MANAN FF: Hate to Love You: SE 1: Finale: Seg 2(24) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
awesome teaser.. waiting for the update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
I hate to love u too why yaar why u give me a perfect (like madhuri dixit style) teaser. It's awesome give the finale part part warna I'll 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
What a teaser , luved it !

Happy n sad at the same time , hope the endin will be worth the torture 😆

p.s.Plz start a new story soon...addicted to ur "crazy " thoughts n imaginations 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Hold you emotions... for the shootout of the season finaale... protect yourself to get your seena turned chalni...

Season Finale
Segment 1

SPACE---Famous Music Wing

Manik consumes with his eyes all of her face...her eyes... her lips...her nose...her ears without earrings ... she was in boy look after all... her arms feel harder... not like ever he remembers ...and her tears ...he moves his hand towards his face to to wipe them

But her hand catches his hands to stop...

Nandini: Let them be...

She feels his hands for a while... those long precious hand... then she wraps her hand around his neck and put a passionate kiss

Navya, Rohaan: 😲...

Navya hides Rohaan's eyes and take him away silently

Navya: Let's make sure none can interrupt them... finally

Rohaan still on shock

Navya: Rohaan ...

Rohaan: Awsome ...let me take a video

Navya: (hitting hi hard) kitne battamij ho tum...me bhi tumhara mam hu ///mere saamne...ok Let's make sure nobody disturbs

Rohaan : Okay Mam... Don't worry... music wing sir kaa fav place hai...har roj waha frm 7am he spends time...so no one will disturb...and I'll manage rest

Nandini breaks the kiss... Maniks eyes still close... he had no idea that kind of passion she can posses ...when he opens his eyes...his stare stick to her lips... the memorable lips... hauning him again... he cannot think straight

[imagine the overhelmed expression in jungle night before punch!!!]

Nandini: Manik...

Manik: I will never push you away again...

He pulls her again...And the most passionate make out happens...imagine ... feel... get burned

... ... ... ...

Manik feels a moment of relief... from the fear of rejection... but he had to apolozige for the promises "he" broke too...he puts some of her hair back from her face... she was right ...there is no point of wiping Tears today... let them be free...

Manik: Remember... I promised that I will never hurt you again

Nandini: yaa...after I said you can trust me... that was a turning moment for us... but I could not stick to it , I...

Manik: Shhh...please let me speak ...I... I hurt you once for dhruv, you forgave me... you taught me to control my anger... and I did not return forgiveness when you wanted it... but I am changed...I get it now all... it is not about whether you can do the expected... it is about intention... that...that should be judged not unwillingly mistakes... but I ...what I did ... I inflicted pain on you... intentionally ... you can do the same... (says with a puppy face) ... I deserve no mercy... I am ready to take any torture from you... any punishment...

Nandini's face turns hard... he looks at him...pushes him hard with hands on his chest ... and eyes on his lips...he is again amazed by her power... he hits his back now against the collapsible gate... And before he could take in the earlier amazement... she shocks him with punishment...

...

She attacks his lips... but this time with bites... as she turned into his lioness... And Manik ... as the prey... he let ler... he just lets her punish ... why did I push her away... his soul cries ... take it all out Nandini... all your despair...

he could not stop his crave to feel her arm skin... he tears the sleeves of the shirt she was wearing and reaches her arms... and it was feeling so different ... But he was not getting break to check them... Finally she stops and rests on his chest... he puts his arm around and holds her... they stay until the storm in there heart settles a little down...

Manik...being a bit back to senses

Manik: Sorry... your shirt...

Nandini:...hmmm

she finally notices...and breaks the hug...

Nandini: It's okay I have spares in my bag

Manik checks her arms

Manik: do you...

Nandini: yaa... I have kept myself busy with many hobbies... like working out... I should change

Manik: yaa...

Nandini: I'll be back

Manik: Listen... let me show you my office bathroom...

Nandini: okay

They start walking together... they finds navya and Rohaan on the way...

Navya and Rohaan are so enjoying the state of the duo...they notice her teared cloth and blood in his lips...they can imagine what happened...she knows this time it's not punch that caused blood

Rohaan: (not missing the best moment in life to tease his boss...)Sir ...you need medical attention

Manik: What? What are you talking about...

Rohaan: you have blood here sir ... (he indicates lips)

(checking his lips... smirks... Nandini blushingly looks ... ManiKagain put a cold face...)

Manik: Shut up...

They reach the office and Manik shows him the bathroom...and she enters...

Rohaan: Sir if you are fine... should I call misraji... I told him you are at private meeting to sent hi away ...

...

take a break


Massage: This is not where I planned to stop the finaale... but to your misfortune I am not feeling physically well... I am not sure when I can write again... but I want you to have up to this...

so the finaale is not over... I plan to continue the rest of part 11 in this post not a new one..

and only those who comment...I'll take they read this seg and will get a PM

Edited by Manan_aRMAAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Very Well Written...Take Care And Will Wait To Read The Full Finale Update..Thank You For The PM...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
wow...awsome loved it... will wait for the full part...
get well soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
wow...this is awesome..loved it dear...great one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
thanx for the pm... nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
awesome update..
cont. soon.
N tc😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
lovely update wow nandu in sherni mode update soon

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