MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20)

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chinni557

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: navk
so beautiful

Thank you😊

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chinni557

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

😊

Originally posted by: babita_14388
superb, brilliant ...
really i really want this happen in ky2,,,,
amazing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

wow i wish in real serial also they show these type of scenes

bye for now

thank you for such lovely story

love sumi

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Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Beautiful and for a change.. Pandit is nice :p

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yams_ini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Wow such a lovely ff
Very emotional
I was literally crying by the end
Continue writn such stories

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Read the whole story in a go!!!

Seriously i expected nandini to leave to mang and manik to miss her, but didn't expect it to be this much painful, u have penned it brilliantly.

As usual i loved manan and fab5 like every other story, but one thing which was diff from other stories are, i really.. really liked pandit and his wife swati, very nice characters, guru should be like this.

Keep writing more like this.

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khadupam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Wow that was THE BEST PART
SOO many people in the forum wrote about this after effects of soha incident
But this is the best story line
I loved it

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asmi.6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

I really wish pandit Ji real story mei aise hote :(

Amazing work! 😛

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drnidsur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

finally i read the whole thing

it was osum harika ...i liked how u didnt make the pandit go ott..and yes ! the wait was worth for manik

it was cute

and diff , esp the pandit track ..keep it up girl 😳🤗

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musicalstars

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

loved ur ff...as i always wanted a track like this...where manik will realise of the consiquences of his anger n will realise that its not possible for him to hide his pain with anger as it will just worsen the things in his life...i always thought that if nandini suddenly disappears from manik's life then what will manik do...how will he react...thanks for this ff...it was awesome👏👏...please continue writting...

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