Main karun intejaar tera........ manan OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its my frst attempt to write something about our beloved MANAN.. I m not so good in words bt yet could not stop myself to penning down my emotions bout Manan...
i m watching d show frm vry 1st day n nw i m obsessed bout MANAN... my days r strted wth thm n ends wth their thoughts.. evn they r haunting in my drmss tooo😉...



Main karun intejaar tera...

Nandini was siting alone in jamm room waiting for pandit jii n his "new sishya" her very own MONSTER MANIK MALHOTRA..she was very upset on her for everything happened in their lives(her n MANIK'S).. She just wanted to clear the mess from their lives but it wont b possible any more coz "kuch galti wo ki maffi nehi hoti"...then see saw d guitar lying over therr n started playing...

Main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Nandini was thinking bout their frst meet,Then tht famous punch to the SPOT girl phase to suddenly Manik's arrival to her house front yard due to Cabir's secrete..n then their sudden first HUG.. tht hug broke d barrier of uneasiness n changed d equation btwn them..it was d frst step towards eachother.. then d diwali night to their first KISS... It was a very simple bt passionate kiss...kiss which melted two hearts,,n turn two individuals into inseparable One...
jaan meri...
jaan meri...


She was thinking how they came toward each other though they were belongs to two very different poles.. Opposite attraction works n they came very close to each other..How they always met behind d music wing n how he used to caresses her face her hair n made her all shy..They were not like d normal couple. their bond was different which made them unique. Her simplicity innocence drag him out of the darkness to light.. His unconditional tender care made her life secure n beautiful.. They were so different but ONE. SHE was his STAR which shines for him n protect him.. N he was her guardian angel..

Mere dil ne chun liayaa ne...
Tere dil diyaan raahan...

Mere dil ne chun liayaa ne...
Tere dil diyaan raahan...
Tu jo mere naal ture ta...
Turpe meriyaan saaha...
Jeena mera... hoye...
Hun hai tera, te ki main karaan...

But then they were forced to go apart due to some misunderstandings.. but their unique bond again drag them together forgetting all d misunderstandings.. But again life played a cruel game with them n they had to go apart..Nandini's one wrong step,,one wrong statement ruined every good thing between them.. The bond, the uniqueness of trust was manipulated. She was confused and he was devastated.. He was shattered when he came to know that she had that lack of trust on him..on Them..
Nandini asked for forgiveness for zillion times..She plead to pardon her mistake but Manik was too hurt to forgive.. He totally broke down..He was in his shock for life...

Tu kar aitbaar mera...
Main karoon intezar tera...
Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri...
jaan meri...
jaan meri...

Main tenu samjhawan ki...
Na tere bina lagda jee...


The main base of their unique relationship was TRUST.. But Nandini's doubt broke Manik's trust. Her effortless thinking grabbed her towards him. She had now only tears and guilt in her heart.. GUILT..not to trust him..GUILT..not to protect him..GUILT..not to shine for him when he was in need of his Shining Star.. N now Manik was again went to darkness whole hardheartedly loosing every ray of his life.. bcz now his star did not trust him to shine for him..


Ve changa nahion keeta beeba...
Ve changa nahion k
eeta beeba...
Dil mera tod ke...
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan...
Ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan...
Naal tere jod ke...

Main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere bina lagda jee...

Now she can only wish k kash there was a shft+ctrl button to delete all d miseries from their lives n get back d trust all over again. Though it was difficult to earn d trust again but she wont stop fighting to gain it for them..bcoz their love is more strong than the hatred...
Sometime something should b left for the perfect time.. coz time can heal all pains..The emotion that can break your heart is sometimes the very one that heals it...

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intejaar intejaar aur kya hai yeh pyar...


pardon for typos n all suggestions n critics r open heartily welcome...
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice dear... Edit ur headin to OS Dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely fic
please write more
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks fr liking my frst try...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful os
loved it
very nicely written

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