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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

girl i read ur post

and ur amazing at analysis
u can be a amazing persusive wirter
and u have nice vocb.

Awww babe this was just so so so sweet! Means so much <3 Thankyou loads for such a heartfelt comment... feel truly blessed! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

I loved your entire response Pressha. You have analyzed the Pandit really well..he is such a smart player and he was prepared. Such a sick man. No wonder him and Nyionka get along so well.

@bold, your last line is so damn bang on. This beating, was hardly a beating. Like a trailer of what Manik Maltorta is capable of. When his loved ones are at stake, he can and will become a monster, a lion who isn't afraid to protect his love.

i enjoyed your take on theepisodeso i thought i would comment and let you know. I am actually quite tempted to let my thoughts loose here too but my brain is half fried, it won't be very coherent..lol

- Reya <3




Awww thank you Reya 😳 🤗
You know watching last weeks episodes back, you see the glimpse of Nandini's fears kicking in. I think with the merger episodes and the campaign thing it's made everything all confusing. But it's all there, the transitions been happening slowly which is why it's hard to pick up on it!

Exactly, it was a small trailer. Pandit has got off lightly this time but if the stakes are higher then I think we'll all be witnessing the worst side to Manik yet!
You should, let it all out. I did, I've been waiting for this so I can finally let my thoughts out on the whole situation. I'm a massive fan your writing too ok. So I bet anything you write will be beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle10


Awww Preesha!!! This response was one of my favourite of yours! You just tied every action, every emotion so well :)

I'm on my phone so can't highlight the bits I loved in specific but I'll mention them here. Manik was indeed superb today because there was a different sort of passion in his eyes today. Hidden in his wrath for the devil who so disgustingly is snatching away the freedom of his girl. I loved how you described his fear, the pain, the need to protect her all the emotions packed on his furious face. And then there's his nandu... So desperate for this fusion concert to remain uncancelled because she can't bear this loneliness anymore. She is all set to sacrifice her freedom, bear every feel of unease just so she can have him back in her life. *sigh* my heart aches for them really because both aren't wrong, all the odds are against them but that's not going to stop them. They are so close and they've tasted seperation for way too long. It's enough now... They'll both go to any extent to have each other back in their lives again.

That hug at the end... God so much pain. She grabbed him with all the fear that is overflowing on her heart. Fear that he's going to hurt himself in the process of protecting her. Fear that if they don't follow these unreasonable demands, they'll lose their chance of forever togetherness. And he... He's still in shock. He could've lost her today, but tomorrow the stakes are even higher. He's been asked to stay away from her tomorrow and he's beyond terrified that what of he isn't able to save her again. He's scared that in this battle of fighting for their tomorrow, he may lose his presence.

That last line of yours... Bang on! I pandit thinks this is the worst of Manik... He's wrong. No promise, no boundary, no lock will be enough to keep him away from saving her this time. And if anyone tries to come in his way... Mind you he won't stop. Dhruv, nyonika... They all have called for this monsterous side of his to surface.

Lovely post as usual my sweets.

Twinkle <3



Thank youuu 😳 such a huge compliment especially from you! 😳

You know he's just as overwhelmed with these emotions too. He loves this girl more then he knows which is why he finds it hard to justify his actions.

I don't like the fact that people are saying that Nandini needs to wake up and see what pandit's doing etc because like I mentioned in my response to Reya if you look closely and re watch last weeks episodes you see that fear already creeping in. You see the uneasiness around her when pandit's name is mentioned or when he's around her. She looks for the distractions so she doesn't have to face what's going on. She was so overwhelmed with emotions last week which was why her behavior was off. It's effecting her more then she's letting on. The change is there, its just happening slowly.
Manik is her biggest strength at the minute, it's the only thing that's keeping her going. Her smile is her shield, the moment her smile disappears is the moment her mask drops.

Manik's anger was nothing compared to what it can be. Pandit has got off lightly this time. What extent Manik can go to for a loved one I don't think even Manik knows himself!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Preeshaxo


Thank youuu 😳 such a huge compliment especially from you! 😳

You know he's just as overwhelmed with these emotions too. He loves this girl more then he knows which is why he finds it hard to justify his actions.

I don't like the fact that people are saying that Nandini needs to wake up and see what pandit's doing etc because like I mentioned in my response to Reya if you look closely and re watch last weeks episodes you see that fear already creeping in. You see the uneasiness around her when pandit's name is mentioned or when he's around her. She looks for the distractions so she doesn't have to face what's going on. She was so overwhelmed with emotions last week which was why her behavior was off. It's effecting her more then she's letting on. The change is there, its just happening slowly.
Manik is her biggest strength at the minute, it's the only thing that's keeping her going. Her smile is her shield, the moment her smile disappears is the moment her mask drops.

