MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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longer ones i love reading...i want manan scenes the longest yaar😳 update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
actually iam longing for your updates full of Manan...
please continue soon

thank your for wonderful writing... loving it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update... loving it totally
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here goes the next update.
PART:4

Recap: cabir convincing manik to go to manglore.

Manik n cabir were making their plans to how to go to manglore. navya was listening to their discussions. she couldnt stay calm. she came to manik and said. " manik please dont go to manglore". cabir got really pissed. He shouted on her. " what do u think of yourself madhubala..?? u want ur friend happy right..?? she can be happy only with manik. even u know that so y r u stopping him now.?? If u dont want to help then do ur business and dont intefere.." but navya didnt listen to cabir. she said." im asking him not to go to manglore because i dont want to see him even more hurt." both of them couldnt understand her. They were silently listening to her. she continued saying " nandini is not there in manglore. I really dont know where she is. I called her many times after she went to manglore. but her phone was not reachable. n afterwards i took her ams number from chachi n even called her. but she said that nandini is not there in manglore n she went somewhere after leaving rishab there. but said only one thing where ever she is, she is safe n doing fine." maniks hope crumbled there itself. She went far away from him. he didnt what to do now.?? he just stood like a statue. Cabir was also in a shock. H didnt expect this from nandini.

Both manik and cabir were in a shock when navya spoke again. " But few days back i received a letter from nandini". n handed over the letter to manik. He took it with a trembling hands. Its his first time ever seeing a postal letter. He thought its so like old fashioned Nandini. there is no from address on the letter. He opened it and read

Dear Navya,
How r u.?? how is ur health..?? How is the baby..?? Im doing fine here. At present I cant tell u where i am due to some reasons which i will explain later.
U must be laughing seeing this letter right thinking who will write a letter in this modern age of technology..?? Manik would definitely mock me saying that... what can i do..?? I just want to pen my feelings. Cant help it. Im a old fashioned fool. How is manik..?? Is he fine..?? Is he still angry with me..?? I miss him Navya. I miss him to death. My heart stops everytime I think about him. But I cant stand hatred in his eyes for me. I ll definitely prove myself n come back to shine for him. I ll definitely bring back the smile n light into his life again. Its just a matter of time then v will be together.
Sorry now that i see I wrote about him only. Cant help it. I cant take him out of my mind. but i ll be back navya when my manik returns.
Take care of ur health n be nice to cabir. he is a good friend of mine and dont trouble him much.
bye
Yours
Nandini

Manik just sat on the couch reading the letter.Its a very brief letter but reading it He could feel how much she missed him. There are even tear smudges on the letter. He could see her trembilng words. he just sat quietely for sometime. cabir was getting impatient. He didnt know what nandini wrote n y his friend became silent. he waited for sometime n when he cant hold any longer he asked manik what this is all about.

Manik stood at once and said to cabir "Get ready n msg to all that we r going to meet mr Khurana. I ll prove to her that I ll always be nandinis manik. Im going to fulfill my promise and we will make this album." seeing the determined look on maniks face cabir felt really happy that his friend has finally returned. He messaged everyone. after getting ready they both went to Mr Khurana.

Fab 5 met Mr Khurana n agreed to his deal that they will give audition in week. Mr Khurana informed them that judges would be the same as last time n ask them to practice well as it is very hard to impress pandit trilok chaurasia

Fab 5 practiced with a lot of dedication this time as this is very important for each member. After 5 days of practice Panditji came to the jamming session of fab 5 to everyones surprise. He understood the awkwardness." Dont worry I dont want to disturb ur practice I just came to inform u guys about something. Im not an easy person to please. I want everything perfect. If u want to see my perfection I want u to come to a program of my student which is being held at national center of performing arts tomorrow." Manik got really angry listening to his words. he said " we are fab5 we dont take any examples. we set examples. n how the hell did u think we will agree to u n come to that program??" hearing manik pandit ji just gave a smile and said." u ll come infact u all should come or else u will regret it for ur entire life. Dont forget tomorrow evening at 6. dont be late. Im a very disciplined person n Dont forget that ur album is in my hands." saying this pandit ji left from there.

Manik was completely pissed off. He couldnt understand that pandit ji n his problem. Just one day before their performance he is asking them to come to some random program n even threatening about the album deal. Cabir tried to act cool n doesnt want to take any risks this time. so with great difficulty he managed to convince everyone to go to the program.

This is the update. Hope u ppl njoy it. Feel free to give suggetions.
I ll update the next part soon.

Thank you
Edited by chinni557 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is it Nandini? Bolo! Bolo! of course it is!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice...& its very nice that u update so quickly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😉😉

Originally posted by: faizaskhan

Is it Nandini? Bolo! Bolo! of course it is!!!!

To know that u will have to wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
awsome...i loved it yaar...u penned it so perfectly...love u so much for giving us such a beautiful ff.
dialogues...emotions...everything ..ohh...so amazing..pls continue soon...want to know who is performing ???? so pls continue soon...take care.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Wow ...that means Nandini is back...

loving it...plz update
dancing in joy🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
wow loved both the parts
very nicely written
continue soon

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