MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

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really sorry culdn't update today as i was not feeling well from yesterday nd culdn't write the chapter
i know i left u all in clif hanger but for compensation tommroww i wuld update two parts .
Niya warning yaad hai mujhe but ws really not well so culd update .
and thanks to all who comments (dhariya ,mimi,natashaaa, manan58 etc.) and wuld pakka wala update tommrow


it's okay!
writer rest karr n jaldi theek ho ja!
Teri story se itna pyaar hai, tese to thoda bohot hoga hi!
get well soon! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Take care of urself.. Dnt worry..
V people cn wait..
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaayie 2 parts 2morrow..
and take care ..get well soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

NOTE-

really sorry culdn't update today as i was not feeling well from yesterday nd culdn't write the chapter
i know i left u all in clif hanger but for compensation tommroww i wuld update two parts .
Niya warning yaad hai mujhe but ws really not well so culd update .
and thanks to all who comments (dhariya ,mimi,natashaaa, manan58 etc.) and wuld pakka wala update tommrow



get well soonn... nd update soon..😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
take care and get well soon
manik ke jhappis and pappis 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Really guys ur get well soon got me well so soon soo here it goes todays first update

Nandini just turns nd rushes into her room

MANIK goes behind and knocks at the door

Manik-nandini open kya hua just tell may be I can help

NANDINI-just goo manik plzz( starts cryin sittin head rested to the door )

MANIK-(understood she was cryin nd manik too sat down beside the door) -nandini dost manti hona mujhe toh kya itna layak nhi samjhti ki tum apni problem share nhi kar sakti.

NANDINI-manik I just don't desrve nyones frdnship manik wen I can't even be a help to them wen they r need.wen I can't protect them and understand their situation.iam not a gud frdn manik

MANIK-wat who said this to u aisa kuch nhi hai

NANDINI-tum jaante kya hoo mere bare mai manik

MANIK-mujhe pata hai ki tum aisi nhi hoo tumare bas mai hota toh tum kabhi bhi kuch galat hone na doo

NANDINI-manik I can't I just cant maths se related har baat mujhe ye ehaas dilate hai ki she left me I culdn't protect her manik no one believed me sabhi sirf tumare ache waqt mai saath dete hai I begged for justice to sujata

Manik-nandini kya hua sujata ke saath nandini bolo mujhse kya hua

NANDINI-manik sujata was the only person I treasured .pagal si she luved maths pagal thi who maths maniac.she was going through soo much nd I culdn't support her .

FLASHBACK

MATHS XAMS-

NANDINI-hey maths geek sab padh ke aayi hai na

SUJATA-mer padhne ka kya fyada

NANDINI-tujhe ho kya gaya hai aajkal u behave so weirdly

XAM HALL

Nandin was sittin parallel to sujata

Trilok sir came he was our invigilator

Nandini was writin xam nd noticed trilok continuously starin at sujata nd it wsnt giving her gud vibes

Nd she thot noo ways it our teacher

Nd btw exam nandini saw

trilok sir bent nd near sujata's ear- u don't need tooo write tumhe toh bus who karna jomai kahu

Nandini -saw it she saw tears escaping from sujata and he left sayin tat

NANDINI-sshhh sujata sujataa

SUJATA was sitting blank she didn't even write her name on the answer sheet I knew tat her parents wuld lash her out if she scored low so before anyone culd notice nandini exchanged their paper nd

Wrote her name on sujata's paper nd sujata said noo give it back nandini don't do tis

TRINGGG

NANDINI-sir paper

SUJATA - ran out of the classroom

I went behind her sujata tell me yaar wats happening u don't need to suffer

SUJATA- go away wat I didn't want happened today

NANDINI-watt

SUJATA-I never want to drag u into tis mess I wnt u to stay far away from tis

NANDINI-wat sujata

SUJATA-just goo nandini .tumhe kya lagta its easy to go against a reputed teacher he would spoil ur career tooo stay away nandini

NANDINI-sujata listen

The next day I get shock of my life sujata left her house nd her parents

I culdn't even handle the pain I culd even believe wat happened to me I was shattered I felt as my world just finshed.i kno y sujata went to protect me she went she wen far away .she even think tat I culd help her nooo

The next day was results

I got 35 out 100 in maths nd was a shock to many tat it was the first it happened

I went to trilok -

NANDINI-wat did u do wid sujata

TRILOK-mind u r words nandini wat wuld I do wid sujata

NANDINI-aap aise kaise kar sakte hai who apko kitna maanti thi she is ur damn student