Manik's anger was nothing compared to what it can be. Pandit has got off lightly this time. What extent Manik can go to for a loved one I don't think even Manik knows himself!

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Preesha
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And you do it again!!! Gahhh brilliant thoughts! And now I've just gotten a thought I need to express. So you said Manik doesn't know himself the extent he can go to... the extent his fury can go to! Bang on! But you know what... Nandini knows. She knows every damn bit ...you knows that this was nothing today, he will blast like an explosion when the day will arrive and he will take down everyone with him. And you know what... she fears exactly that because if he explodes, he's bound to get hurt too. Exaclty why she's keeping hush about all her uneasiness. She's no fool.. she can sesnse danger. She's just fought with one last week when it landed upon mukti, so she knows that she should be fearful and careful around that panditji. But she can't risk to tell manik all this because she has to do her bit to protect him too!
Absolutely marvelous girl!!
Can't wait to see how you talk about the tomorrow <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww come here my darling... shall give you a massive hug <3 🤗
Hope you've been taking proper care of yourself!
Love you loads!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

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Okies...here i am. Love the analysis today. Especially where you voice Manik and Nandini's internal thoughts, their inner turmoil today..it was perfection. seriously.

Lets start with Dhruv, been a couple of days i haven't discussed him much. Dhruv. Quite the contradiction this man is. Is Manik suffocating him with all the love and care ? Or is Manik not giving him the priority he deserves in his life ? Which one is it, Dhruv ? Please pick one and stick with it. Goes to show how misplaced his accusations are to begin with. But now is the time. Manik doesn't have the time to soothe his feathers right now. His Nandini, she is priority right now. She is his entire world right now. He has to see her safe and sound before he can breathe again.

Calm. His calm. His calm is missing and he must find it, find her. Restlessness has left him agitated. Fear is crawling all over, gripping his heart the tightest. His eyes are desperate for a fill of her. Where ? Where is she ? Like a man on a mission, he will search every corner to the world to find his calm. There is no power in the world that can stop him. Like you said, no barrier is strong enough to keep Manik from his Nandini. And when he sees her, his heart stops. Engulfed in smoke, she falls limp in his arms. And memories, the memories of losing her, the memories of finding her in such a state. They are all back.

Someone has hurt his Nandini. Now that someone must pay. Here at this point i can fangirl and say that i abolsutely loved it when Manik punched Pandit. I had warned the older generation guy - Can i just say I laughed so loud here!!! Oh god you're so cute!! hahaha that he was about to get his ass kicked literally if he didn't mind his way and he didn't listen. The beating was hardly a beating, Manik should have beat him black and blue. And an man who has to hide behind another man is not a man ! since when does Dhruv find other people's battle ? And that manipulative Pandit, he twisted Nandini's arm and dangled the fusion concert like a carrot. The poor girl, so torn she was. Pandit is a smart man, he knows how to play his game. And he has played it well. And the evil Nyionka, she just disgusts me. how can one woman be so cruel ? It's no wonder her son can't find it in his heart to forgive her.

The world against them ! Her fear, it's what she has feared last night and he had reassured her. it's them against the world and today the world is intent on tearing them apart. An enforced seperation. The world is denying Manik Maltorta the very oxygen he breathes, denying him the sight of her beautiful, denying him the touch that gives him life. The world is denying Manik his Nandini. And he is livid ! He is the ruler of his world. He makes his own rules. He breaks rules. No one tells Manik Maltorta what he can't do, he will prove you wrong. no one dictates his life. He has given the right to only one person and even she, his Nandini is listening to the word, agreeing to stay away from him. How will he live ? how can she think he will live, be alive without her ?

They will fight. For each other. They will fight each other, fight to protect their love, their hope. He will fight her, fight the world to protect her from any harm. She will fight him, to protect him from the world, the world that accuses him . And she will fight, to protect him from himself. His anger, it has consumed him today, she must bring him back. And no walking away anymore, no walking away when they are fighting. Too often they have walked away before sorting their problems.

Her touch. It's magic, it soothes him. His arms come around her but his eyes, his eyes are vacant today. The worries, the fear, they won't leave him, even her touch can't seem to bring him back. Her grip, it's so strong on him but he isn't there with her. Her eyes, his eyes, they finally meet so now can he return to her ? Her please, her plea for their hope and he finds his way back to her. My beautiful moment would probably be when he closes his eyes, and you can see him trying to be Nandini's Manik again. I felt he had gone off to another place for a bit but when he opens his eyes again and focuses on her..at that moment, he was back. ( maybe i didn't understand the scene properly but that's how i perceived it as a viewer)

This response is so poorly written i shouldn't even be posting it..lol. I shouldn't attempted it when my brain is half dead but i wanted to get it done before the next epi.

