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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Manik directly goes into his room and goes for a shower while Cabir and Nandini are talkin in his room
Cabir : maine Manik ko itna vulnerable aj tak ni dkha!
Nandini : Cabir he'll be fine don't worry :)
Cabir : I know tum ho na
Nandini : hum h na :D
Cabir smiling at the innocence of this petite little woman .. How she always manages to surprise him n handles Manik so well in his worst times..
Cabir gets a call and goes out while Nandini calls Manik but he doesn't respond...
Then she gets worried... Meanwhile she gets a text from Cabir saying that he forgot that he has his show in half an hour so he has to go but asks her to take care of Manik

Nanidni replies : Don't wory , I will :)
To which Cabir Replies I know .. Only you can ! ;)

Nandini then goes into the bathroom and finds manik sitting under the shower .. All wet and just staring at the wall.. 😕

Nandini : Manik utho chalo ...
But he wasn't responding!
Nandini knelt down and held his face in her hands , " Manik mai hu na tumhare sath .. Hum san thok krdnge aise Hope mat lose kro pls "
Manik looked at her and hugged her and started crying!
This was the second time she saw him crying today and it was too much to take in!
Without any further thought and knowing exactly how to calm him , She Kissed him.. At first he was shocked .. But then tears starts flowing as he was cooling down and he responded passionately! 🥱
The kiss got more intense as both of them were feeling the pain..
Manik .. The pain of losing his buddy.. The most integral and beautiful part of his existence.. his Brother..
And Nandini .. Seeing her love .. So hurt and vulnerable.. She just wanted to give all tje love she could to decrrase his pain ...
Manik pulled her more close .. Both of them getting more wet and just lost in the moment!
Then gasping for air .. Both panting and looking intensely into each others eyes.. Smiled a bit ..
Nandini : chalo .. Gile hgye h lets change
Manik with a smirk : sath mei change 🥱 krnge?
Nandini (blushing a bit) : Manik ! Normal ho rhe ho haan! And hugged him.. And he felt so relieved.. By her presence..
Manik : chalo vrna tmhe thand lg jaegi .. I'll gove you something to wear ...
Then they both leave ...
Edited by manya_189 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: SKTKsara

Nice update :) u fullfilled my wish(last scene)i expected this kind of scene in todays episode but its not happened n i m glad u made it. continue soon...



We all have our imaginations! I'm glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Mast yr
Imtense but romantic update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
aww so beautiful update..😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
both parts are awesome ...update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear!
Luved it, do continue plz, thanks ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Manik gave Nandini a shirt and a short ( ofc! He wasn't going to give her a pajama! He likes her small yet soft legs ) 😉
Nandini : Aiyooo frse shorts! Manik mei ye ni phnungi!
Manik : Nandini! Ab pls I don't have energy .. Ye phna h to phni vrnA... Giving her an angry look
Nandini understanding the situation .. Quietly agreed ..
Manik went inside the bathroom to change while nandini was changing in his room!
Manik came out & was just staring at Nandini .. Who was standing there.. In his shirt and those sexy little shorts which ended mid thighs...
He went ahead and slowly with a smirk on his face.. Putting his hands on her waist said , " u know I don't mind you staying woth me every night ,if it means seeing you like this" 😆
Nandu with a cute devilish smirk on her face turned around.. Keeping her hands pn his chest said ,"like what? "
Manik : 😉 this sexy short girl ... Seeing your innocent beautiful face makes my night better... Holding you this close feels like.. Like I will always have someone to hold on to .. Who'll never bail on me! Will not judge me! ... Looking in your eyes.. All i can see is L...
Nandini : you see ? ( with utmost innocence she asks)
Manik : I see.. Care and tenderness.. You calm me down like nobody else.. You are my Solace Nandini .. Don't ever leave me!
Nandini was happy.. Happy from the bottom of her heart listening to all of this.. She couldn't help but smile and hug him tightly.. Giving him the assurance of what he just said ..never let go of him...
Manik and Nandini were lost on their world..
*Knock Knock*
Servant : Sir khana le au?
Nandini : yes le ao..
Manik : no I'm mot hungry..
Nandini to servant : ap jao and le ao ..
Manik : but .. (Before he could say anything nandini glared at him & gave those deadly looks which scared him )
Ok fine..
Then she asks him to sit on the bed and calls the servant again and then asks him to bring smthg!
Manik : what did u say to him?
Nandini : nothing and smiled and went near him..
He pulled her near ... Slowly caressing her back.. Taking his hands down.. Slowly and steadily..
*Snap*
😲
Ouch! That hurts!
Nandini : it'll hurt more if you try to do that again
Manik pulling her more close said," I don't play by the rules" and slowly brought his face near hers..
Both were lost in each other's eyes when again the door knocked and the servant had brought the dinner!
Manik 😡 urghhh ! Perfect timing hoti h sbki..
Nandini chuckled then served food..
Manik : tum ni khaogi?
Nandini : phle tum khalo fr khaungi:)
Manik (admiring her love for him ) : idhr do plate.. Made her eat the first and then she did the same..
Both had their dinner..
After that the servant came with a box of Icecream! 👏
Manik smiling : oh! To ye hmm..
Nandini shyly said," you know na how much i love ice cream "
Manik : and you know na how much I Love eating it from ur hands
Both remember the night when he sucked the Icecream from her fingers and Nandu starts blushing!
Manik : ab sharmati rahogi ki yaha aogi Bhi Icecream lekar 😆
Nandini came and he pulled her made her sit on his laps..
Nandini : Manik kya kar rhe ho koi ajaega.. Dkhlga
Manik : servant ne drwaza band krdia h.. Nyonik out of town and raat k 1 bje koi ni aega so shut up and ice cream khae.. And he kissed her on her chubby lil cheeks
Nandini opened the box and started eating the chocolate.. Manik was just admiring her.. How cute and beautiful 😳 she looked.. Then coming out of his Nandini-land said..
Manik : arey khud hi khati rhogi ki mjhe bhi khilaogi?
Nandini who was so into eating her ice cream ... Gave him a bite of it .. But Manik being MANIK refused..
Nandini : ab kya hua.. Lo na khao
Manik : mjhe ye vali ni chahie :/
Nandini : Fir knsi Chahie?
Manik : The one near your lips 😉
Nandini : oh! So have it roka ksne h ( she said it in a sarcastic way but Baba Manik ko jb permission mil hi gyi h chahe mazak mei kyu na to vo kyu mauka chrhe)
Manik started moving his hands up n down her bear small yet so soft thigh which sent shivers to her enitre body... She looked at him shyly ..he took the box from her hands... Licked the ice cream off her fingers... His hands now went upto her waist and then started caressing her back..
Manik : so Ms.Murthy .. Time for desert..
With That Manik bent forward and kissed her passionately..
The kiss was of love and passion.. The hunger and the pain they felt.. It was all that.. They took out in tje form of the kiss.. The disastrous day end on a good note..hoping that the morning will bring out something better than yesterday night!

Ok so i tried making it long.. Hope its not too long .. But Enjoy and let me know your views :))
Edited by manya_189 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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another lovely and Romantic update..😳
Thanks for PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waw soo beautiful update..😳😃 👏
Edited by nara26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prati_25

another lovely and Romantic update..😳

Thanks for PM:)



Your welcome and thankyou for appreciating ;D

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