MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read all parts in one go... just fabulous...cntue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai guys ., im back again with a small update. sorry if u r getting bored with this ff..

PART: 6


Recap: Manik watched nandinis performance n when he tried to speak to her he was stopped by a lady called swathi.

Manik n swathi were outside the auditorium in the garden. Manik didnt know what to speak. He didnt even know if he can believe her or not.. She waited for him to speak up but he didnt respond she said " are u thinking if u can believe me or not..??". he was surprised by her question. he asked " How did u know..??" she just gave a smile and said" i dont know about u but I definetly know nandinis manik who would feel like that. She used to talk continously about u. you wouldnt know how much i wanted to meet. u."


Manik stood there in confusion. He thought for some time and asked " so where was she all these days n how do u know her..??" swathi went to a near by bench n gestured him to come n sit before answering " she was at pandit jis house all these days n the matter of how I knew her.." her words were cut short by maniks sudden roar." I knew it she wouldnt be careful about herself. What if he is a psycho. How can she believe him n go to his house..?? What should I do about this girl..??" Swathi got up n tried to calm him down." Hello romeo calm down. How can u even think that she was alone in pandit jis house..?? Do u think he doesnt have a family..?? He has a beautiful wife n a lovely daughter n for ur information He is not a psycho. n dont ever speak about him like that." Manik couldnt understand why she was becoming angry when he was speaking about pandit ji. he asked the same to her" y r u getting worked up when i speak about that pandit..??" swathi tried her best to control her anger n said " because im his wife. Im Pandit Trilok Chaurasia s wife ok..??"

Manik understood her anger n felt really awkward to speak to her now. Understanding his situation she spoke " ok ok leave all that so what do u want to know now..??" before he could speak anything his phone began to ring. its cabir. he answered the call. cabir asked him where he was. n if he was with nandini. he asked manik if they can also meet her. Manik said " no cabir not now.I didnt meet her yet but I will meet her soon then i will let you know. but for now u ppl just go home . we will pracice tomorrow" Cabir agreed n informed others. they were happy that now that nandini is back manik would become normal . after ending the call Manik looked at swathi n asked " What exactly happened..??"

so basically the next part will be about what happened in nandinis life all these days when she was away from manik. hope im not eating ur brains with these updates. n again please give me suggestions to improve.

Thank you.
Edited by chinni557 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Nice
Continue soon pls pls pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
] Nice tnx that you are updating it so soon .lovede it ...Continue soon pls 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE
so guys the reason for my fast updates are

I cant concentrate on my studies because of this ff n i have a very imp exam in 2 weeks. so wanted to complete it fast.

other reason is I wanted to portray the role of pandit ji as a role model n an ideal teacher. Being a classical dancer im a big fan of classical teachers whether its dance or music.I like their dedication n discipline. n in my opinion present society where there are lot of distractions for teenagers when ever they loose hope about their life its the duty of parents n teachers to show them the right path.. So i wanted to portray pandit ji like that. But as per spoilers if pandit ji turns out to be a creep (which unfortunately is also the present situation in society where we cant trust anyone) then I would definitely loose interest to write this ff. so before anything like that happens in the show i want to finish this ff.

Hope im making justice to my story. In my hurry to complete the ff I dont want to ruin the story in my mind. So please if u feel anything off about the ff please inform me.

thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Very nice update
Continue soon
And all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: namumananholic

Very nice update

Continue soon
And all the best for ur exams


Thank you so much😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice ff dear n very interesting. Update it whenever u feel like. Readers like me r hungry for more always. So no tensions on that part. :-)
All the best for ur exams :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: tanshita171

Very nice ff dear n very interesting. Update it whenever u feel like. Readers like me r hungry for more always. So no tensions on that part. :-)

All the best for ur exams :-)


thank you so much😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
wow loved both the parts
very nicely written👍🏼
continue soon
also all da best for ure exams

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