TRILOK-uska mu band nhi raha jaate tumhe baat ke gay aapni frdn ko phaas sa ke gayi

NANDINI-just shut up it's a criminal act .she is just 14 year old hw culd even think

TRILOK-14 year acha tum log boyfriends banate ho who bhi 14 years mai who galat nhi

NANDINI-mai aapki complaint karungi

TRILOK-zaarur kariyega hum bhi dekhge tumari dost ne

PRINCIPAL-wat!! Rubbish nandini murthy is this a way u talk abut u r teacher just becoz u scored less

I am ashamed u .u need some counsellin

NANDINI-culd believe the principal who use to support is now sayin such

NANDINI went to her frdns nd classmates they went -maarna hai pagal hogayi issi frnd jo kisi ke saath bhaag gayi

Some of the common frdns of their-yaar who fail kardega humee

Nandini that day lost hope she understood y sujata never came out nd said anything it ws better to live in the hope tat if tey knew tey wuld hve supported than the reality tat they don't care.

After few she saw newspaper nd saw this trilok being caught for molesting school girls

FLASH BACK ends

NANDINI-sujata went through so much pain tat she culd even share .i wasn't there I should have understood .i lost her I even don't kno whether she is alive or not it has two years that she has been missing

NANDINI-tot if her parents too didn't support it wuld hurt her so its better to live in hope of expectation tan reality tat she never disclosed it too her parents.

MANIK- was also crying to knowing tat wat ws going through her dse days her constant struggle wid ws not with maths but her guilt tat she culdnot save sujata.

*CLICK*

Manik slowly opened the door to find nandini on the floor

Manik- went near nandini nd she hugged him tight nd she continued crying

MANIK-nandini tumne apne parents ko kyun nhi baatya

NANDINI-manik I never wnted to my last hope to be shattered so I believed agar unhone bhi aise react kiya toh main hi bardast nhi kar paungi nd I prefer to live in the hope tat agar I wuld have said they wuld hve done something

MANIK-(understood y she was so insecure about her frdns be alya or mukti being wid others )nandini tumhe kya lagta sujata kyun gayi thi just becoz she wnted tat tum apna career uske wajah kharab naa karo kya usse acha lage ki uski scarfice ka koi fayada nhi hua batau

NANDINI-par manik mujhe who yaad aati jab bhi mai book khulti hoon toh

MANIK-tumhe usse bhul ne ko kaun keh raha usse yaad karo ki kaise who chahti hai tum usske who sapne puree karoo jiske wajah se tumse who dur hui thi

Nandini-manik tum bhi mujhe chodke jaoge

MANIK-never mai todi jata hun tum hi toh bhaagti

NANDINI-tum mujhe kyun jhel rahe ho mai humesha tumhe marti rehti hoon,daanti rehti kabhi tumari help nhi ki phir bhi kyun y do come wen ever I need u

MANIK-who who nandini tum bhut royii ho goo take some rest chalo

NANDINI-no manik I want to know

MANIK shhh kept his finger on her lips time to bed nd uncle aunty r at my house soo I will inform them

Nd picks her up nd places on her bed nd he was gong to leave nandini hold his hand nd says -mujhe nhi pata y r u still bearing me but acha lagta wen u r wid me to bear my tantrums nd still come behind me .never leave me alone manik

MANIK smiles -sleep goo sleep nd goes out of the

MANIK-i too don't know y but I can't leave u even if I wnt too nandini I will make everyday special for u

PRECAP-

School romance nd confession tips to MANAN by their friends

AS I promised I will update two parts today tis was part one nd next would be fun filled wid cute romance hit like if u liked the chapter nd don't forget to drop in ur comments as a writer it encourages me me to put in more efforts.


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Posted: 10 years ago
aha I am first to comment
that was amazing girl... 👏 update soon waiting
Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭 m third... but nyway awsm update.. sujata nd trilok..burning issue of society... now a days..thnks 4 picking it up.. i really want 2 kick his ass!! Nd manik speechless why he won't leave her will take him near to the reality which he had not face till now!!😉 M there 4 ur backup...😆 Nd credits 4 dis is only nd only u..thnks 2 pick up d burning issue of now a days😃
Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow ..yaar...its awesome...u penned the emotions and manan talks so beautifully...love it...
flashback scenes with a social msg...amazing...👏

hope u r fine now...take care
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb.. Soo good.. I just loved each n evry part
Manik will nvr leave her nw.. Great..
I m soo happy..
Cont soon.. Waiting

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