Your words were flawless as always. Loved it all.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3


Ummm hello... like can you please stop criticising youre peice here because it managed to enlighten me in a whole heap of ways and I have some brand new thoughts to share so I don't see any imperfections in it. Especially something you mentioned in the second last paragraph with their hug has totally left me floored but before that I have some other things to mention.
DHRUV! Okay I felt like punching him out of the way today. Like Manik stopped and I was like sitting there crying no no no don't stop. I don't care if he hates manik or what his insecurities are about and whether he's pissed about the lack of attention he's getting or the fact that he was getting too much attention before but man where has this guy lost his senses? Since when has he just become so heartless. I get it... he can't bear the sight of manik, but nandini? Since when did her words fall lies as well? Okay forget nandini... for once couldn't he just focus on the fact that a girl was expressing how she was uneasy in a room around this so-called man who's actually a devil in diguise? Like just for the sake of humanity, couldn't he believe those tears, the way she was almost begging for some to understand that she just wasn't comfortable in that room with all that smoke. I'm sorry for all this random outrage but he seriously let me down today and in a way that I think I'll take me some time to start appreciating his character again.
It's needless to say that nyonika wouldn't have done anything. She likes to escalate matters like this to a new level. Like I said, playing with people's lives is her favourite pass-time. And yesterday she was just simply lucky. But tomorrow is something she should fear because she is about to face the biggest loss of her life which she will remember for the rest of her esxistence.
Oh my god, those lines I've highlighted in your response about Manik making his own rules and doing things his own way! Wow... just... wow! No need for me to add anything there because the lines were just so powerful... perfectly apt to personify his strength when it comes to his loved ones! Awesome job babe <3
Okay coming to what I was saying with your second last paragraph... My beautiful moment is when he grabs her hand to stop her from going and hw's still angry... he's not going to say anything to her because he's still made at her and she knows it... and just before she runs up to hug him... her eyes soften like her heart has just melted for him because he's angry but he still wants her around him and she did this little tilt of the head to the side in utter unbelief. She knows him just so so so well and mind you he's not any less either. When she hugs him, she has her eyes so tightly shut as if she's trying to suck out all the anger from withing him and displace it all with her love, positivity and hope. They can never let go of that hope. She hugs hime to say it'll all be okay.
IOkay so that line which left me floored was how you said that he was actually lost somewhere and when he closes his eyes and then re-opens them, he's a little more calm and back to the reality with her. Bravo girl! Seriously. Now that I think about it.. his eyes were almost like thinking ahead of time and hence why he was just staring ahead in no-space. Like we've discussed, he fears tomorrow when she will be all alone and he will be bound by a promise to not see her. And that's causing him to just feel so lost and he isn't being able to focus on this present moment.
So I have this theory that we will have a night sequence of manan becasue they've both had a rough day and technically he didn't get to express how scared he was when he found her like that in that room full of smoke. And well also, now that meeting each other in the college is a big no no, the night seems to be their only option lol
Thankyou so much for the beautifully written and enlightening response my sunny!
Lots of love
Twinkie <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

@twinkle, as usual fabulously written.. Loved it all..

You know right from start only, i had so many expectations from Pandit track which were already crushed during holi time with that staring he did.. And over time pandit has turned out to be not just abusive teacher but also creepy.. When nandini told maanik that he has crossed limits as teacher but not as man, i didnt agree with her at all.. I dont understand how she is not recognizing it.. Maanik was on point here.. Just locking a room when there is girl in a room is so so wrong.. Whatever the intentions may be..here to he is staring at her.. Touching her.. Atleast i was happy to see her pushing away his hands when he was being that creepy.. Why is she being so dumb.. Is it writers attempt to keep her in this limbo till that big concert day.. I seem to not get her anymore.. 😕 why is she being dumbed down.. And i think it is coming from my age old complaint of this track being stretched too much... Dont get me wrong, i dont have issues with the track though i had different expectations, i am happy with the direction they took too.. Its the execution.. With all these abhi-mukti drama, merger episodes, campaign their track seem to be neglected and too patchy.. I mean i see the transition from Hate to acceptance on maanik's part as well as nandini's loss of hope, but it is missing the crispness.. Everytime nandini says *concert nahi hoga* instead of being able to connect to her, i cringe at that.. Do you feel same?

