Manan ss : a lifetime with you ( completed )

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shravya

@shravya.kr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Awww what a wonderful piece of writing...I love every line of the ff...written it beautifully 👏 loved loved the last two parts! U have potrayed maniks emotions so well.

Thoughly enjoying it

Absolutely wonderful. ..I seriously appreciate for giving us two parts. ..without breaking the talk. ...thank u so much...can't wait for manan romance! !

Awesome yar

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chinni557

@chinni557

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

That was an awesome ss., You depicted every emotion beautifully., 👏👏👏

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Two chapters 😃 you love to spoil us 😃

Thank you 🤗

Finally the most awaited chapters have come, manik and nandini can never be happy without each other

Both were apart

Both were suffering a lot

Now they will get back togehter and both will be happy

This nyo 😡, i am not a violent person but i really would like to hurt her, i want her to feel the pain which manan went through

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Tanvi

@manan58

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Oh gosh.. 2 chpters..
Superb awesome
Hw do I express in words..
Sheer bliss
Waitin fr nxt
It ws wonderful.. As beautiful as it cud b

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Sony

@Sony.K

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

HEy both part's are too good. Like it.

Keep writing.

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Ladyeirin

@Ladyeirin

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

That was a wowser again!!! How do you do it?? And then this line -
'For even a grain more couldn't go down the
pharynx, before their larynxes spoke'- Lol! Loved it. Incredible!!
I hope Shreyas will make the mushy part more interesting!!
Thank you for writing this mast epic.

Edited by Ladyeirin - 10 years ago

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

ONE WORD 4 THIS ITS AWESOME U BEAUTIFULLY DESCRIBED IT.EACH WORD DESCRIBED THE EMOTIONS OF MANIK ND NANDINI VERY WELL U R AWESOME WRITER.U BEAUTIFULLY PENNED IT.HATTS OF TO U .PLZZZ CONTINUE SOON ND THANKS 4 THE PM