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Posted: 10 years ago
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HTA111, ksh_n, sunset17, kritika121, pooja.loya, apps33,
Thanks peeps!

Each and every comment is very encouraging. Thank you all.Will updated next chapter tomorrow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
its really interesting..update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Interesting story 😊
Update soon...
Pls PM me when u update..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cabirs POV
What? She wanted to stay at the Malhotra mansion? Is she out of her mind.

"nandini... Are sure? "I asked.

" haan cabir... Miene soch Liya hai... I will stay at Malhotra Mansion.. Ab chalo... "she said and sat inside the car.

But was she wanting stay in Malhotra mansion?

I got into the car and drove to Malhotra mansion. We got down the car. I looked at her and she had a huge smile on her face. What was she up to.

" cabir tum gao... I'll just come. "she said. I noded and went inside.

I saw Dhruv, Mukti and Alya were talking and Manik was tunning his guitar.
Manik saw me and came up to me.

" Nandini?"he asked.

Maniks POV .

Just then a girl holding a few bags entered. My eyes widened as I realised it was Nandini. Cabir was right she has changed a lot. Her looks, attitude everything. I was stunned.

"Nandini... Tum yaha? "Mukti asked who was equally shocked.

Nandini smiled.

" hey Mukti... Kyu nahi Aa sakti? After all yeh Mera ghar hai . Jab tak mein Mrs Malhotra hoon tab tak yeh hi Mera ghar hai. "she said looking at me.

" Hi Alya... Hey Dhruv... "she wished them them. Alya looked away while Dhruv smiled at her.

She looked at me and talked towards me.

" kaka kaise hai app? "she asked, I turned back and saw kaka standing behind me.

" mein theek hoon Bhittiya... "he said while she smiled at him.

" kaka will please keep my bags in my room? "she said and went towards her room.

She didn't even talk to me. She ignored me compete.

" what was that? "Alya asked looking at Cabir.

" kya? Why are you looking at me? She wanted to stay here after all she is Mrs. Nandini Manik Malhotra.. Ek number ki ziddi hai.. Anyways mhuje bahot kaam hai... I have to go.. Mukti chal I will drop you. "Cabir said playing with his car eyes. Mukti and Cabir left.
After some time Dhruv and Alya left as well.

All I could think was 'Nandini'.

we need to talk.. Par kaise..? I was hesitant to tak to her. But I had to. I had to ask her forgiveness.

I decided I should. I was about to go to her room, when I saw her come out of her room. She was wearing a cream colour top and a skinny jeans pant. Her hair was tied into a messy bun.

She looked simple yet beautiful. Wait? What was I thinking? I composed my self and took a deep breath.

"Nandini... We need to talk."i said.

She looked at me for sometime and then came up to me and crassed my face. Her touch had a different effect on me now.

"kya baat Karni hai? 6 months ke baad...I will be living life and you yours. Toh jo bhi baat Karni Ho toh... Abhi Karlo."she srimked.

What did she mean by that?

"Nandini I am really sorry.. Main janta hoon miene tumhare saat bahot bura Kiya... Please forgive me. "

She smiled and put her hand around my neck.

" don't be Manik... Agar tuhm kase nahi karte... Toh mein kabhi wapas US nahi jati. Mein Dr. Nandini kabhi nahi ban pati. "she said.

What was she saying?

She brought her lips dangerously close to mine. My heart started beating fast. What is happening to me. Our lips almost touched each others

" thank you... "she said against my lips while I closed my eyes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
wow..update was awesome...
is she giving hint about divorce..?????
pls continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

wow..update was awesome...
is she giving hint about divorce..?????
pls continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm


its my pleasure diii lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
wow interestin wats nandu upto!!!
longer updates pls!!!!
Par itersting u left us in a cliff hanger!!!
update jaldi pls!!!
lov u
Aresha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
itna chotu sa
six months ke bass divorce hone wala hai kya
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
wonderful update...loved it...
is she reminding him of divorce...
plz continue soon...when u will update ur other ff ???

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