But even though i am not able to connect with nandini, i loved maanik's portrayal today.. He was so restless to not find her, he didnt care about dhruv's tantrums and went away in search of her as soon as he got the details about her whereabouts.. Pandit is being too smart in his plans.. he played dhruv's perceptions so well.. So when maanik accused him of putting in a room with smoke, dhruv was there to fight on his behalf.. Maanik's anger was justified though, its sad no-one took it seriously and his own angry past bit him.. Nandini tried to be on his side but as soon as she realised that her being in concert would be compromised, she backed off.. Now not to sound repeatative, this is what makes her dumb to me.. They both know concert is for namesake. kind of symbolic.. So why fear for it when she should be fighting against this harassment thats been thrown at her.. Isnt she same righteous girl.. Btw i just couldnt stop 🤣 when navya said she will keep manan away in college 😆 First of all we know how tough that is.. Now with pandit's trouble around the corner how is maanik going to accept that.. It seemed like *shaadi ke pehle dulha dulhan ek dusare se mil nahi sakate* kind of toned and made to laugh about it...

Maanik when he mentioned that should he wait for pandit to cross the line as a man, he was right.. Nandini just doesnt get it.. The hug was ok though.. It was as if she is trying to calm him down and as well get strength to be away from him and get through for this stupid concert..

Btw cabir-navya-and their mom's drama is getting too nonsensical to me.. I cant even laugh at it anymore... Though i like the fact that cabir is not giving in to his mom's manipulation...

Nyo-pandit: Nyonika is smart yet dumb.. Pandit told her maanik is troubling nandini and she finally believes maanik's lie.. But she is smart to fuel into Pandit's ego and obsessive need to make nandini best.. The way she told Nandini is lucky to have him giving so much attention and she is all yours were smart words... And that he being touchy with her.. 😆😆😆 Pun 😆 Clever dialogs...

In all episode was good but they need to hurry up.. This new keeping Manan away seems unnecessary and lengthening the track unnecessarily.. This new avatar of cabir for dhruv doesnt interest me so much either... I am getting impatient now with this concert thing, they better show good turning point there.. Otherwise this track will be all lost on me.. They have been building this up for too long.. Dhruv-maanik equation is now setup esp after todays episode, so there has to be some kind of showdown, nandini needs to realise Pandit's harassment crossing boundaries as a man.. So have that damn concert already..

Hellooo pri!
Hahah okay come here girl.. I shall give you a hug because these cv's seem to be getting on your nerves right now so i shall make you feel better! 🤗
I got everything you were trying to say here and honestly some of these are beyond my understanding too now.
So there was that bit you said about Nandini not being able to see panditji's intentions and acting plain, simple dumb. My take on it is a little different although it might not sound convincing. So my theory is that she just seems to be wanting to avoid thinking and talking about panditji altogether. She jiust doesn't want to prioiritise him or his actions because she's more excited about the fusion concert being so close and finally having her manik with her again. It's sort of like how you had that hope that panditji wouldn't turn out to be negative ... yeh I have this hope (LOL how many times have we used this word in the last few weeks ahah) ... yeh so I have this hoopeful theory that she knows it all.. she knows how dangerous he can be and we've seen that because she does get a little fidgety with her hands and she flings off his hands or pushes aside his touch the minute he tries but for manik, she is keeping it all inside her. I had mentioned on this other pst that whilst manik doesn't know the extend and intensity of his own anger, but nandini certainly does. It has been with her from the very start of this show and some of us even have this theory that manik doesn;t realise it, but he can kill someone for her and that is her biggest fear. She doesn't want things getting messy for him in any way because it will cause the doom of him and she can't bear it all again to lose him. Of course it also means that there are chances of him getting tremendously hurt as well if there is a fight off which is another terror she has so I believe it to be a way of her protecting him. Honestly, I know there are flows with this theory because we all know she doesn't have an exact picture of how dangerous this evil is and she is definitely going to be shattered when that day arrive when panditji will lay out his masterplan, but let's see how this shapes up.
As for this whole idea of the fusion concert being more of a namesake...that is something which has started bothering me too. But I'm just going meh... one day left, they'll get there. But yes you're right in saying that Nandini should've realised that this fusion concert is the least important right now because they've already reached home. Yes they still have an official celebration awaiting and ahem ahem that kiss too 😆 but he's given her so many clues even when he said to her that day about fate and destiny and what kind of irrational things she is saying, I thought she might have understood that her fear should be all over because they are no longer 2... they've already united. But I guess cv's want it to be a grand and as manik said ... why make it easy when you can have it all. So we'll just have to see how they bring on this much-awaited night.
haha i'm pretty keen too to see how manik stays away ... don't know about nandini, but manik koh door rakhna mushkil hi nahi...na mumkin hai! 😆😆
Hopefully, you're able to connect better with them tomorrow my love and don't worry.. not long to go now!
Twinkle <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

DAY 29! - Blind Love!

