MaNan FF::Reflection:: Chapter 4(7/5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Di...your tickets have been booked."Karan said as he handened me the filgt tickets.
"Thank you Karan."I said smiling as Karan left the room.

God!I had been waiting for this day from the past 8 years. Finally it has arrived.Soon all my desires will come true.
I went through his profile.seeing his pictures my anger knew no bounds.
"It's payback time Darling. Now you'll go through all the pain I have been going through for 8 long years."I said shutting down my laptop.

I went near the window."Im coming back Manik,Coming back in your life to make it hell. Manik Malhotra I'm coming back..wait for me... Cauz darling I'm a nightmare dressed like a daydream ."

A/N:Ok, I know this was shit but I just got and the idea and thought of torturing you guys 😆. On a serious note, should I continue guys??
If I continue,I can't update on regular basis as my exams as going on and I already have another ongoing MaNan FF(you belong with me.) So guys pls let me know how this was. Criticism is most Welcome.

For PMs buddy me(ToralRas)

Cheers
Sachact.

Part 1 - pg 4
Part 2 - pg 6
Part 3 - pg 8
Part 4-pg 12

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manan58 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😃oh my.. nandu mei manik ka bhoot ghusa dia tumne toh.. hhahah.. koi bt nh.. i m lovin it..
cont for sure.. bt i wnt tht u focus on ur othr ff u belong wth me.. coz i luv tht more.. sry..
😉😆
cutie345 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice strt. ...bt plzz cntinue ur othr ff i.e " u belong with me " 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww a new FF , congrats dear ! ... wish u could update regularly , even once a week would be ok...do write more plz , thanks !
Edited by Zoya_09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful start...
Thanks for the PM..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It so much sounds like my only FF😆
😃 guess you don't know it... But I am really interested...

Sana
Edited by MaNanmatic_Sana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice idea plz continue it soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratzzz...👏
continue soon...seems interesting...😊
take care...
thanks a lot for the pm...🤗
ushmaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please continue..
nandu to take revenge?
eager to know...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls cont n do cont u belong with me!! I m also a bg taylor swift fan d above line dressed lyk a nightmare iz of blank space right??

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