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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: kristii

is nandu pari..?

omg ..getting really impatient ..
plz cont soon

yes manik calls nandu pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys
here are some details for the ff
nandini pov of u will be written in pink and manik pov will be written in red and flash back in blue


                              Chapter 1

    I opened my eyes and i found Alia standing in front of me making weird face

Nandini - what ??
alia - its your first day of college and u r late u r so irresponsible
nandini - sorry acha tum aisa karo tum college chali jao and i will meet u at college
alia - sure
nandini - sure
alia - ok i am going

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I and alia are child hood friens . i was staying with her because my parents and my brother died in a road accident and alia was also an orphan so she asked me to stay with her

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                    SPACE


i was late for my college and running to find alia and sudenly bumped into some one . he was a tall man with a muscular chest and with brown eyes

boy - dikta nahi hai kya ??
nandini- sorry i was in a rush i am realy sorry
boy - agar mujhe kam nahi hota na toh tumhe ko nahi bacha skta
nandini - itna kyu gussa ho rahhe ho sorry bola na meine
boy - toh tumhari sorry ka aachar dalu
nandini - whatever

and he lft fom their and i was in my own thaughts - ayappa yeh kya ho raha hai mere sath ek toh mera pehla din hai uppar se alia bhi nahi mil rahi hai aur ab ye ladka uff
my thaughts were didturbed by alia

alia - tum yaha kya kar rahi ho min tum ko kab se dundh rahi hun
nandini - sorry abhi na kisi ladke se takra gayi thi
alia - ok chalo ab mein tumhe apne friends se milati hun

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she took me in a room where 4 persons where there

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alia - hi guys
all of them in unison - hi
alia - meet my friend nandini
nandini - hi
alia - nands this is cabir , mukti ,dhruv and manik
manik - not you again
alia - manik tum nandini ko jante ho
nandini - ha abhi abhi toh mein is se hi takra gayi thi
manik - whatever

and manik left from there
nandini (to herself) - yeh ladka kitna rude hai iss ladke se koi dosti kese kar sakta hai , dosti kya koi is se pyaar bhi nahi kar sakta

mukti - nandini tum iss ko chodo yeh ladka aia hi hai
cabir - ha tum is ki baaton ka bura man mannana
nandini - ok

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that day went in seeing the college and chit chatting with fab five (except manik)
oh sorry meine btaya hi nahi hi nahi ki fab five kaun hai

FAB FIVE
the best music band of college
Alia - keyboard
mukti - guitarist
dhruv - guitarist
cabir- drummer
manik - lead singer

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this is chapter one i hope u like it . i know ajj manan ladh rahe the but pakka promise ki agle update mein kuch acha hoga and now guess what will happen and next time will uploat a long chapter




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Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
nice start... update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice...Manik n Nandini ladhenge nai tho manan kaisi honge...i like ther cute fights... continue soon
Edited by SKTKsara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awsm start
loved it
cont very soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
It's ok.. Ladne se pyar bdta h.
Awesome update..
Edited by manan58 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
awesome chapter...loved it...so aliya and nandu r friends...hmmm...
pls continue soon dear...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
YAYIE U UPDATED..
IT WAS A AWESOME BLOSSOM.
CONT SOON..
CAN'T WAIT HOW THEIR LUV STORY WILL PROGRESS..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
its nice
continue soon
yaar waitin for manan luv story to kickstart
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
thanks everyone for your likes and comments so i am here with the next part

chapter 2

next day

Alia and nandini entered the college . nandini was wearing a blue top and black jeans with earings and a bracelet . she was looking like a fairy . and she was watched by one pair of eyes

manik - pari

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fab five (mumbai)
manik- yaar mujhe toh pta bhi nahi chala ki meine kab use pari bola but saale is cabir ne sun liya
cabir - yaar yeh toh mera farz tha tumhara cupid joh thera itna sunnana toh banta tha
mukti- saale cabir tujhe tab se pta tha aur tune hame kuch bhi nahi bataya
cabir- sorry yaar mein kya karta isne btane se mana kiya tha

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cabir - manik kal toh itna jagadh raha tha us se aur ajj use pari bol raha hai wah kya baat hai
manik - shut up cabir aur kisiko bola na toh dekhna

nandini and alia enterd the scenerio. nandini saw manik and just said one word

nandini - monster
(and luckily no one heard it)
alia- hi guys tum dono itni jaldi
cabir- hi alia . aur hum jaldi nahi aa sakte kya tum ladkiyon ne hi jaldi aane ka thekha le rakha hai
alia- maine aisa kab bola main toh sirf puch rahi hun
cabir - btw nandini tum kaisi ho aur tume hamara college kaisa laga
nandini - mein thikh hun aur tumhara college bhi acha hai bas kuch log bahut rude hai
(she was looking at manik while saying this)

mukti and dhruv enterd the jam roon

mukti - hi guys kya baat ho rahi hai
cabir - hi mukti kuch nahi hum baas nandini se puch rahe the ki use hamara college kaisa laga
mukti-woh toh thikh hai but cabir ab yeh college nandini ka bhi toh hai haina nandini
nandini - right
cabir - point to be noted
manik - ab yeh sab chodo aur class mein chalo warna woh khadus prof btaega ki yeh college kiska hai
all said in unison- ha chalo chalte hai

in classroom

prof-good morning students.students ajj ki class sirf ek ghante ki hogi phir app log apne ghar jaa sakte hai kyuki mumbai mein ek politician aa rahe hai jis ki wajah se sare school and college bandh karwa diye gaye hai

all-ok sir

alia-wow ajj toh party karte hai whats say guys
mukti-ha good idea toh phir ajj mere ghar mein party ok
cabir-good idea
dhruv-nice acha nandini tum aaogi
nandini- nno dhruv i am not fond of parties so u guys carry on
manik-acha hai na dhruv kuch unwanted logon ko dekhgna nahi padega
cabir - ok nandini as u wish

class gets over and everyone leaves

nandini-alia tum mukti ke ghar jaa rahi ho toh mujhe ghar ki keys dedo i will leave now aur tum khana ka kar aaogi ya mein bna ke rakh du
alia-ok take the keys aur tumhe khana banane ki koi jarurat nahi hai i will eat at mukti home
nandini-ok chalo bye
alia- bye

nandini was walking in the cooridor and finding some stuff in her bag.from other side manik was coming towards her but did not notice her as he was busy in his phone . suddenly they both bumped i each other.

manik- tum phirse.tumhe aur koi nahi milta kya takrane ke liye jab dekho mere se hi takrati rehti ho .

nandini - tumhe dikta nahi hai kya .galti yumhari hai aur bol mujhe rahe ho khudh toh phone pe lage rehte ho aur mujhe bol rahe ho mujhe koi aur nahi milta

manik-us din bola tha na tumhe ki agar phir se mere se takrai toh tumhare liye acha nahi hoga .ajj tumhe muj se koi nahi bach sakta

nandini- kya kar loge tum .main tum se nahi darti mr monster manik

manik-toh darna chahiye and yeh i am a monster and i am man not to be triffled with

and he dragged her in the store room switch off the lights and locked the room from outside

manik-ab pta chalega tumhe ki manik malhotra kaun hai.ab raho yahi ajj ke liye kyuki college toh bandh hai aur hai dont worry koi tumhe bacha nahi sakta aur na hi tum kisi ko phone kar sakti ho kyu ki tumhare phone toh mere pass hai




thats for now and if u think ke manan ki gadhi kab aage badhegi toh let me tell u ki agle update mein inki gadhi todhi si patri par aa jayegi

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