Love is pain. Love is tears. Love is heartache. But they don't want to stop loving.

Love is fear. Love is hurdles. Love is anger. But no, they don't want to stop loving.

Because after every night, a new morning rises. After every hurdle, you are free to run your race. After every tear, a pair of fingers always reach up to wipe them away. After every heartache, the heart starts to beat faster and stronger. Because after every fear, the determination to fight another fear emerges.

Love gives you strength. Love nurtures you to grow. Love empowers you to fight. Love teaches you to live.

Love is also smiles. Love is also light. Love is also calm. Perhaps that's why he can't stop loving her.

Love is also optimism. Love is also trust. Love is also hope. And that's why she can't stop loving him.

Why?

Because love is blind.

Love is when you fight with the world for the one you want to protect. Love is when you claim it your right to yell, scream, push, pull, question her as to why she won't let him fight for her? Why she won't let listen to a single word of his? Why she can't be just be that one more observant and aware of the danger lurking around her?

Love is when you hold her back even amidst the peak of your madness towards her. Love is when you refuse to talk to her because you're still utterly annoyed with her but you want her there. With you. Near you. To calm you.

Love is when you agree to her irrational demands. Even if it means it's for the last time. But you don't further argue because she's whispered "mere liye?"

Love is when your senses disregard all motion, all conversations, all actions taking place around you because both your heart and mind are drowning in tension. Love is when you have to pace yourself through the corridor in order to force the mind to originate a master plan which will finally set the heart in peace. Love is when the thoughts of losing her constantly flooding the inner-consciousness and the hands are fidgeting amongst each other because time is running out and the fear of losing her is intensifying.

Love is when you ignore all requests to leave from her behalf and decline to accept her illogical notion of not meeting each other. Love is when you adamantly stand outside a windowed door and absolutely compel her to escape from this baby-sitting concept by a friend and meet you no matter what.

This fight is blind. This need is blind. This love is blind!

Love is when you run back and bury yourself in his warmth because you need him just as much as he needs you. Love is when you look up into those pained eyes and try to soothe out that agony by assuring him that you are fine in his protective shield. Love is when you plead to him to control his wrath next time because this rage might engulf him too in its blazing flames. Love can never be one-sided. True love is always double-sided. Shared. And so if the fight to protect her has begun, the fight to protect him must initiate too. The fight is mutual. The need to protect is mutual. The inability to see the other hurt is mutual. Because the love is mutual.

Love is when you use your own smile to spread a smile on his face. Love is when you only leave his side convinced; that he won't end up in some sort of danger himself. Love is when you leave his presences confident; that his anger has now ceased and a gush of calm is has finally been inhaled by the heart.

Love is when you automatically are about to head out the classroom to meet him since the rehearsal is on an unplanned break. Love is when you propose white lies to your bestfriend just to distract her attention from the one standing outside that door.

"Veena...mai kabse veena koh play kar rahi thi na mera hand... it's hurting, toh mai bas isse stretch kar rahi thi...oww."

Love is when you excuse yourself somehow from the strict surveillance of your friend just so you can spend a few needful moments with him. You know that your heart wants to spend every moment of the day conversing with his heart. You know that it'll be equivalent to lying to yourself if you dismiss the thought of meeting him. So you fool the friend and escape to your love.

Why? Because the heart's call is blind. The soulful demand is blind. The love is blind!

Your love is blind right? You two seem to profess to understand each other better than none other correct? You seem to possess this talent of interpreting each other's silence, am I not wrong? Prove it!

She enters. He's already waiting.

She starts walking backwards. He starts treading forward.

She starts instructing. He starts questioning.

"Don't turn! Don't...turn!"

"What?! You mad... what're you doing?"

She starts with the explaining. Hoping he'll understand her insight. Convincing him to just calmly consider.

"Manik, before you get angry meri baat sunno. Yeh jo kasam hai na, it's got a loop whole. Hum ek dusre ko dekh nahi sakte but...par hum ek dusre se mil toh sakte hain na."

He starts with the arguing. Declining her every request to listen. Abandoning her appeal to adjust.

"Nandini...let me you. I don't believe in this kasam and all okay? All this bullshit!"

But you believe in her right? You believe in her trust. You believe in her faith. You believe in her thoughts. You believe in the decisions she takes. And so you stood with your back turned. With your face spun. You believe her, yes! Why? Because love is blind! Proof no.1

She finds home. He finds shore.

She leans aback. He comforts her.

Her eyes open, knowing he's are not shut either.

"Manik...mai bhi nahi maanti."

