Ff: Manan hell and heaven with you part 12 pg 25

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Manik says to nandu that I can't live with u, or without u as well. I will make ur life hell.
Nandini : you bring it on, we will see who will win : my hope or ur hatred.
Nandini : Best of luck Manik.
Manik : I don't need.
She leaves with tears.
Kabir comes to Manik : So Manik Malhotra become and classical musician since when?
Manik : Why I can't?
Kabir : Yaar u can't play with her carrer.
Manik : Why not?
Kabir sees his face he seems very serious.
Manik : I can do whatever I want.
Kabir : It's better so stop it warna...?
Manik holds his neck : Otherwise what?
Kabir ejects his hand : Don't think u can do anything and I will stay silent.
Manik : Tum mudje damki derihoo.
Kabir : Yes stay away from her or u will lost me forever u can choose.
Kabir continues : Nandini always support u in ur carrer, issliye when Khurana blackmailed her she was ready to go away.
Manik : I don't care she has to feel my pain.
Kabir : What pain naan, no one in this college has her pain ok did u lost ur parents, ur voice brother...? U know even I think u killed in anger Soha because u are an animal who can't control his anger. So don't play with her. If u continued I will not leave u now.
Kabir walks away while Manik is shocked.

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wow seeta it was simply superb
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wow...amazing yaar...beautiful start...pls continue soon...cabir...just awsome...thanks a lot for the pm...😊
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hooo its so nice angry and caring cabir...nice seetha...continue...
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itna chotu sa update but cabir guy I really like u but less than seethu continue soon
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Amazin start ,do write more plz 😊
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congo for the new story
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Oh it ws superb. Cabiraa.. I luv him
Cont soon
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awesome start cont soon if possible plz pm me
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start with a twist... I'll feed you twister for that😉
Love the start...❤️ Make a tender magical wala again...

Now go and read my new one😡

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