Ff: Manan hell and heaven with you part 12 pg 25

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

awsome part...
manbir fight...😲
pls continue soon...take care
thanks for the pm dear...😊

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

loved both the updates

cont soon

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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Amazing Update..
Manik got to know that Fab5 didn't trust him too..
I hope soon Manik will realize that he is hurting both of them..

OMG Manik hugged Nandu..

Continue Soon

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sanya0612

@sanya0612

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Plz continue soon n it's damm interesting n manan hug looking forward to it

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8seetha

@8seetha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Part 8 ( dedicated to Kriti)

He comes to his senses so he pushes her.

Manik : I hate u Nandini. Before I do anything wrong leave from here.

Suddenly they hear princi voice who is speaking in a mike.

Hello everyone you know very well the holi is coming so this year we will play holi in the college. So for tomorrow all have to come in white.

Manik sees in tears on Nandini's face. She takes her bag and steps out.

Manik POV : Usko kya waa yaar?

He starts to play but Nandini's sad face makes him crazy.

He stops and leaves the college.

All students are in white.

Manik is searching for Nandini in eyes.

He hears Kavya conversation.

Navya : Kabir tell me idea that I can make her come out and play with us.

Kabir : Say first why she hates holi.

Navya : Because when she was little.

her parents invited a lot of people for holi. She loved very much holi until her parents dead.

Kabir : Oh this is the reason.

Kabir sees Manik going in the college.

Kabir to Navya : Hogaya hamara plan. See her monster will convince her.

Navya : But just imagine if they have an argument.

Kabir : No not today kyu ki Manik loves holi.

Manik sees Nandini in tears.

Manik : Partner ko kya waa?

Nandini : Leave me alone Manik. I am not in mood to talk with you or to fight with you.

Manik takes some red color and is about to put on her face.

But Nandini's stops him : I hate to play holi Manik.

Manik : But I love to play holi as dirty game.

Manik puts some red color on his cheeks.

Nandini : Don't u dare Manik to touch me with color.

Manik smirks at her. He steps toward her while she steps back. She pins herself on the wall. He holds the wall. And touches her cheeks with his.

He is still closed to her.

Manik holds her hand : Lets celebrate holi in my way.

Nandini : No Manik please leave me.

She pushes his hand.

But he carries her outside.

Kabir is going to the toilet when he sees Dhrulya kissing each other.

Kabir runs to Navya.

Navya : What happened?

Kabir : Ali... Aliya is kissing Dhruv.

Navya : What tum pagal ho kya?

Kabir : I swear.

Navya : Stop it yaar. And see our love birds.

They look Manan.

Manik : U loved to proove ur love naa. So drink this.

Nandini : No I don't drink.

Manik : So u don't love me.

Nandini takes the glasses and drinks it.

Manil also drink. He sees Kabir and is sad.

Nandini in drinking state : Don't worry Manik today ur Kamini will speak to u.

She comes to Kabir and takes his hand.

Kabir : Leave my hand Nandini.

Nandini : First before give him a hug.

Kabir : Nandini.

Nandini makes an angry face.

Kabir : Tikk mere maa.

Manik embraces Kabir.

Kabir : Manik tum ko kya waa yaar.

Manik : I missed u so much. He gives him a kiss.

Nandini yells : Manik!!

Manik and Kabir sees her.

Nandini : It's not fair u kissed him not me.

Kabir laughs on her statement.

He takes a pipe and waters Manan.

Navya puts a song "balam pichkari".

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0WtRNGubWGA

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi

Mere ang raja, jo tera rang laga

Toh seedhi-saadi chhori sharabi ho gayi

Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai

Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya

Itna maza, kyun aa raha hai

Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya

Dugna nasha, kyun ho raha hai

Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya

Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi

Manchali chaal kaise nawaabi ho gayi, toh?

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Teri kalaai hai, haathon mein aayi hai

Maine maroda toh lagti malaai hai

Mehenga padega ye chaska malaai ka

Upvaas karne mein teri bhalaai hai

Ho bindiya teri mehtaabi ho gayi

Dil ke armaanon mein behisaabi ho gayi

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Kyun 'no-vacancy' ki, hothon pe gaali hai

Jabki tere dil ka kamra toh khaali hai

(kamra toh khaali hai...)

Mujhko pata hai re

Kya chahata hai tu

Boli bhajan teri

Neeyat Qawwali hai

Zulmi ye haazir-jawaabi ho gayi

Tu toh har taale ki aaj chaabi ho gayi, toh?

Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari

Toh seedhi saadi chhori sharaabi ho gayi

Haa, Jeans pahen ke jo tune maara thumka

Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi (x2)

Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi

Haan, bole re zamana kharabi ho gayi...

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

u wrote about holi...loved it ..loved it..😳

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Yipee... u wrote about holi...[:D/]
also u used d precap concpt of manik putting colour on nandini by his face...awww...
And u gave us a drunk nandini...
3 dhamakas in one packet...
i am so lovin it...
u r d best...
lov u...

Edited by aairahahmad - 10 years ago

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

yayieee my fav song
love u 4 this holi seg.I hope u will more spices in next part

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

oye sun na next part me kuch hot hot ho jaye wat say???

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8seetha

@8seetha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
oye sun na next part me kuch hot hot ho jaye wat say???

mere pagal nat i am first waiting for ur part 1 of ur ff. When will u give to me?😕😕

Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago

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