But you trust him. Trust him to not spin around and disregard your request. Trust him to not capture her sight in his eyes till you allow him to. Trust him to not jinx this whole situation because the weight of worries has already increased. Why? Because trust is love and your trust is blind. Your love is blind! Proof no. 2

She starts talking. He listens.

She expresses her needs. He attends to those needs.

She confesses her fears. He absorbs her terrors.

She pours out to him. He draws it all in.

He tries so reason. But she sighs in defeat.

"And thinking of all this. My heart hurts,"

"Hurts." Meaning pain. You can't bear to see her in pain right? Pain isn't allowed anywhere near her as long as you stand. You've promised to protect her. To never let pain touch her. But she's bound you with another promise. To not turn around. To not look at her. But as if that will stop you from fulfilling your promise. Why? Because promises are meant to be fulfilled. Because her fear is weaker than your promise. Because her pain is your priority. She is your priority.

You turn to fulfil the promise. You turn without breaking the second promise. She checks on you because you have this habit of cheating. She's just making sure because you like being just as stubborn as her at times. But you don't let her down. Why? Because you love her and she loves you too. And your love is blind! Proof No. 3

Love is when even with closed eyes; he can map out every inch of her face with the sight of his heart. Love is when he allows his fingers to smooth out every line of worry, every frown of distress from her face. Love is when his touch drives her to lean into his hands as if she's feeling his touch for the very first time. Love is when his fingers calm all her fears down and her face pacifies his panicking heart. Love is when they seem to be aware of each other's presence like never before. Love is when he smiles because he feels as if he can feel her soul today. Love is when she smiles because he knew the heart was craving his caress.

"Nandini...does it... still hurt?"

The touch. It has the power to heal. It has the power to reaffirm. It has the power to show them the light. It has the power to extinguish all fear, every worry. It has the power to allow the souls to communicate. It has the power to allow the heart to beat as one.

Love is when you transfer all your hope, all your optimism, all your courage to her and assure her that their togetherness isn't something she should fear because he's already with her.

"Nandini...kuch galat nahi hoga. I'm there na. I'm working on it."

The touch. It was blind, yet aware of every inch. Their touch. Their love. Blind, yet wide awake. Proof no. 4

Friendship is also love and love is when you religiously want to reunite with your lost friend. Love is when even if he detaches you from himself, you refuse to break this friendship. Love is when despite being aware of his meaningless hatred; you continue to effortlessly try to heal this broken relationship.

One brother is blinded by his love, and hence refuses to let go. The other is blinded by his hatred, and hence is refusing to hold on.

But her love is a fighter. Her love gives him strength to fight. So what if his love for friendship is weakening him again. His love for her will strengthen him tomorrow. Because love can be blind but it can't be ignorant. Love can be blind but it can't be deaf. Love can be blind but it can't be helpless.

That is their story. Blinded by their hope of togetherness. Blinded by the hope to become each other's music. Blinded by their faith in each other. Blinded by their blind love for each other.

Twinkle <3

Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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DAY 29! - Blind Love!

Love is pain. Love is tears. Love is heartache. But they don't want to stop loving.

Love is fear. Love is hurdles. Love is anger. But no, they don't want to stop loving.

Because after every night, a new morning rises. After every hurdle, you are free to run your race. After every tear, a pair of fingers always reach up to wipe them away. After every heartache, the heart starts to beat faster and stronger. Because after every fear, the determination to fight another fear emerges.

Love gives you strength. Love nurtures you to grow. Love empowers you to fight. Love teaches you to live.

Love is also smiles. Love is also light. Love is also calm. Perhaps that's why he can't stop loving her.

Love is also optimism. Love is also trust. Love is also hope. And that's why she can't stop loving him.

Why?

Because love is blind.

Love is when you fight with the world for the one you want to protect. Love is when you claim it your right to yell, scream, push, pull, question her as to why she won't let him fight for her? Why she won't let listen to a single word of his? Why she can't be just be that one more observant and aware of the danger lurking around her?

Love is when you hold her back even amidst the peak of your madness towards her. Love is when you refuse to talk to her because you're still utterly annoyed with her but you want her there. With you. Near you. To calm you.

Love is when you agree to her irrational demands. Even if it means it's for the last time. But you don't further argue because she's whispered "mere liye?"

Love is when your senses disregard all motion, all conversations, all actions taking place around you because both your heart and mind are drowning in tension. Love is when you have to pace yourself through the corridor in order to force the mind to originate a master plan which will finally set the heart in peace. Love is when the thoughts of losing her constantly flooding the inner-consciousness and the hands are fidgeting amongst each other because time is running out and the fear of losing her is intensifying.

