent u changed...nandini says cabir i cant swim u guys njoy ill sit here and watch ull...cabir says its ok nandini manik is der naa hell teach you how to swim hai naa manik?? Manik gives him a stern luk n cabir smirks...fab5 are in the water njoying...manik purposely dives in the pool in such a way that all water splashes on nandini...nandini says manik!! Cabir laughs...manik is continuously lukin at nandini n nandini is blushing...aliya says ok guys enough of swimmin now lets all go get ready n go trekking...fab4 agree and get out of the pool wen manik says not so soon guys lets go after lunch i wanna swim for sum more time...all say ok and leave...manik is swimmin n nandini is sitting there...while manik is still in the pool he tells nandini to pass the towel...she takes the towel and goes towards him n tells manik here and puts out her hand...manik pulls her hand and splash.. shes in the pool...manik holds nandini and says dont worry i wont let nytin happen to u... Nandini hugs manik and says i know i trust you...manik hugs her back...he kisses nandinis forehead and says im so thankful that i got you in my life...nandini says is it?? Manik is slowly moving his hands up her arm n holds her face...he kisses her cheeks then eyes then neck and he goes to kiss her wen she says manik since yesterday arent we going a bit too fast... manik says fast?? Gets angry and leaves her...she loses bal and goes underwater wen manik holds her back and says pakdu toh we r going fast naa pakdu toh tum seedhe khadi nai reh sakti ho... karu toh kya karu...nandini says sorry manik n kisses his cheek...manik pulls nandini closer and says i wanna show you sumtin...but first tell me do u trust me?? Nandini says yes manik...after that manik tells nandini take a deep breathe wen i tell u to and dont leave it till i tell you...nandini says manik wat are you doin...manik says nandini jus now u said u trust me and within 2 mins ur doubting me...nandini says ok baba sorry...i trust you...manik says good and says now hold your breathe...she breathes in and holds her breathe...manik says dont leave ur breathe till i say and goes under water and pulls nandu too under water...he holds her hand and makes her wear another bracelet with love written on it...nandini is speechless...she gets emotional and hugs manik underwater, kisses him on his shoulder then neck and then signals with her actions and says i love you...and gets shy and comes back above the water level...After nandini even manik comes back above the water level...nandini sees manik and starts blushing...manik asks nandini wat did u do down there can you do it again...nandini blushes more and nods her head and turns away her face...manik luks at her and smiles and raises her chin with his hand and says acha agar karna nai hai toh bolo toh sahi kiya kya tha...she blushes and nods again... (to b cntd...)

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Awesome update...
Lovely Manan...
Please Continue soon...please..!!
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What a sweet update... loving the MANAN love...
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Wow.. Beautiful update yar
Full on manan.. Loved it
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Wowww that was an awsum update
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