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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
RES need to read two updates
y these be soo chotu chotu saa
i want to read more haan
ny coming to the story i luved ur latest update manan talks
manik asking nandini call him M and tellin that they won't b strangers
nd ur pov of nandini be the best her monologues abut manik❤️
continue soon dear😃
Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: aavani

wow...u updated...
part I was perfect...especially manan talks...he wants her to call him M...wow 😉
loved nandu's P.O.V regarding M and Manik...😊
pls try to continue asap dear...
eagerly waiting to read more...

and thanks a lot for this part...😃
love u ..❤️...take care🤗


Avni sweety u b d 1st... 😆 Well from many days I wanted Nandu 2 call Manik M.. full filing my desires.. I lov u 4 ur awsm cmmnt... Jaan laa diya.. M updating 1 more part now..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
This part is dedicated 2 my sweetest frns Avni nd Arya,,.. whose I m d backup..😆 My lovlies 4 u...

Part-J


"They call you Nandini? No nickname?"

M's deep voice cut short Nandini's musing.

"Uh, yes. No. I mean no nickname; just Nandini." She stared at him blankly, trying to think of some innocuous chitchat but utterly failing to do so. Normally social repartee was her forte. In fact, sometimes Navya teased that Nandini was too quick on uptake, too pat with her responses, making "mere mortals," as Navya put it, feel decidedly at a disadvantage. Now it was Nandini who felt at a disadvantage.

The line moved forward by a foot, thereby saving her from the immediate necessity of saying anything at all putting her into action. However, as soon as she took one step forward, she found herself once again standing silent, with nary a word to say to the man directly behind her.

"Its so restful to be around a woman who can keep her mouth shut." M observed mildly, and startled black eyes swept up to be amused chocolate brown ones. The designated mouth opened, found it had no rebuttal, and closed, thereby causing a rich, deep chuckle to rumble up from M's chest.


Thnk u sweeties 4 ur comments nd dis update specially 4 my Arya nd Avni..❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
RES
unres
areyy waah me first 🥳
update as i always say ws superb
manik tryin to converse wid nandini be so cute😊
achaa he wants too her nickname so tat he call her by tat
nd u dedicatin i too luv u gal😳 nd kushi ke aason😆


Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving the updates... they are so cute together. The way he keeps trying to talk and the quiet appreciation and her reaction to him... lovely!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
oho ...my sweet heart...❤️
thanks a lot for this exclusive part-j 🤗
i am loving this ...seriously...loving this...😉

aww...M wants to knw our nandu's nick name...hmmm...😆

one more thing the line "Its so restful to be around a woman who can keep her mouth shut."
wow...its awesome...👏

pls continue soon meri jaan...u know that i am eagerly ...waiting for ur updates...

love u a lot...

thanks a lot for this dedication baby...😉

with love & kisses❤️
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I kno dis story cannot grab any attraction but i want dis to b s story which is not of my kind. I generally dnt wrile such a peaceful like dis 1.. dis is my 1st try on a story like dis.. hope it will soon win ur hearts..😊 I dnt loose hope generally..

Part-K


Nandini's mouth twitched. Actually, it was quite funny, this abnormal reticence on her part. "I was deciding whether to succumb to my natural urges and order rum chocolate and thereby incur your mother's wrath, or play it safe and have mocha," she lied smoothly.

"I personally have always felt it is a crime against nature not to succumb to one's urges," M said, moving up close behind her.

Standing slightly sideways, Nandini slanted a look up at him and caught a sober expression in his eyes. Upon noting her surveillance, he replaced it with his previous crinkly-eyed one.

"And as for my mother, don't let her autocratic veneer frighten you. Her bark is definitely worse than her bite."

"Oh, I'm not afraid of your mother," Nandini protested.

"No, I'll bet you aren't. Tell me, are you afraid of anything?" He looked suddenly serious again, making Nandini wonder if he had some special interest in her answer.


Sry 4 d short updates but m usin my time more on Who m I.. along wid my brains..but do lov it too like dat 1😳

Mimi😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
though it is short...it is nice...keep on updating..i love ur work😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
part-K
mimi...baby...this story is really brilliant...ok...
am loving it...seriously...
especially Mr.M...😉 he is so interested to know about nandu...hmmm 😆

this sentence...Her bark is definitely worse than her bite."

wow...yaar so perfect for nyonika...😉

so pls continue soon...take care ❤️

with love
aavani
Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Keep updating this also.. It's gud..
Bt focus on who I am..😆

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