Love is when you ignore all requests to leave from her behalf and decline to accept her illogical notion of not meeting each other. Love is when you adamantly stand outside a windowed door and absolutely compel her to escape from this baby-sitting concept by a friend and meet you no matter what.

This fight is blind. This need is blind. This love is blind!

Love is when you run back and bury yourself in his warmth because you need him just as much as he needs you. Love is when you look up into those pained eyes and try to soothe out that agony by assuring him that you are fine in his protective shield. Love is when you plead to him to control his wrath next time because this rage might engulf him too in its blazing flames. Love can never be one-sided. True love is always double-sided. Shared. And so if the fight to protect her has begun, the fight to protect him must initiate too. The fight is mutual. The need to protect is mutual. The inability to see the other hurt is mutual. Because the love is mutual.

Love is when you use your own smile to spread a smile on his face. Love is when you only leave his side convinced; that he won't end up in some sort of danger himself. Love is when you leave his presences confident; that his anger has now ceased and a gush of calm is has finally been inhaled by the heart.

Love is when you automatically are about to head out the classroom to meet him since the rehearsal is on an unplanned break. Love is when you propose white lies to your bestfriend just to distract her attention from the one standing outside that door.

"Veena...mai kabse veena koh play kar rahi thi na mera hand... it's hurting, toh mai bas isse stretch kar rahi thi...oww."

Love is when you excuse yourself somehow from the strict surveillance of your friend just so you can spend a few needful moments with him. You know that your heart wants to spend every moment of the day conversing with his heart. You know that it'll be equivalent to lying to yourself if you dismiss the thought of meeting him. So you fool the friend and escape to your love.

Why? Because the heart's call is blind. The soulful demand is blind. The love is blind!

Your love is blind right? You two seem to profess to understand each other better than none other correct? You seem to possess this talent of interpreting each other's silence, am I not wrong? Prove it!

She enters. He's already waiting.

She starts walking backwards. He starts treading forward.

She starts instructing. He starts questioning.

"Don't turn! Don't...turn!"

"What?! You mad... what're you doing?"

She starts with the explaining. Hoping he'll understand her insight. Convincing him to just calmly consider.

"Manik, before you get angry meri baat sunno. Yeh jo kasam hai na, it's got a loop whole. Hum ek dusre ko dekh nahi sakte but...par hum ek dusre se mil toh sakte hain na."

He starts with the arguing. Declining her every request to listen. Abandoning her appeal to adjust.

"Nandini...let me you. I don't believe in this kasam and all okay? All this bullshit!"

But you believe in her right? You believe in her trust. You believe in her faith. You believe in her thoughts. You believe in the decisions she takes. And so you stood with your back turned. With your face spun. You believe her, yes! Why? Because love is blind! Proof no.1

She finds home. He finds shore.

She leans aback. He comforts her.

Her eyes open, knowing he's are not shut either.

"Manik...mai bhi nahi maanti."

But you trust him. Trust him to not spin around and disregard your request. Trust him to not capture her sight in his eyes till you allow him to. Trust him to not jinx this whole situation because the weight of worries has already increased. Why? Because trust is love and your trust is blind. Your love is blind! Proof no. 2

She starts talking. He listens.

She expresses her needs. He attends to those needs.

She confesses her fears. He absorbs her terrors.

She pours out to him. He draws it all in.

He tries so reason. But she sighs in defeat.

"And thinking of all this. My heart hurts,"

"Hurts." Meaning pain. You can't bear to see her in pain right? Pain isn't allowed anywhere near her as long as you stand. You've promised to protect her. To never let pain touch her. But she's bound you with another promise. To not turn around. To not look at her. But as if that will stop you from fulfilling your promise. Why? Because promises are meant to be fulfilled. Because her fear is weaker than your promise. Because her pain is your priority. She is your priority.

You turn to fulfil the promise. You turn without breaking the second promise. She checks on you because you have this habit of cheating. She's just making sure because you like being just as stubborn as her at times. But you don't let her down. Why? Because you love her and she loves you too. And your love is blind! Proof No. 3

Love is when even with closed eyes; he can map out every inch of her face with the sight of his heart. Love is when he allows his fingers to smooth out every line of worry, every frown of distress from her face. Love is when his touch drives her to lean into his hands as if she's feeling his touch for the very first time. Love is when his fingers calm all her fears down and her face pacifies his panicking heart. Love is when they seem to be aware of each other's presence like never before. Love is when he smiles because he feels as if he can feel her soul today. Love is when she smiles because he knew the heart was craving his caress.

"Nandini...does it... still hurt?"

The touch. It has the power to heal. It has the power to reaffirm. It has the power to show them the light. It has the power to extinguish all fear, every worry. It has the power to allow the souls to communicate. It has the power to allow the heart to beat as one.

