The Rare Gem- ONE Part-L uploaded - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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again...wow..part c ..loved it...especially loved navya and nandu bonding...waiting for our hero's entry...😉

pls continue soon dear...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read all the chapters in one go ... Loved it..pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-D

"...and you're a gourmet cook to boot. I can't stand you!" Navya said with mock vehemence.


"So I like to eat good food." Nandini started to defend her hobby, but at that moment Navya's shop assistant, a high school girl, poked her head through the curtains. "There's a lady out here who wants to talk to you about one of the drawings."

"I'll be right back," Navya promised Nandini as she rose to follow the girl into the shop. "Help yourself to more tea."

Nandini eyed her teacup dourly, almost wishing it held wine Navya has mentioned, although it was just as well there was only tea in it. It wouldn't do for her to get tipsy, especially when she have to drive her three months old car to Navya's later. She might have to sell it if she was going to continue indulging herself in luxuries-like paying the rent, eating, and fending off numerous fanged creditors.

Then as she reached, grimacing, for the hot water, the curtains were swished aside once more. This time Navya had two people in tow. The first was a lady walking with the aid of a cane. The woman looked to be in her late forties, early fifties, had a beautiful bone structure. Her hair is black, perfection which indicated a woman with both the time and the money to have regular beauty appointment each week. Nandini fought down the urge to rake her fingers through her thick cascade of black hair, which she was sure resembled a rat's nest. She could thank the wind whipping off the bay as she entered Ghirardelli Square for that.


Guys Manik is entering in d nxt part.. Keep tuning 2 know wat Nandu think about him at first sight.. will update soon.. Exams FINISHED!!!😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-D was awsome ...loved it...
pls continue soon...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As no 1 is liking my update much here 1 more update goes,,,

Part-E

..., which she was sure resembled a rat's nest. She could thank the wind whipping off the bay as she entered Ghirardelli Square for that.

Instantly the elderly woman sized Nandini up even as she returned her scrutiny. Nandini sighed mentally as she realized how she must look to this chic woman. She had dressed for a day of messy work at studio, donning tight-fitting faded jeans and a madras blouse.

While the newcomer, on the other hand wore a mint green dress of severe design, little white spectator pumps, and only a cocktail ring of tiny seed pearls and an emerald. The whole package was impressively understated but wealthy.

While Nandini checked off her own failings compared with the elderly woman's impeccable ness and found herself diminutive to her, the second form moved into her range of vision. It was a man of such height he actually had to duck to get through the curtains without knocking the rod right off the door frame. He was lean, had a tough build body, white like chalk and his face resembled like some Greek Gods. The features of his face held the beauty of the serenity of nature. And Nandini felt like she had seen the most handsome guy of all the guys she met till date. But like the woman in front of him, he was dressed in a manner announcing a well-padded wallet: denim jeans with black suit and a black shirt inside it of which top two buttons were open, with neat square-toed boots pecking out from under them. What? Nandini thought fancifully, no watch? In place of that so many wrist bands.

But what snared Nandini's attention most were the deep cheeky smile which was not leaving his face. That smile gave the proof this mouth was clearly no stranger to laughter. That hypothesis was borne out by good-humor lines also etched at the sides of two dark chocolate brown devilish-looking eyes. To top off his incredibly appealing good looks, was a crown of crisp, black hair which had spikes but not made with care which was giving a youth charm in his face, in kind that a woman's fingers could play in with total abandon.


here goes Part E😆😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Aww.. U described my manik sho beautifully girl..
Oh ho.. Dnt worry.. I m likin ur updates so dnt worry.. N keep updating..
U write so well😃😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Aswm update

But too chotu chotu updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
nyccc update I likes manik's structure
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
hey di me chicky! i read all ur stories and they are wow!!
Keep updating they r awesome.
I cant comment daily but i m reading all works of urs regularly and i think there are many more like me
so dnt get diheartened and keep updating.
U really r a fabulous writer..ur discriptions,the way u etch the cheracters .. All of it is just beauty.. Pure beauty..
Keep writing
:) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
You r a fabulous writer...! You describe your characters so well that I could just visualize them👏
Loved each & every update & waiting for many more soon, please continue...

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