MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110 - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
such a senti update update happy ending love it
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m crying mummma... update soon samjhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
koi mere aasu roko 😭
manik was soo awww
i luved ur update sooo fantastic one
hope u r fine nw
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Posted: 10 years ago
AREE WAH..👏
SUCH EMOTIONAL AND HEARTLY UPDATE..😭
and according to the promise..plz update next part soon..😃
n thanx for the P.M.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
i just luved it
u wrote about manan so beautifully
yaar ur ff is so addictive update soon
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u write so awesome yr
loved manan convo
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awesome update..
cont. soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
mast writer!
u wrote d emotions so well in short! I love ur pace!
dusri update jaldi laa...wait karr karrke thak gayi mai!
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AT BUS-

Nandini was sittin alone nd suddenly manik jumps in nd sit with

NANDINI- rises her eyebrow

MANIk-wat merimarzi I want to sit here

NANDINI-huh!! Fine nd turned nd smiled lightlg so tat manik doesn't see it

AT CLASS

Mukti nd nandini were sitting together

ABHI comes

ABHI-juice me culd move madam murthy naa the to be malhotra blinking eyes to manik

NANDINI-wat rubbish v r just friends

ABHI-haan just friends aap haatege toh mai mere darling kuch biology karlete

MUKTI-wat!!!

ABHI-mera matalb biology padenge u kno chi chi mukti ji aap toh meri biwi jaisi hai

MUKTI-threw the bottle on his face -hw culd yaar raghav mujhe iss torture ke saath baitha raha hai

NANDINI-got up nd ws goin to seat with navya

MANIK-whistle hello madam kaha I think I aap bhul gayi hai ki aap humre saath baitengi

NANDINI-(knew but she wanted manik himself to call her to sit beside him)haatoo

RAGHAV's CLASS

Raghav-kya baat aaj ghumne nhi gaye aap dono

MANIK-no sir aaj mood nhi tha

RAGHAV-shut up here it goes u guys have surprise test

ABHI-sit seedhe sade inform test mai hi hume marks nhi aate aap surprise te

RAGHAV-hume nhi ABHI tumhe marks toh shayad book saamne rakhne baad bhi nhi aayenge

ABHI-answer key saamne hoo toh aajenge sir itna toh talent hai sir

RAGHAV-issiliye tumhe mukti ke saath baitha ya sikho use

ABHi-murmurs sikhaye toh sikhe naa

Test starts

ABHI -sshh shhh mukti dikhna

MUKTI-no ways khud kar

NAVYA-yaar iska kyaa tha yaad nhi aa raha

ALYA-shhh navya batna

NAVYA-mujhe khud yaad nhi aa raha

MANIK- oxytocin hai uska answer

NANDINI-nhi FSH hai

MANIK-arey kal tumne hi toh kaha tha oxytocin hai

NANDINI-maine kaha tha

MANIK-coming close to nandini haan dikhoa tumne oxytocin nhi likha

NANDINI-(nandini gets lost nd notice tat manik tricked her was copyin from her she)rite oxytocin haan abhi baatati hoon was abut to shout ss *haaa* MANIK kissed her on the cheek

MANIK-shout shout naa

NANDINI dumbstruck

Trinng sumbit ur paper s

Games period -yaa nyonika finally after a month allowed our games period

Everyone was headin too ground suddenly manik pulled nandini nd took her too the back stair

NANDINI-tum mere baat ko kuch zayada hi seriously le li I guess tum toh ek sec ke liye bhi akela nhi chod rahe

MANIK- holds her hand ek step chado

Nandini- wat

MANIK-chadoo nd nandini climbs .achaa abhi bhi set nhi ho raha (measuring the height wid his hand )

Nandini-manikkk u r such a jerk

MANIK-pulls her onto him nd slowly pins her to the wall -achaa toh mai jerk hoon (in husky voi

NANDINI-whisper manikk woh

MANIK-mm nandini woh moves closer

NANDINI-again gulping the saliva down says manik

-WOULD U PLZ DO THE HONOURS WE R WAITING

MANAN snap out nd notice dhruv,alya ,cabir ,navya,mukti ,abhi standin on upstairs

Nandini nd manik tryin ever possible wave to escape nandini runs upstairs alya blocks the way

MANIK-dhruv mere bhai tu bhi hai yaha

CABIR-manik tera baap bhi hai idar saale dhruv khud ki show karne aaya tha tune use hi show dikhaa di

Dhruv-saale pitna hai tujhe

CABIR-nhi toh tu alya ke saath padhne aaya tha idar

MANIK TRIES TO ESCAPE WEN cabir nd dhruv were arguing

ABHI-arey Imran hashmi kaha jaa rahe hoo

ALYA-nandu tune hume nhi baatya haan chori chori chupke chupke

NANDINI-arey alya aisa kuch nhi we

CABIR- wait wait hum batate

abhi ,mukti,navya and cabir in unison says-"we r just friends "

Suddenly whistle blows

CABIR-kisne bajayi bhai

MUKTI-PT wale ne shouts escape

Girls gang were in 11-c nd boys gang was in 11-b

ALYA-batna kabse

NANDINI-alya sach mein there is nthng goin on

MUKTI-acha toh aapka kya manik ki aarti uthar rahi thi waha

ALYA-aarti nhi mukti kuch aur uthar deti lol

NAVYA-arey chup raho acha batao usnee tumhe propose kiya

NANDINI-yehi toh mai keh rahi hoon ki nhi kiya abhi tak

ALYA-wat

MUKTI-aur tune use kiss kiya

NANDINI-nhi kiya yaar mai use kiss

ALYA-karna bhi mat without commitment haa boys bade chalu hote

NAVYA-dhruv bhi chalu hai

ALYA-nhi dhruv toh bhut sweet pata use kitne sweetly kaha

NANDINI-helooo meri baat abhi

ALYA-haan acha see pehli baat one arm distance aur inko zayada importance nhi dena cahiye

Try to avoid them

NANDINI-r u sure its quite hard to ignore him

MUKTI-ohooo

BOYS gang

Cabir-saale kaun se base pe hai tu first base tu par karli hogi ab tak

MANIK-cabir aisa kuch nhi hai v r just friends

DHRUV-so u didn't even propose her

MANIK-nhi

CABIR-usse kiss karde who samjh jaayegi

DHRUV-cabir don't give wrong suggestion

CABir-arey isko sambhal haan manik tujhe iski suni hai yaa meri abhi bata

MANIK-iski

CABIR-manikkk ye sune se pehle mai maar kyun nhi gaya

PRECAP-

Whose suggestion do manan follow wat happens next. will they confess ?? stayed tuned

nd fun coming

phew!! as promised here is the second update though its just ok wala update but bear it and plz hit like nd drop in ur comments as its fun reading them
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh yay.. I m first
Awesome update..
Lts c whose suggestion they ll follow😆
Superb cont soon😃
Edited by manan58 - 10 years ago

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