Love is when you transfer all your hope, all your optimism, all your courage to her and assure her that their togetherness isn't something she should fear because he's already with her.

"Nandini...kuch galat nahi hoga. I'm there na. I'm working on it."

The touch. It was blind, yet aware of every inch. Their touch. Their love. Blind, yet wide awake. Proof no. 4

Friendship is also love and love is when you religiously want to reunite with your lost friend. Love is when even if he detaches you from himself, you refuse to break this friendship. Love is when despite being aware of his meaningless hatred; you continue to effortlessly try to heal this broken relationship.

One brother is blinded by his love, and hence refuses to let go. The other is blinded by his hatred, and hence is refusing to hold on.

But her love is a fighter. Her love gives him strength to fight. So what if his love for friendship is weakening him again. His love for her will strengthen him tomorrow. Because love can be blind but it can't be ignorant. Love can be blind but it can't be deaf. Love can be blind but it can't be helpless.

That is their story. Blinded by their hope of togetherness. Blinded by the hope to become each other's music. Blinded by their faith in each other. Blinded by their blind love for each other.

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Hello wala hi my love..and you just manage to amaze yet again..you pen such beautiful thoughts that i can't help but love all of it. sometimes i really have a hard time deciding which lines i should bold. Love is such a beautiful emotion, such a universal emotions and it takes so many names and forms and i loved how you explored the idea of it.

Love is strength, when one weakens, the other becomes their strength. And today, Manik was Nandini's strength, her comfort, her balm. Love is a need. The need to be near each other. Lies shall be spoken..loopholes shall be found. They always find their way home to each other. They say when one loses a sense, another sense is enhanced to make up for it. Manik and Nandini have lost their sight today, they can't see each other but they can feel each other..With closed eyes, their sense of touched in enhanced. She is tired, she is scared and she leans against his strong back and rests. Rests her mind, expresses her fear. Hurt, her heart is hurt. She is in pain. And Manik can't bear it, his Nandini can't hurt. "I wanna sing for you, with you for us." They are in a somewhat of a dark place right now..fighting the entire world, those against them for their hope, the room was symbolic of it..but even the darkness, there is enough light, enough hope for them to be able to reach out and touch.

Their shadows, their souls, they reach out and touch each other. Her touches soothes him. His touch heals her. His fingers caress her soft skin, skim down her face as he absorbs all the pain. He touches her heart and reaches in to take away all the hurt, pain, fear and only leaves his love for her. She smiles even when he can't see it. She lay her hand over his and they are at peace. His hands reach out and hold hers, and brightness shines. Their joined hands hold all the strength. And his words, he has understood that she needs his words so he reassures once again. He won't let anything go wrong, he is working on it. And Manik Maltorta always keeps his word.

Love is separation. "Har pyaar milan toh nahin. Judaai bhi toh ek pyaar hai." Some love stories aren't meant to have happy endings but at times, a short lived love story. That's all one person gets. Mukti, her time to love was not much. Love came with a big smiley face and taught her how to smile, how to live, how to be true to herself. And then he left, just as quickly as he came. Her time to love ended. But her time to live has just started. Abhi brought a new Mukti to life, now she must live, for herself, for the man who loved her, who still loves her from above.

Love is friendship. One of the very first forms of love a human being learns to love a friend. And now a friend has lost his way home, he refuses to come home. But love is also determination."You don't turn your back on your family even when they do." Manik wants his friend back, Cabir wants a hug from his friend. And both the friends hurt as Dhruv spits out hurtful words once again. They say some people put up walls just to see who will break them down. And Dhruv, so unloved he began to feel over time.This Dhruv, this is defence mechanism. Why should his heart hurt ? He rather hurt other people. This Dhruv has become selfish. Today, i am not frustrated with Dhruv, i am not mad. I am actually extremely saddened for him. To see him throw away the love he has been blessed with. How we all wish he could see right but he can't. Till yesterday, Manik's love suffocated him, Manik wasn't able to give him the priority he deserved. And today, he claims Manik is jealous of him. Oh Dhruv, when this fog clears and you are able to see right, it shall be a long ride home, where he will still be welcomed with open arms. Fab 5 will still hurdle as one and hug it out. But the difference, they will be stronger. Manik and Dhruv will mend their friendship. They are buddies, and they shall find a way to be buddies again.

Wonderfully penned today...and as always i loved it.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 10 years ago
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Luv to read ur analysis n u knw m ur biggest fan 😃
Yup, it's a blind luv n he wants this same blind trust from her , their scene as usual was a treat to our sights...MaNan be always luv !

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